you son of a beach....why did i read that whole thing?....because it was fucking amazing....shit, you piece of shit...i was so submerged with the storyline, i didn't think at all you would throw that mother fucking twist in......then i was lik, SHIT BITCH.....i was kinda getting suspiscious with all the loving and shit before gr.10, haha, but seriously, this was a great OM, one of the best i've read, it was refreshing, because everything was positive and expressed so vividly......emotion = great....imagery = fuckin great storyline = son of a beach great, haha, flow was good to get into.....some lines were choppy but you stayed consistent, which is good...hang on, im a go find my fav lines........

I sat and wrote a poem, thought I was writing intricate words
In truth it was abstract thoughts, an insignificant verse
Everything you spoke I absorbed, even what others ignored
Totally engorged, wanted more, radiated toward your orb
Me plus you would equal a bond that would never diminish
The simplest answer I gathered was, you're my reason for existence

^ word, just some lines that stood out in my mind......aight man, definately keep up......hall of famer right here, haha, pz

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