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Heroic has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 02:21 AM.

heat has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 02:37 AM.

Id throw insults at this dude quick, but screw it, thats just stupid
Cuz fact is, id call you a faggit, but ya name beat me to it (heroic ha)

not smack dvd, but i'll use the dvd to smack u into a personal encounter
aint great at elevatin, the way heroic only over the counter

Unlike you I don’t duck son, instead im "bruising ya face" (damaging his rep/face)
You try to drop heavy, but like liposuctions, ya “losin the weight”

i title him a fag.. heroic wit a win is like Ike wit Tina's bag
and i'm known to have low tolerance(fa lame)..so i'll brake heroic in half

heroic is light-weight, wouldnt be a treat if he had a pistol and a verse of agression
so i'll teach heroic not to mess with heat like a Drug Conferences

my bars are cold like those of Alaskan Prisons,got him shaken till hes knees-hurts
plus im schooling heroic on a basic level, like them Elementary Teachers

good luck

yo you was ok but you need to work more on punches, you also got to work alot on your personals i see you played off his name but you could have used different personals, that name shit got boring, but your strucutre was OK, you just need to work on using personals and metaphores and punches all in the same verse, and try harder to beat your chalenger so that you know that you win, but you also need to calm down on your self glorification, it was like everyother line would be slefglorification

Heat, your structure was real wack and your punches where not hitting, if you woudl have prewrittent his then you might have one, just eleavte in every area, sorry but thats all i can say

i couldnt vote becuase of my post count, but you one this, sorry tho, uppin for some votes i gues

Voted For: Heroic

uhh okay....

opener-heroic
structure-heroic
punchlines-heroic
creativity-heroic
multis-nun
wordplay-heat a had a lil
personals-nun from both
finisher-heroic
enjoyed-^^^....heat dont think im hatin on u fam im just votin on madd battles its nothin personal...i just think u lose in every catagorie and datz sad cuzz heroic shit wasn't all dat hott...fix ya structure and step up ya punchlines

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^^he's scared.lol

upp'inf or more votes and why the hell u made the post count 500 to vote??

i dont even have 500 hahahaha

so u can get the vet to vote for u?

fuckin lame

upp'in

upp'in this battle once again_____________________