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12-23-03, 08:15 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Dimense VS Allegory
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12-23-03, 01:49 PM | #2 | ||||||
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Wtf Im Gonna Be with my Girls Fam For Christmas....Can i Get an Extension Ev I Doubt ill be home on Boxin Day....
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12-23-03, 10:21 PM | #3 | ||||||
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the extension is until the 27th. .
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12-27-03, 02:00 AM | #4 | ||||||
RB's Grandpa.!
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How the fuck do yall get an extension.?
Favortism in its purest form, fucking WOW |
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12-27-03, 04:59 PM | #5 | |||
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My pens mightier than the Dimense, its sumthin to get now…
Cuz you’ve been written off more than a fucking pen pal! Ur krew knows it…its hopeless…ur withholdin the hussle So dont predickt urself…you’ll just end up pullin a muscle! Drop the max in this ring…still won’t be ample to cling Cuz ur watered down verse will only put a damper on things! It’s a shame ya spent the time, writin nuthin thats hard Guess the only thing up ur sleeve, were a couple weak arms! Get sumthin to eat pards! Bad health causes malnutrition… And that mushroom haircut mite just lose all of its thickness! You’ll fall from the quickness, sure Dimense is often carving But the only swordfight he’s been in…was at a sausage party! You’re shit, Im not! It’s no wonder you were getting scared Cuz Id send ya up the creek, but I can see youre already there! That’s the deal ya fool, Im here to prove you’ll hate this life I’ll hit ur parents with ladders cuz those 2 rungs cant make a right! Come and face the signs…we’ve battled and I made you hurt But that wasn’t brought up well – jus exactly like you weren’t! I should’ve mentioned that first…but beat me, Dimense couldn’t So just go n grab an extra mouth…to put yet another foot in! A wonderful guy? One of a kind? Those are nothin but lies Cuz I said “what’ve ya got to lose”, he jus sent me some of his lines! Good Luck
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12-27-03, 06:55 PM | #6 | ||||||
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I Had to Key this...Pshh its the Christmas Holidays...
Least i Didnt No Show ....Remember Quality over Quanitity.... U Got Merked before..Ally Knos Im inducin tha fear He's scared stiff to face me..like medusa in mirrors Bruisin this Queer..think you ‘ll win?..u Cant be Serious …Im a beat ya sentences so bad.. <they gonna start with Periods I’ll smash ya head on tha rim and catch ya chin on tha rebound Fuck up ya senses so you hear light and see sound .... Final Four Im bound..Bitch don’t Talk till ur told to speak Kid resembles a School Agenda..You Define The Weak You're Wack, you think id let you lie to me?..Fuck Privacy, i know Gore gets more Blue Balls then Crips watchin Red Shoe Diaries Im Not Even Tring an Still..He gets Embarassed for all to See.. Ally aint seen Shine in so Long that his Shadow Follows Me.. Im droopy eyed half way thru ya verse, its Skills ur Lackin.. See..People Dig my Style..but they tryn'na fill yours Back in Pz
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12-28-03, 02:09 AM | #7 | ||||||
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Allegory
My pens mightier than the Dimense, its sumthin to get now… Cuz you’ve been written off more than a fucking pen pal! 7.1 Ur krew knows it…its hopeless…ur withholdin the hussle So dont predickt urself…you’ll just end up pullin a muscle! 7.0 Drop the max in this ring…still won’t be ample to cling Cuz ur watered down verse will only put a damper on things! 6.9 It’s a shame ya spent the time, writin nuthin thats hard Guess the only thing up ur sleeve, were a couple weak arms! 7.0 Get sumthin to eat pards! Bad health causes malnutrition… And that mushroom haircut mite just lose all of its thickness! 7.9 You’ll fall from the quickness, sure Dimense is often carving But the only swordfight he’s been in…was at a sausage party! 8.0 You’re shit, Im not! It’s no wonder you were getting scared Cuz Id send ya up the creek, but I can see youre already there! 6.5 That’s the deal ya fool, Im here to prove you’ll hate this life I’ll hit ur parents with ladders cuz those 2 rungs cant make a right! 7.8 Come and face the signs…we’ve battled and I made you hurt But that wasn’t brought up well – jus exactly like you weren’t! 6.1 should’ve mentioned that first…but beat me, Dimense couldn’t So just go n grab an extra mouth…to put yet another foot in! 8.0 A wonderful guy? One of a kind? Those are nothin but lies Cuz I said “what’ve ya got to lose”, he jus sent me some of his lines! 7.2 Dimense U Got Merked before..Ally Knos Im inducin tha fear He's scared stiff to face me..like medusa in mirrors 7.4 Bruisin this Queer..think you ‘ll win?..u Cant be Serious …Im a beat ya sentences so bad.. <they gonna start with Periods 7.5 I’ll smash ya head on tha rim and catch ya chin on tha rebound Fuck up ya senses so you hear light and see sound .... 7.0 Final Four Im bound..Bitch don’t Talk till ur told to speak Kid resembles a School Agenda..You Define The Weak 7.2 You're Wack, you think id let you lie to me?..Fuck Privacy, i know Gore gets more Blue Balls then Crips watchin Red Shoe Diaries 6.7 Im Not Even Tring an Still..He gets Embarassed for all to See.. Ally aint seen Shine in so Long that his Shadow Follows Me.. 7.8 Im droopy eyed half way thru ya verse, its Skills ur Lackin.. See..People Dig my Style..but they tryn'na fill yours Back in 7.4 . . Overall Dimense, your right about quanity over quality, but there was a big difference in the size of verse, and it matters in this cituation. You had good punches but not quite as many as Allegory did. He won with consistent punches, better flow, and overall just alot more hits. vote Allegory |
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12-28-03, 08:07 PM | #8 | ||||||
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The Math gets messy when people don't match each others lines (22 Lines....lmao)
Allegory's had some funny punches but overall was around average 'should’ve mentioned that first…but beat me, Dimense couldn’t So just go n grab an extra mouth…to put yet another foot in!' ^his best Dimense came less dope than usual and didn't hold consistency throughout his entire verse Im droopy eyed half way thru ya verse, its Skills ur Lackin.. See..People Dig my Style..but they tryn'na fill yours Back in ^his best I hate to say it, but I feel if dimense would of kept going, he would of had it Neither were great but My vote goes to Allegory with more consistency and harder hitting punches |
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12-29-03, 08:18 AM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: D79C 2834
Vote Allegory
Just seemed to put a little more into his verse... he had some pretty witty punches... & his verse was a little more consistant Nice battle... but i got to go with Allegory |
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12-29-03, 01:09 PM | #10 | |||||||
VOTES ON BATTLES!
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eh..
If Dimense Droped more bars that were doper he could have still won this excluding that allegory seem'd to have the better punches he had quailty+quanity and that basially won it for him [/b]Vote[b]=Allegory |
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12-30-03, 08:15 AM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: D79C 2834
Allegory Wins
Dimense Loses & Is Out |
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