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Whigga Spitta | 5 | 100.00% | |
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01-17-04, 01:53 AM | #1 | |
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Whigga Spitta Vs. MarvolousJwun009
IP: 31E0 B78D
Aight, 10 lines min.,20 lines max.
Blind spit within the next two hours. Peace. |
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01-17-04, 02:07 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 31E0 B78D
Yo i hope you prepared for lyrical assassaination
cuz i flow like female menstruation you spit nasty-- only cuz you practice oral masturbation sure you Marvolous, at anal penetration you better check da station before you rep yo nation I spit harshly, cuz it's whigga you facin' my weed is laced in PCP and crack, but they'll never trace 'em back to me cuz all my tracks, i erase 'em from the ones on my arm, to the coke in my basement i'm 17, spittin shit is my teenage wasteland |
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01-17-04, 03:41 AM | #3 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: C1DA C961
jea!!
Listen...white boy since u wanna play me and spark // da beam on da 3 80 is dark,i'll leave ya spline in ya green avey & ya lady in dark // u not nice dogg u just ""OLD AND GASSED"" like u ""80 AND FART"" // be serious ya bars is trash u couldn't ""BEAT ME"" if u gave me ya ""HEART"" // beef with jay fagget i'll be in ya hood squeezin-glocks // i'll catch u in ya wip & put ya ""CHEST ON YA BRAKES"" just da make ya ""BREATHIN STOP"" // ....can we get some votes i know u gota feel like da ""ODD"" 1 on rap battles cuzz u aint ""EVEN"" hott // look unda my name fagget u should know im commin-sick // prick if u blingin runnin it quick,cuzz da gun and clipp // a leave u with ""FOOD 4 THOUGHT"" when i put ya ""BRAIN"" where ya ""STOMACH"" sit //
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01-17-04, 03:51 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 92E3 012C
good battle, but i think whigga got this one,
cause he had better punches, and better flow, went good together, marvolousyou had some aight punches but whigga got you. ima give this to whigga. since i took my time on this vote on youngthug619 vs Karmic |
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01-17-04, 04:36 AM | #5 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: C1DA C961
lmaooooooooooo whut battle is u lookin at dogg better wow...datz a hate vote cuzz i voted 4 tilleye and u got t.k.oed its nothin tho..uppin 4 votes
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01-17-04, 07:20 AM | #6 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: C1DA C961
muthafuckin uppin yo why ya niggaz dont vote.....but ya want nigaaz da vote on ya'll shit whuts good rapbattles get at us with some votes...its 0-0
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01-17-04, 07:32 AM | #7 |
Poetic Justice
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IP: 2EE2 BE85
Thats newb for ya...............
Whigga- Your verse was pretty weak showed no real complex punches or creative meta's. The only thing you had going was flow an it was just very basic Marv- Pretty decent drop. You had some very creative punches. Overall good verse OVERALL-Marv takes this one easy overall more complex an better punches Return the favor an hit my battle up with a vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107516 Thanks |
01-17-04, 06:59 PM | #8 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 399E F0FD
okay datz a real ass vote goodlookin out dunn.....now can we get some more real votes on dis shit and ima peep ya battle dunn
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01-18-04, 06:59 PM | #9 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 8764 0826
uppppppppppppinnnnnnnnn........................... ..................................................
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01-19-04, 04:48 PM | #10 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 8764 0826
i guess i win cuzz niggaz aint fuckin votin............................................. .............
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01-19-04, 05:16 PM | #11 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: 8764 0826
yo i voted on madd niggaz battles........................................... ......................return da fuckin favor
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01-20-04, 01:38 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 244A F706
Yo, this battle was pretty close.. saw some things I was liking on both of ur verse. Think u both can elevate it a little bit though. Overal decent battle..
Marv. You had some nice punches that stood out to me.. structure was a little hard to read it right.. flow was..... okay.. creativity was alot better then whiggas. Whigga, I liked your flow alot better. structure was better. I say you got beat with the punches and he had some more creativity. no hate. Overall vote - Marv Lets return the favor on this.. check out my battle. please. peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...246#post1108246
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01-20-04, 11:55 PM | #13 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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damn marv sucked balls, ya disin on wigga spitta cus he white and actually spits sumin a person can read. and the only reason u gettin votes is cus u herassin foos and they bitch asses for votin for shit.
vote-wigga spitta by the way u cant win if u ryme fart with "HEART" yo asses is dumb thats a well know rule |
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01-21-04, 12:16 AM | #14 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: C1DA C961
^^^ummmm fart and heart ryhme u fuckin dick head.......but aneway im up 2-0 yo comrok i got u dun ima peep ya battle
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01-21-04, 12:16 AM | #15 | |
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IP: EC0B 84C7
Yo i hope you prepared for lyrical assassaination
cuz i flow like female menstruation {b] i expected more with this opening.. follow through didnt hit much, no real punch there, played concept onthe follow through[/b] you spit nasty-- only cuz you practice oral masturbation sure you Marvolous, at anal penetration follow through line was sorta of a weak punch.. directed, and was an iight personal you better check da station before you rep yo nation I spit harshly, cuz it's whigga you facin' filler... Not much of a punch or metaphor... just somthing to add bars i suppose my weed is laced in PCP and crack, but they'll never trace 'em again filler back to me cuz all my tracks, i erase 'em from the ones on my arm, to the coke in my basement theres no punch here I'm 17, spittin shit is my teenage wasteland not diggin this ending, it was a filler.. Your lacking metaphors and punchs... Your verse wasnt directed to your opponent. It flowed well ya but it didnt really contend well as a battle verse.. Listen...white boy since u wanna play me and spark // da beam on da 3 80 is dark,i'll leave ya spline in ya green avey & ya lady in dark // {b] opening was alright... Not really directed punchs though[/b] u not nice dogg u just ""OLD AND GASSED"" like u ""80 AND FART"" // be serious ya bars is trash u couldn't ""BEAT ME"" if u gave me ya ""HEART"" // the wordplay on this is iight.. Meta is straight... the punchs was ok beef with jay fagget i'll be in ya hood squeezin-glocks // i'll catch u in ya wip & put ya ""CHEST ON YA BRAKES"" just da make ya ""BREATHIN STOP"" // the follow through is over drawn, the punch is kind of weak, but your meta is ok ....can we get some votes i know u gota feel like da ""ODD"" 1 on rap battles cuzz u aint ""EVEN"" hott // look unda my name fagget u should know im commin-sick // eh, sort of a play concept with the odd even part.. punch could have been in there a little more prick if u blingin runnin it quick,cuzz da gun and clipp // a leave u with ""FOOD 4 THOUGHT"" when i put ya ""BRAIN"" where ya ""STOMACH"" sit // you follow through would have come off ill if you used a little re wording.. ending is ok.. decent verse. You had alright metaphors/wordplay.. flow was overdrawn at parts.. punchs were ok, could have worked on more personals.. Vote- MarvolousJwun009 His punchs took it, he came with more, flow was kind of off but made up for it with his metas Peep the battle and drop an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107825
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