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01-24-04, 07:28 AM | #1 | ||||
Yes I Know
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COM vs RULE
IP: 509D 5063
10 lines,,, you go first
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01-24-04, 11:10 AM | #2 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
Checkin In...I'll Drop Soon.
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01-24-04, 11:28 AM | #3 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3?' Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore.. If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch
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01-24-04, 02:25 PM | #4 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par
We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA! Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet? Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles? No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles! Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch? Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch! You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"! |
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01-24-04, 07:17 PM | #5 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
upping for votes..............
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01-25-04, 04:09 AM | #6 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
up 2................................................. ...............................................
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01-25-04, 04:44 AM | #7 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: EC0B 84C7
Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3? ^^^^^ Hmmm... to long...didnt rhyme....Hes in wits end...and dropping soap=played 4/10 Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit ^^^^^ Decent...not a very hard hitting punch 6/10 Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool ^^^^ Trying to hard fer personals....only 1 punch is needed about the crew thing 5/10 Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left ^^^^ wtf? an attemp at a multi? YOUR TEXT BATTLING RIGHT NOW punch was disgracefull 4/10 Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore.. If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch ^^^^^ swaying votes twice....you put an extra line which through off the scheme 5/10 overall 4.5/10 (dont rap like rap, bat, cup, slut) and use wordplay Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA! ^^^^' good concept, wasnt worded right 6/10 Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet? ^^^^ OK line, try not to use the defeat/feet thing, nice flow 6.5/10 Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles? No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles! ^^^ pretty ill...nice metta... 7.5/10 Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch? Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch! ^^^^ ILL...nice little flip, and punch 9/10 You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"! ^^^ Nice....little personal... 8/10 overall 7.5/10 com wins Better verse overall |
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01-25-04, 05:59 AM | #8 | |||||||
1E
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
rule... thought the opener was a bit played, and it didnt really rhyme... the verse was quite personal, thats good, but the punches didnt hit too hard... th closer was ok, but didnt like the way you presented it... overall... 5/10
com... liked the opener, amusing... and quite consistent punches... with some nice wordplay Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles? No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles! ^^liked this bar... and i thought ya finished it with a good strong punch... overall coms verse was harder hitting and more amusing...vote=com |
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01-25-04, 06:01 AM | #9 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
whats MY mark out of ten?? lol............................................... ..
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01-25-04, 09:28 AM | #10 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: A26E 4629
id say rule had an overall decent verse....i liked the humor of punches and personals....good strucutre...opener could have been better, and closer was pretty decent....i'd say it lacked in metas and harder hitting punches....there was a little filler..........so i'd say 6/10
com had hard hitting punches/personals especially the openeer......your creativity was killer....your strucutre was decent as was rules.....your metas were better than his..... so were the punches and personals....overll.............8.5/10 ~ you win vote - com
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01-25-04, 09:55 AM | #11 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
...pathetic...lol...if you read in elite free agents you people would understand the personal lol
but nice battle com...uppen for votes
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01-25-04, 10:13 AM | #12 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
thx.. but don't use personals about me bitching and then do it yourself. lmao
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01-25-04, 02:12 PM | #13 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: FCAA FA32
Com ripped this cat...
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01-25-04, 03:21 PM | #14 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
^^neek i ripped you fuck off fag
com i was just saying..wasnt bitching..I just thought personals win battles..but meh...and i said nice verse..so think about it
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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01-25-04, 03:41 PM | #15 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
and I said thx...........up.3................................ ............................
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