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Telekinetic | 5 | 83.33% | |
.:K:. | 1 | 16.67% | |
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02-03-04, 03:12 PM | #1 | |
Hooked
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.:K:. Vs Telekinetic
IP: 7D27 0732
ok man,
12 lines max, both spit within 30 mins, no dr,hat or crew votes, no feeding, no freeposting. ....good luck.......pz |
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02-03-04, 03:13 PM | #2 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
..........checking in man good luck 1's again....................pz
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02-03-04, 03:18 PM | #3 |
Poetic Justice
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IP: D00E 86E2
Checkin in good luck to you too...................
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02-03-04, 03:37 PM | #4 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
yo who the fuck are you?,fuck it,
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you ........stick your keyboard in the electric......... looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing, ......well that definetly aint telekinetic......... little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you, fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you, the only reason you're calling out a vet............. .............is cause your a pet in need......... cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace, but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory, pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me, im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me. im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked, ......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif)..... but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk, i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work. .....................pz |
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02-03-04, 03:49 PM | #5 |
Poetic Justice
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IP: D00E 86E2
Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked*
This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul You stay fowl...... Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?" K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices Ya lines bite..... Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might * "Hook" is under his name |
02-03-04, 04:12 PM | #6 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
^uppin(1)......................................... .not bad man nice battle.....................pz
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02-03-04, 04:14 PM | #7 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric......... looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing, ......well that definetly aint telekinetic......... dope personal little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you, fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you, weak the only reason you're calling out a vet............. .............is cause your a pet in need......... cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace, ok..nothin really hard but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory, pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me, why would a PM mean sumthin to you. And jeez man you said poo im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me. im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked, ......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif)..... kinda played, but alright but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk, i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work. ehhh kinda whack Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked* This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook ok, but played Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul kinda played but ok punch You stay fowl...... Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek creative...but you refrenced startreck ina battle man Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?" weak K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices dope Ya lines bite..... Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might ehh, useless multis cause they dun make any kind of good punch or personal Yhis was a real close battle hard to call...K takes the personals catergorie..his opener was sick...Metas is a tie...Tele takes punches.....K takes flow and structure...and the Win. Tele your bars were a lil too stretched. Try and clean some shit out. Peace Need honest votes here from both of ya please! I took the time for yall. Remember to poll! Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074 |
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02-03-04, 04:15 PM | #8 |
Poetic Justice
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IP: D00E 86E2
Uppin for votes....
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02-03-04, 04:18 PM | #9 |
Poetic Justice
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IP: D00E 86E2
Just so you know this lines supposed to be like it is "Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek" hince the stretched bars remark
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02-03-04, 04:23 PM | #10 | |
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: FA9B 2712
Vote- Telekinetic
punches- Tele(much harder and funnier....more also) flo- Tele(basic...normal...K's tryna implement the vet structure n killed it) multi's- Tie Meti4's- Tele(not as many but a better quality) Personal's- Tele(The hooked line was nice) K tried I think but failed to bring a vet quality verse...it may have looked like one... But the content matter's u kno... Telekinetic was alot funnier an wittier.... He gets my vote// -1 |
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02-03-04, 04:25 PM | #11 |
Poetic Justice
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IP: D00E 86E2
Oh an your opener telekinetic means clairvoyant or psychic not phissically moveing
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02-03-04, 04:26 PM | #12 | |
Hooked
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IP: 7D27 0732
well i looked it up and it meens phisically moving with your head...so....................................let pll vote man.................pz
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02-03-04, 04:29 PM | #13 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
yo this battle was really close.. hot shit by both.. k came with straight hotness.. however telekenetik outedged him with better wordplay.. telkenetik was more witty in his verse.. lines like this sealed the deal
"Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek" "K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices" k your shit was pretty hot.. but some of your punchlines didnt hit that hard vote :telekenetik
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02-03-04, 04:32 PM | #14 | |
Guest
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IP: 7733 7AF9
Tele takes this one..
K your verse had played shit (herb/spliff wordplay, mean shit-to-me) didnt hit hard....and just didnt come straight....it was so fucking iffy the whole time and ntohing hit direct and really punched well. seems you used the ... structure in innapropriate places as well. Tele u came straight....i liked the cling on punch... u punched harder and used original disses and creative rhymes....also used the correct structure. vote Tele both of you please hit up my tag battle. its real good, just gettin mad slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111240 |
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02-03-04, 04:53 PM | #15 | |
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 95BE 951D
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric......... looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing, ......well that definetly aint telekinetic......... nice play on his name little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you, fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you, filler, not the worst punch ever, but pretty bad the only reason you're calling out a vet............. .............is cause your a pet in need......... cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace, wordplay let you down here but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory, pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me, pretty wack, nice idea though im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me. im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked, ......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif)..... played but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk, i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work. not the best of closers Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked* This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook haha, nice Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul i heard something like this before, wordplay let you down You stay fowl...... Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek too stretched, flow was off, wack punch Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check? not your best, not your worst K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices nice punch, hit pretty hard Ya lines bite..... Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might wat the fuck, you lost me punche tie both had some good, bad an aiight ones personals tele nice play on the hooked strucutre k nice structure flow k metas tie my vote tele his personal hit hard, an he got a few good shots, .:K:. i aint seen you come this weak for quite a few battles now!! both y'all try an hit, one or two of the battles in my sig up, thanks peace
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