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BoNe'zCoLlEcTeRr | 0 | 0% | |
deacon | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-12-04, 09:49 PM | #1 | |
I Am The Light
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BoNe'zCoLlEcTeRr vs deacon
IP: C560 DFFF
20 mins due
10 lines
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02-12-04, 09:49 PM | #2 | |
I Am The Light
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IP: C560 DFFF
better show
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02-12-04, 09:53 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
iight im in son holl up i need to rite my shyt
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02-12-04, 09:56 PM | #4 | |
I Am The Light
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IP: C560 DFFF
i suggest you collect your bones,find ah grave and start digin it, your wack
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113956 His shit is prewritten i got the proof im feeding off that^^^^hahah Yeah when i said 10 lines i guess you thought it was eighteen How could i expect more from a retard thats fuckin 18......omg lol Yeah see your soft like laxatation to your bowel movements i suggest you take your shit back, start seekin some improvements .....see I like pussy………… just not when it tries to push me Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents its over….. cause dissin Deacons like dissin Christmas A vet that every newby wishes for on his win list -1-
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02-12-04, 09:58 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
i need competition..your nice, but i mean someone with raw rhymes
next to me your just another 'small guy', check your font size!!!// you get your geek ass, folded and detached, head sawed with an axe you cant touch me// the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men// just tape 'the bible to your sole' so you can have faith-in-your-step-kid you like justin timeberlake?// good cuz imma leave your head severed deacon// make you eat your words so fast your sound waves come out covered-in-ink-leaking// aint provin shit for-me-yo, your beatin newbies who already adore me bro youve beaten ……iam at a level where iam beating four of you... // you indicated I am pussy?..thats some baseless-harmfull disrespect..please! i sex deep..ask your girl i even left traces-of-lava-on-her-bed-sheets! son i slaughter-fakes leave you more fucked up than daughter dates// you got 'mad flow up the ass?' i'll slash your anus and your water-breaks! grip your expectations and put a two hold on your hopes..your soft punches i told you to 'bulge-em' instead you packed for europe you dafuture?...your present and past tense arent even correctly placed-up shoudve took more time?... you werent tryin to win!.. talk about aimin for wrong accolades bud |
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02-12-04, 09:59 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 6583 D925
herr nigga iight nigga im out 0n3 uppin for votes
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02-12-04, 11:25 PM | #7 | |
You're Like Melon
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IP: 1B2C BC6D
i suggest you collect your bones,find ah grave and start digin it, your wack
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113956 His shit is prewritten i got the proof im feeding off that^^^^hahah lmao...good punch/personal Yeah when i said 10 lines i guess you thought it was eighteen How could i expect more from a retard thats fuckin 18......omg lol decent Yeah see your soft like laxatation to your bowel movements i suggest you take your shit back, start seekin some improvements decent punch..coulda been flipped better .....see I like pussy………… just not when it tries to push me Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents lmao...the second part is tight its over….. cause dissin Deacons like dissin Christmas A vet that every newby wishes for on his win list decent punch...only thing i didnt like about your verse was it wasnt even...try to make them same size and it'll be doper i need competition..your nice, but i mean someone with raw rhymes next to me your just another 'small guy', check your font size!!!// stretched..aight punch you get your geek ass, folded and detached, head sawed with an axe you cant touch me// the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men// all of this is so so...but stretched just tape 'the bible to your sole' so you can have faith-in-your-step-kid you like justin timeberlake?// nice good cuz imma leave your head severed deacon// make you eat your words so fast your sound waves come out covered-in-ink-leaking// so so not a personal aint provin shit for-me-yo, your beatin newbies who already adore me bro youve beaten ……iam at a level where iam beating four of you... // blah you indicated I am pussy?..thats some baseless-harmfull disrespect..please! i sex deep..ask your girl i even left traces-of-lava-on-her-bed-sheets! dont use dashes..it look newbish son i slaughter-fakes leave you more fucked up than daughter dates// you got 'mad flow up the ass?' i'll slash your anus and your water-breaks! lol at the second part...but stretched grip your expectations and put a two hold on your hopes..your soft punches i told you to 'bulge-em' instead you packed for europe decent nothing special you dafuture?...your present and past tense arent even correctly placed-up shoudve took more time?... you werent tryin to win!.. talk about aimin for wrong accolades bud not felling this one sorry overall i gotta go with deacon...reason... bones verse was dope but stretched like whoa deacon just make your bars the same lenth peep mine with ak mixa
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02-12-04, 11:44 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 54CE EF3B
Deacon won...
Bonez....you had a decent flow going except.....it didn't rhyme...at all almost. I couldn't really understand what the hell you were trying to do. I like the punches...some of them..but they didn't hit because your flow was all off and all I seemed to get was about four good lines. Deacon....You had a cool flow there..a lot of self glorification..but I say "what's wrong with that?"..I been downtalked for it a lot in the past...I like the punches..very cocky flow..suited to the type of competition you had..but more thatn anything..it RHYMED! So...with you winning all the categories in my thoughts ... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614 |
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02-13-04, 12:34 AM | #9 | |
New to RB
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Deacon cuz of flow both were pretty niice tho keep uppin dat ishh
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02-13-04, 12:39 AM | #10 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 80EF 45DD
ya like they said
vote- deacon bone definately had his non rhymed words streched and this line "the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men//" was your worst, u cant make fun of someone bout bein a nerd then turn around and quote the x-men, chummon deacon, this rhyme definetly your best, was really good, but i might of heard it before from someone else i might be mistakin if so, real good line. "Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents" that and your opener win this both of you need ta work on rhymin shit wit a bigger vocab and make sense doin it, like rhymin 18 with eighteen, dat aint coo, and other guy jus had a lot of bowl like that vote- deacon hit up my battle peace, drop a link
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02-13-04, 12:41 AM | #11 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 80EF 45DD
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107529
makin sure u got that................................
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02-13-04, 10:59 AM | #12 | |
You're Like Melon
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IP: 1B2C BC6D
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109960 peep those people i already voted here
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02-13-04, 02:22 PM | #13 | |
Eddy.
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IP: 77D5 6AAD
Poll fixed.
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02-13-04, 02:27 PM | #14 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
Deacon took this easy....despit his whack verse....he actually had a few decent punches and personals...the prewritten link had me laughin...Bone...your lines are mad stretched kid...Also no real good personals...and a lot of ya shit is played....Some of ya punches had no relevence either...like the text size one...Blah...Overall Deacon gets my vote for harder punches
Please drop an homest vote here...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978 |
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02-13-04, 03:29 PM | #15 | |
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
uppin
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