aight ummm i see u and ya boy runnin around talkin greasy..its nothin tho

10-20...or whuteva....no bullshit votes dont pm niggaz da vote 4 u or nun of dat.....if u dont wanna spit rite now i'll give u 2 2morrow nite...datz it...lets get it goin

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

i guess he forgot to mention, this is a pinkslip battle, loser gets banished for good

ight well when ur ass comes online KNOW THAT UR SPITTIN 1ST.....SO SPIT 1ST AND DONT SAY ANYTHIN ELSE......pce

Yo Marvolous I Kno Ur Online Now So Spit Ur Shit....everybody This Is A Bannishment Battle If Marvolous Wins I Get Bannished If I Win He Gets Bannished....marvolous U Have Till 9 Oclock To Have Ur Shit Spat Its 8:20 P.m. Right Now Here In Atlanta....pce

lol^^^^ i dont know if u cant read or u just a dickhead....fuck dat u spit first first shit how many tme do i gotta tell u dat damm....aight its 8:22 in nyc rite..da deadline is fuckin 10:00pm nigga if u dont spit ya shit u fuckin lose and get banned...do u a agree?? and dogg can u and ya fuckin boyfriend stop pmin me

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

ight nigga NOO FEEDING HERES MY SHIT...i kno niggaz want me bannished so whteva...just rap for fun...pce

kid fuck ur place, i've already passed your ranks, and smashed ur face
get crashed and laced with spits so hot i got propane as an aftertaste

survival of the fittest but this kid is the worst
he couldn't cum at me hard even if i let him jerk first

Understand that i'm dope, just take a minute to chill as I finish this drill
Tendencies kill,you shouldn't Masturbate before battles it diminishes ur skill

I'm relentless and ill,so i'll put it in your lingo and just say DUDE you're wack
Youre confused in rap and losin daps so stop trying 2 prove ur truly black

if you were modelin talliban garments u still wouldn't pose a threat
I keep foes in check lift up the skirt on this pussy and expose a vet

Here's another gay diss, some will like, some won't, opinions will splitting
But it's ironic how much you suck, and that ur occupation is spittin

I’ve hacked into rhymes so many times I compete with the Matrix
And I typed in your name and got an empty page, your just basics

U called this a banishment battle so u can erase ur 0-1 record with new identity
coming back to beat me? We all kno ur hiding from the truth like a tobacco facility

fuck ur mom and sis, ur dad's a bitch, don't hate it
just makin the punches like ur sex life, family related

I've said so much about you I’ve gotten BORED
And I'm sure everyone else has too, so I'll leave you now WHORED

yo man uve told me 2 spit now i have its 9:15 here in atlanta u have till 9:30 to have ur shit spat...dont ignor this bannishment battle....so come on man im waitin.....HURRY THE FUCK UP...dont reply 2 nothin else...ALL I WANT U 2 DO IS HAVE UR SHIT SPAT...SO WHEN I CHECK THIS IT BATTLE HAVE UR SHIT IN HERE....pce

marvolous ur a no show...ur a pussy man..u asked me 2 drop and i did....and i havent seen shit from u...DONT TAKE CHALLENGES U CANT KEEP BITCH

aight umm pardon me i needed a lil exstension...had da take care of some shit real quick....

i could tell u dont-know-marv..but dogg dat awas trash why u go-so-hard //
u should "serve drinks at a gay club" cuzz all u spit is "homo bars" //
quick punch is a lame and everbody tired of seen dis "pussy on da screen" like "old porno stars" //
i been waitin pateintly cuzz...so once u act up im wastin three slugs //
fuck "hov & b" i'll put ya "heart on a mental nigga" so ya'll could "crazy in luv" //
but if u wanna play me and start....da beam on da 380 is dark //
i'll leave ya splean in ya green avey and ya lady in chalk //
quick punch u not nice just "old & gassed" like u "80 and fart" //
fagget u couldn't "beat" me if put ya ahnd i ya chest and gave me ya "heart" //
i got dunns who a start shit..go da atl run thru and spark clipps //
quick punch u a net rapper only time u been in da "studio" was a "1 room apartment" //
i'll put ya lung in da dirt....by y bother i got gunna's dat squirt //
they a shoot at ya face and leave ya "skull on ya chest" like da "punisher shirt" //

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

dogg calm da fuck down i dont live on dis net shit i gota life.....and i amde dis post last nite as soon i did it u got offline how pussy is dat dunn

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

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yo we need some votes man...this is a bannishment battle...so come on explain why u voted for who u did...thanks....uppin

Quickpunch- His verse was straight.. busted a couple of multiz but not all where dat good.. he was straight in his vocab.. tha punchz diden't really hit dat hard..

MarvolousJ- I was feelin his verse, nice wordplay an punchz an metaz.. he kinda fell off but picked it back up..

VOCAB- Tie
PUNCHZ- Marv
MULTIS- Quickpunch
METAZ- Marv
PERSONALZ- Both

so my vote goez 2 MarvelousJ.. diz was a good battle doe..

oh yea holla atcha nigga marv

yall both spit like it was ya last battle good shit
punches was hitin for both, but quiks were a lil more thought out and affective
the rhymes were hott, and also favored quik to me for structure
although i like the fact that marv didnt use as many word to get at quik
i still give my vote to quik b/c he droped first, and came with it, at a level that was hard to match(marv damn near got there, maybe a few more bars)

*too many damn gay jokes(no- homo)
peace

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Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

I'm givin it to quick punch...i liked his structure a lot more..and his personals were on point...good battle tho...seriously...yall both brought it...no denyin that...much love and respect to both emcees

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