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daclassic | 5 | 83.33% | |
franchiZe | 1 | 16.67% | |
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04-23-04, 01:55 PM | #1 | |
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franchiZe vs. DaClassic (REMATCH)
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yo check it DaClassic pulled it out in our first battle wit a 5-1 win
but i'm confident i can bring it in the rematch so here it is FRANCHIZE vs. DACLASSIC THE REMATCH Rules 30 mins max 2 spit after check in 10-20 lines max. no crew no d/r no hate ***NO FEEDIN OFF VERSES*** I'm a spit first!! |
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04-23-04, 01:56 PM | #2 | |
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checkin in
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04-23-04, 02:24 PM | #3 | |
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i'm ready 2 spit so here it is
Startin off from our first battle…………………….. Classic asked tha question am I a business organisation// U damn straight I’m ‘Da’ billion-dollar ‘Classic’ corporation// I am rap origination, ure just a classic miscreation// I didn’t need ure admiration, cuz u already full of infatuation// I’m the complete rap generation, this isn’t a hallucination// This shit is getting red hot like its DaClassic’s fuckin cremation// I betta stop and take a drink before I drop from dehydration// That’s what happens when multis experience multi-plication// I’m smoother than white chocolate, franchize is the vanilla thrilla// My rhymes are automatic just like jumpshots from Reggie Miller// Classic beat me first, I never knew miracles could happen// Cuz his wack ass spit belongs in the place I take a crap in// He claims to be a genius with a super high I Q// I think DaClassic has been sniffin to much crazy glue// He may be known, but only for always introducing him-self// It’s only cuz he knows he’s about to be put on the retirement shelf// With my truly dominatin skillz this battle will surely go-quick// And I guarantee he’ll leave a true fran-chize-a-pho-bic.// |
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04-25-04, 11:56 AM | #4 | |
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IP: D35B 3F85
checkin...........................yall bout to witness history. l
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04-25-04, 12:34 PM | #5 | |
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The Classic Verse
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Ladies and Gents welcome to this franchize's going out of business sale, every thing 50% off, except for The Classicitems.
It's time for shut down. Franchize you should be lucky your ass is even an organism Why you feed off of my lyricism, When you lacking metabolism My punches will diss him, What is the reason you had to call it? My lyrics of wisdom will damage your tissue down the toilet I couldn't recall it, Beginning of lyrical leaders fraternity? Whose this franchize player, I'll place him on the bench for eternity Your hurting me, Stop changing your vocab its making me sick You lacking the vocab to write dialogs for a porno flick You're not yourself today. Improvement I noticed immediately I'm talkin bout from never rapping, To the level of never beating me This piece of garbage is blocking my road to lyrically improve If I told you that I have a piece of dirt in my eye, would you move? I'll leave u terrified, But first something needs to be clarified You claim yourself the truth, But u aint a fact that been verified Spots are taken at my elevation center, Finding one is rare Stupidity does not qualify as a handicap, So park elsewhere Nobody cares so beat it, Career deceased, Your now defeated Franchize i'll treat your ass like a mistake, You'll get deleted
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04-25-04, 12:52 PM | #6 | |
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IP: D35B 3F85
votes are based on honest opinions. i gave this dude a rematch because he so sure i didnt take it easy on him in the first battle which i did? believe me go peep it for yourselves. but vote on this battle people. and other battles shall get voted on peace.
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04-25-04, 01:15 PM | #7 |
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opener classic
flow clasic fran u got vocab but it didnt really flow 2 well punches classic personals tie good job to both multis franchize closer tie both were played i felt classics a lil more though vote clasic he came hard fran u had nice vocab and ok multis and thats about it
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04-25-04, 01:28 PM | #8 | |
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this was a good battle franchize it looked like your first 2 or 3 bers were just filler to show off your multies...in my opinion use multies when dissing him brings a lot more intensity to your verse after those first bars tho u got into your flow and everything came out better...nice structure good wordplay good multies good punches overall u had a good verse
franchizes verse 7/10 daclassic i felt had a good opener but there was filler in his verse too not as much as franchize but u still had some good multies and punches...your verse was overall a easy read which is good and u lacked in ill punches but there were punches i would have to say that you tried to hard..but your last 2 bars were sick i was feelin them..great originality..good verse daclassic's verse: 8/10 vote:daclassic overall good verses from both..but i think the last 2 bars won it for daclassic...good battle ~1~
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04-25-04, 01:38 PM | #9 | |
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this is kind of funny. cuz this dude said no feeding but he fed off off of my verse in the first battle we had. especially those first four lines. now if i was to feed off of his verse in out first battle i would of lost. lol he tried to beat me with my own style. its funny. i'll give him props for showing some type of cleverness. the last end he started to slack off a little to his original way. that was very clever though
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04-25-04, 05:44 PM | #10 | |
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uppin for votes number 1
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04-25-04, 08:13 PM | #11 | |
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Classic asked tha question am I a business organisation//
U damn straight I’m ‘Da’ billion-dollar ‘Classic’ corporation// This shit is getting red hot like its DaClassic’s fuckin cremation// II’m smoother than white chocolate, franchize is the vanilla thrilla// My rhymes are automatic just like jumpshots from Reggie Miller// Classic beat me first, I never knew miracles could happen// Cuz his wack ass spit belongs in the place I take a crap in// weak ending, nice flow, really good vocab, and make sense, straightforward good personalks and wordplay but u need metaphors... but sick verse man....and nice punches.... I couldn't recall it, Beginning of lyrical leaders fraternity? Whose this franchize player, I'll place him on the bench for eternity Spots are taken at my elevation center, Finding one is rare Stupidity does not qualify as a handicap, So park elsewhere nice ending, sick flow, really good vocab, and make sense so u simialr to the franchize but u lacked personals, wordplay and metaphors... ur punches hit very hard...but since u didnt have the devices...imo have to give it to franchize...if u had more literary devices u would have taken it easily ....reallyl good battle...sorry no hate |
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04-25-04, 08:24 PM | #12 | |
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uppin number 2
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04-25-04, 08:40 PM | #13 |
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Yo im liking this battle....
Both had some nice multis Good Rhymes Both Had good punches.. though i sensed some feeding fromt he last battle in Francizes rhyme. Im feelin DaClassics ending Im gonna hafta give it to DaClassic cause he had a sick flow... Francize fed off of the last battle..(Dunno if that counts) but Im still givin it to Classic... Nice battle both og yall Return the fav. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120710 |
04-25-04, 08:42 PM | #14 |
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OK BREAKDOWN
Opener - Daclassic...just simply a better punch... Flow - tie...both had a hot flow... Punches - Daclassic...he was throwin punches the whole way through while franchize waited till the second half of his verse to throw punches... Multi's - tie...franchize had more but Daclassic's hit harder so ima give a tie... Personals - Daclassic...had the one bout his crew which hit hard... Closer - Daclassic...HOT SHIT...all i gotta say haha... Vote Talleys.... franchize - 2 Daclassic - 6 Vote - Daclassic
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04-25-04, 08:47 PM | #15 | |
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niggas is jockin the style ive had sfor some years now.. the one wear u find like 20 words that rhyems and rhyme of the shit... thast not cool to stay on jocks.. but anyway...
daclassic came with an original.. and nice battle.. wit was different and beat out franchize battle post. b/c he over used the usage of -ation words.. it doesnt work for every battle or everythign.... and daclassic has better punches and wordplay definitely ... vote goes to daclassic yo i voted so can someone return the favor????? http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120368 |
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