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hydroponic_buzz | 2 | 28.57% | |
puertoricanelly | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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04-27-04, 01:49 PM | #1 | |
Rb's Teacher
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puertoricanelly vs hydroponic_buzz (vote on this shit peeps)
IP: ADCB 7E30
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spits due 5:00 No H8r votes g/l check in first........ heres my check in |
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04-27-04, 01:50 PM | #2 | |
Rb's Teacher
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IP: ADCB 7E30
Spits are Due tonight by 5:00 Is that koo cuz im at skool and dont get out til 3:15
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04-27-04, 02:21 PM | #3 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8CD1 A2EF
checkin in... kool, btw it's 7 o'clock here, u from outside uk?
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04-27-04, 08:43 PM | #4 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8CD1 A2EF
you betta' pack yo' trunk up nelly and head yo' ass down to the circus/
i betcha yo' gangsta friends love gettin' head when you suck on their boz cuz/ with a dum-ditty-dum you succumb an' get yo' bum humped til the shit goes numb/ you all like yum wen you drinkin' cum, you are scum from the slum/ what makes you think you can come an' fuck with Dr Greenthumb/ ya can drop a flow an show ya face now that schools... out/ i don't go cos rules are the tools used on fools... no doubt/ yo' rhymes are like boomerangs, they come right back in yo' face/ you post an' before you look back, bang, ma killa punches flowin' like bass/ i set the pace an' it leaves every trace of this disgrace's head in space/ hydroponic finds these flows while smokin' demonic chronic/ gin an' tonic power the punches an' keep them harmonic/ i don't even care if i win, cos ma glock still got you foamin' at the chin/ ma heartless grin causes goosebumps in yo' skin/ the only time you've wished for an identical twin to hold on the firing pin/ i'm like a lowrider, ma hydraulics bouncin' on yo' head/ brainscramblin' metabolics, shred you too threads/ i dun' even know why i'm battlin' this fuckin' piece of shit/ from the NYC, ha ha ha ma gattlin' gun'll sort you son, now spit.../
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04-28-04, 06:51 AM | #5 |
Flyweight
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IP: 17AC 3451
yo, where u at??
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04-28-04, 08:20 PM | #6 | |
Rb's Teacher
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IP: 3240 794D
i have the rhymes that cause music to scream suspense,
keep opponents tense,u jus a newbie dat makes no sense/ ******Multi***** i spit actual facts on actual tracks you failin and fallin through lyrical cracks,tryna learn from the masta but you cant so take ya claws off ma back/ cashinova frontin wit fake dolla bills when he cant escape my lyrical travisties its to late to elevate,,,yur styles more rotten then a mouth fulla cavities/ Im the real king and you just a Slave next to my table, you cant win battles when puertoricanelly leaves ya body diabled/ wit every punch ill make ya jerk back,cuz you aint worf jack **********I dont steal from old ladies so take ya purse back*********** |
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04-28-04, 08:26 PM | #7 | |
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 2F28 A819
dis was a good battle
buzz only reason i didnt like yo verse u have 2 shorten yo linezz it can be better than dat u had some tite shit juss yo verse was long puertoricanelly your verse was tite ish i liked yo flow and yo punches nice structure also bestline-i spit actual facts on actual tracks you failin and fallin through lyrical cracks,tryna learn from the masta but you cant so take ya claws off ma back worste line-none buzz- bestline-hydroponic finds these flows while smokin' demonic chronic/ gin an' tonic power the punches an' keep them harmonic/ worsteline- you betta' pack yo' trunk up nelly and head yo' ass down to the circus/ i betcha yo' gangsta friends love gettin' head when you suck on their boz cuz/ overall punches-puertoricanelly flow-puertoricanelly structure-puertoricanelly personals-buzz vocab-puertoricanelly winner-puertoricanelly
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04-28-04, 09:08 PM | #8 | |
atlas the vagabond
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aight
IP: 3E7F 0790
this was a good battle, you two. Props to both gentlemen. But here's the verdict.
hydroponic_buzz-You had nice flow, and rapid delivery. the words flowed together and connected well(hydroponic finds these flows while smokin' demonic chronic/ gin an' tonic power the punches an' keep them harmonic/). What one likes the most about a verse is being able to say it to yourself, as you're reading it and it sounding nice. Which in this case it did. What had me lost was the second line though. i betcha yo' gangsta friends love gettin' head when you suck on their boz cuz/ what is boz, and how does it rhyme with circus. Thats a problem i had. but luckily you followed through wit a decent line afterwards, which kept me listening which is very essential to crowd, or in this case, reader manipulation. It was a well rounded verse in my opinion, and i liked the lenght of it. Just enough, not too much. We'll call it a satisfying quickie before work. puertoricanelly-Good performance, it had a prizefighter format, and that's what i like. Like i said before, battling is about getting the crowd involved, and that format forces one to want to read it. Your multis were on point i liked them. And you left hydroponic with a stinging last blow before the bell rang for the end. wit every punch ill make ya jerk back,cuz you aint worf jack **********I dont steal from old ladies so take ya purse back*********** that was nice. However the problem was this. Your verse was too general. it didn't too much attack him directly. it was more a boast of the self rather than battling him. And i'm disappointed to say that's why you lost my vote. IF it were a more direct full on assault i think you could've taken this one. But that is what separates the battler from the freestyler. Hydroponic made direct attacks at you. So my vote goes to hydroponic. |
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04-29-04, 06:38 AM | #9 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8CD1 A2EF
uppin...
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04-29-04, 09:17 AM | #10 |
Flyweight
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IP: 17AC 3451
uppin... c'mon peeps...
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04-29-04, 09:32 AM | #11 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 61A6 67D9
flow- Buzz (though the verses were long it had a good flow throughout)
punches - puertoricanelly (hit harder than Buzz with some of his lines) best line - you all like yum wen you drinkin' cum, you are scum from the slum/ what makes you think you can come an' fuck with Dr Greenthumb/ - Buzz Open - puertoricanelly (made more sense and had a better rhyme) finisher - Buzz (had more of a punch than puertoricanelly on the finisher) my vote goes to Buzz
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04-29-04, 12:27 PM | #12 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8CD1 A2EF
c'mon can we get some more feedback, i been votin' in y'all battles...
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04-29-04, 02:27 PM | #13 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: C1DA C961
okay im votin on every battle im tired of seein da same shit up
opener-nelly...buzz ya shit was 2 long and it didn't ryhme structure-nelly..buzz shortin ya lines punchlines-nelly creativity-nelly multis-nelly...u had some nice ones dunn personals-nun enjoyed-nelly of course...i think he took all catagorie's...buzz i dotn know whut da tell u gotta be creative with ya shit it was madd basic my vote-pr nelly....yo return dat favor ya'll da link r in my sig and dont give me a hate vote cuzz i aint vote 4
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04-29-04, 07:15 PM | #14 |
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 6630 69C3
puertoricanelly dang dawg, i think ur rhymes were off the chain,
they flowed easy, melt in ur mouth nor in ur hands, lol You also had nice vocab, holla.
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04-29-04, 07:26 PM | #15 | ||
Doesn't Belong Here.
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Buzz
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Nelly Quote:
Buzz you gave Nelly no reason to come hard, and he didn't. But it was 5 or 6 notches above yours though. Vote- Nelly
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