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05-03-04, 10:50 AM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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vango vs. lock
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 03:27 PM | #2 | |||||
New to RB
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IP: 4980 AA41
checkin in
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05-04-04, 06:34 PM | #3 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
Check Round 2
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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues! A.I.
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05-04-04, 06:34 PM | #4 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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Checkin In
IP: 3EC9 2F38
Check Round 2
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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues! A.I.
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05-06-04, 04:59 PM | #5 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: AA51 3382
lock are you gonna show for round 2 or what?
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05-06-04, 07:19 PM | #6 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
alright let me get this over.
First of all Lock, theyre aint no way you could win, even if you broke both my arms and took away my pen Even if you unplugged my computer and deleted my hard drive, we could move this battle to Saturday night, and your lyrics still wouldnt be LIVE! You couldnt beat me if you pm'ed your crew and all the cats that hate me, called all your dickriding buddies and your ex girls that want to date me You still wouldnt have enough votes to be in contention How ya reppin CRhyme Syndricate when your "Locked" in juvenile detention See there aint no need to break ya, when i got the Master Key Your best bet, NO SHOW, avoid the catastrophe! You heard of Mc's bringin the heat, well i bring the Five alarm fire, after you crew hears you spit, theyll probably ask you to retire Simply stated you forgot to bring a paddle and your up Shit Creek Plus you give new definition to Dirtyboys FLow of the "WEAK" |
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05-06-04, 10:45 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 4980 AA41
I came into rap battles with nothin to lose/
Im goin out the president , while u got to choose who/ This aint no game just because im on a higher level than u/ But still u couldnt catch up even if u skipped them by twos/ This niggas ready to die wit the joystick in his hands/ Dogs a trip, like flip, cause its a gameover van/ Ths boy is weak, but everyone please give him a hand/ You aint gonna get noticed until u barried next to ya fam/ cause im leavin cats in columns binded like little kids whos sniper shooters/ makin ya chest expand like u was workin at hooters/ stickin ya head in a freezer, makin u wine and it aint coolers/ you couldnt measure to me even if u had rulers/
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05-07-04, 07:44 AM | #8 | |||||
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im givin this 1 2 vango!!
he had the stronger punchlines and was more creative! though it was still a weak battle! LOCK you've produced alot better than this previously,remember!! your only as good as your last thread good luck 2 both of u, oh, and return the vote on my battle PEACE OUT |
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05-07-04, 12:10 PM | #9 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: 08FE 4ABA
You still wouldnt have enough votes to be in contention
How ya reppin CRhyme Syndricate when your "Locked" in juvenile detention See there aint no need to break ya, when i got the Master Key Your best bet, NO SHOW, avoid the catastrophe! You heard of Mc's bringin the heat, well i bring the Five alarm fire, after you crew hears you spit, theyll probably ask you to retire Simply stated you forgot to bring a paddle and your up Shit Creek Plus you give new definition to Dirtyboys FLow of the "WEAK" 8/10 hott shit dog, you ripped him nice spit... thats wot i expected good job cause im leavin cats in columns binded like little kids whos sniper shooters/ makin ya chest expand like u was workin at hooters/ stickin ya head in a freezer, makin u wine and it aint coolers/ you couldnt measure to me even if u had rulers/ ok ish but could have been better, good start thought u jus need to build on ya meta's and punches n personal v/ vango hit up the championship match yo
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05-07-04, 10:40 PM | #10 | ||||
Still Sick
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IP: B1C9 DAA4
v/Vango for a better verse
better punches although both verses was wack Vango's was less wack Vango you need to work on makin your verse entertaining I didnt like the style of how you set up your verse and the flow wasnt all that great to me Lock..lol..you just sucked your verse was kiddie elementry nothing impressed me OR surprised me keep elevatin v/Vango
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05-08-04, 11:54 PM | #11 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
vango - damn u started off slow.....but kicked it up toward the end....hot shit the last few bars....feelin it....sum were fillers....sum were hot punches....good wordplay....nice flow...u kicked it in toward the end which helped alot....overall good spit....
Verse Score - 7/10 Lock - wtf was that....u maybe ahd one or two punches....wow....u jus said gay shit...werk on usin betta andmore meta's.....use sum personals!!.....get direct punches....flow was fine....wordplay was decent....but u need them punches.... Verse Score - 4/10 Vote - VanGo
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05-09-04, 09:09 PM | #12 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
4-0 vango wins
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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