i spit first
20 lines max
honest votes
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no d/r votes
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u ready...

Checkin in........................................do this

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ayo little puppy, let me teach you some tricks/
show you how to be phat, so you can come back at my shit/
come BITE my stuff, it's the only way you'll be sick/
u get your ass out like your MUM, and take 50 Dicks//
20 lines maximum, thats all that i need/
to vocally choke you, with this rope, you cant breathe//
asphyxiation methods is the cause of your death/
through mental penetration, LIFELESS, your body left//
lyrically damage ya, with this shit that spawns like illborns/
metaphorically snipe ya, and leave your corpse all sore and malformed/
this battle rap is so callous you wish you werent born/
heartless when i spark shit, thats the way i perform//
when your writin your shit, u use a crayola/
u jus a kid, and im tellin you that its over/
u think your Jay-Z, frontin like you that HOVA/
but your not, your fake, and your rhymes get blown over//
septemeber 11 seems to be repeating again/
your towers fall like bin laden bombed them my friend//
i throw this finishin blow to the back of your skull/
2k wants to stick his Dick in, but your ass is too FULL//

Now i told u in the beginnin that i'd be winnin/
But i guess u werent listenin/
So im deminishin ur name/
Withold ur pain BigNeks i can see it when u spit...coz u aint able to maintain/
Now ur like the spider in the sink/
Slippin down the drain/
I see that Big neck strain when u try to spit verbs/
But i cant understand ur words/
Ur like an asylum seeker seekin a place to sleep/
Just to avoid beef...Creep in the dark BigNeks/
Bollington aint a safe place/
Now that this ho's been checked/ (killed)
Whats that u aint impressed?!?/
Born by cesarian and aint sucked mommy's breast/
So y try now thats wrong Big that warrants an arrest/
So when u get locked up what u gonna say G/
"I got locked up 4 rapin my mother and im only 18"/
Oh breathe and death dont rhyme BigNeks...so y u gettin @ me/
All my rhymes rhyme...now who lacks the lyrical weed?/ (weed = imagination)
Wanna ask ur bitch bout that baby...coz im sure he aint ur seed/

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aight uppin 4 votes... honest votes dont want no dickriders votin, feedback aight.

Aight uppin #1....................................

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Uppin #2 Votes needed up in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Uppin Uppin Uppin Uppin Uppin Uppin Uppin Uppin #3

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Uppin #4..........................................

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first i'd like to say, good verses fellas.

my honest vote would have to go to bigneks in this one. his verse was a little bit more complex and flowed slightly better. mad dog, parts of your verse were rough, but decent. you did okay for a new battler to this site, however you got bested in this one. practice makes perfect. work on your personals and your vocab, as well as some metaphors and you should improve some.

........just my honest feedback. keep up the good work battlecats. one.

s.v.

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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
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mad dog.........i just dropped my honest vote.

i didnt want to peep your verse before battling you, (i like not knowing my opponant sometimes) but you wanted a fair vote before we got down, so i gave you one. if you still want to battle, either set it up and go first, or p.m. me, then i'll set it up.

one.

s.v.

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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

aiyo...honestly, BIG won this battle for 3 reasons.

1--his structure was more sound in my opinion which gave it a better flow


2--his vocab and content was more complex


3--his punches were set-up better and hit harder


HOWEVER
septemeber 11 seems to be repeating again/
your towers fall like bin laden bombed them my friend//
i throw this finishin blow to the back of your skull/
2k wants to stick his Dick in, but your ass is too FULL//
^^^ Using 9/11 references is a NO NO

TSK TSK TSK...that's cheap man...and anyone who uses it as a reference for an internet text battle should be ashamed


Vote: Big

True last uppin...................................

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N-Sight made a good point about that 9/11 thing. It's alway's gonna be too soon to start using that as a punch.
BigNeks had a much better structure and flow. His vocab was much more advanced than Mad Dogs.
I didn't like that shit Mad Dog was talkin, about rape-dat wasn't cool at all.
BigNeks' more appropriate punches hit harder, so i'm gonna give it to him

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