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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
STriniBonafide | 5 | 62.50% | |
fine mind | 3 | 37.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-04-04, 11:11 AM | #1 | |
This is my first post!
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STriniBonafide vs fine mind
IP: 509D 5063
1 post only
10 lines long no dick riding |
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05-04-04, 11:25 AM | #2 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
your a lyrical shamble im just waiting for your shit to emerge and ramble/
you get stampled till the point of painful cramp parolysing/ think you can out run me cmon bitch stunn me/ you get ran over like a train on tracks smashing/ im shining bright and if you piss me off you get a fright and need to save ur life/ when it comes to me u get stampled! you get engraved deep into the ground./ i'll paint my name on your face, have it written in blood stateing me/ i'll put you down in a cemortary you get burried!/ i finally got 2 finish this verse off now don't want to rush this/ i'll leave you murked and let my words stalk n haunt you for countless days/ |
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05-04-04, 11:56 AM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2D4B F56C
There's a fine line between hot shit, and pure shitty spittin/
but it takes a 'fine mind' and ten lines, to prove da second in what he'd written/ where do you find time to craft shitty lines, btween driding and gettin beaten/ my words vital like air, don't ignore just hear as I invade yo ears you concede defeat and listen/ Sittin down, metallica sound in yo ears spurtin lyrics eaten and flow unsteady/ could wack both your lines and you over da head but yo lines got 'wacked' already/ were you sober when you wrote this SHIT, or did u hit up E and quite heady/ I shake my dreads to remove images, yo lines frightening like Freddy/ yo metaphors are'nt bright or tight just 'murky' and with that your punk ass still can murk me// leh me move on to a opponent who's entertaining or worthy, punk you lost this contest...don't even get a jersey//
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05-04-04, 12:00 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2D4B F56C
should be "can't murk me"
My lines were kinda long...hope that's okay Hit up this y'all
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05-04-04, 01:06 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2D4B F56C
Uppin fo votes
put some votes on this shit fellas
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05-04-04, 01:17 PM | #6 | |
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Pretty good battle guys, both dropped tight stuff
Here's brekdown: Fine Punches: 7/10 Personals: 5/10 Opener: 6/10 Closer: 6/10 Overall: 24/40 Strin: Punches: 6/10 Personals: 6/10 Opener: 6/10 Closer: 5/10 Overall: 23/30 Good battle both of you, strin you lost cuz your structure was messed up, you didn't flow good either cuz ya lines were strecthed out so much Vote: Fine mind
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05-04-04, 06:52 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: A3DB 6EAD
Uppin fo votes......
vote up this one peoples.... Vote these battles also http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121858 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121373
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05-05-04, 07:46 AM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2D4B F56C
Uppin fo votes...honest votes only tho...no driding
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05-11-04, 12:52 AM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2D4B F56C
Uppin fo votes...same deal peeps...no dick riding...
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05-11-04, 08:07 AM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2D4B F56C
Uppin fo votes...same deal peeps...no dick riding...
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05-11-04, 08:14 AM | #11 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: B2D8 6E11
Nice shit..
Flow-sTrini punches-STrini structure-tie metas-fine wordplay-mind win-Strini Strini gets my vote because he had a nice flow and good punches.. if u would of have punches that hit hard i would have voted for ya fine.. ight holla |
05-11-04, 08:14 AM | #12 | |
***Man Down***
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IP: B6DF 2706
STriniBonafide you took this battle hands down. nice flow in the begining. could have been better. try to incorporate some multiples in your rhymes. you get my vote b/c of your lyrics and punches.return the favor:LyricalMethod s. taken over
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05-12-04, 03:49 PM | #13 | |
Flyweight
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IP: E7DC 1510
Hit up this wit some votes y'all
I need some honest votes to close this
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05-12-04, 07:01 PM | #14 | |
Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: C1DA C961
v/bonafide
he just came harder and more creative.....fine your rhyme scheme was whack as hell u need to work on that it is very simple and some times it dont even rhyme v/bonafide |
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05-12-04, 07:05 PM | #15 |
Light Weight
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IP: 3240 794D
fine mind got this i think he won because his shit flow
well and he had some decent punches and strin u need to make ur lines shorterbecause them long as lies fucked up your structure foreal foreal. Vote: fine |
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