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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Accomplishment | 1 | 16.67% | |
Pro-Rican | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-18-04, 11:14 PM | #1 |
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Pro-Rican VS Accomplishment
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05-18-04, 11:40 PM | #2 |
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I stand tall…. and I walk thru you ground like tribal/
I aint liable for yo death cause to me yo life aint vital/ I got ryme ammunitaion that can pack missle silos / my flow shoots fire like volcanoes/ off the tropicals, hook on instrumentals like flesh on cannibals/ chaotic when i spit on these ones and twos/ astronimical is the level difference between me and you/ / OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Nigga….. your lyrics sound jibberish / the only thing hot about you is the smell of garbage… look what you started/ you cant even rap a fucking sandwich cause you harmless/ this battle you will never accomplish// I got words that can make ya flip/ My shit is oscar nominated like steven spielberg scripts/ The only way this nigga can ever manage to spit/ Is when he turns fagit and he suck those dicks…// |
05-19-04, 12:16 AM | #3 |
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This is due today doggz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
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05-19-04, 05:35 AM | #4 |
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Accomplishment you still suck it was 2-2.
I just it dq`d because it was being slept on so dont even think you`re good i`ll met you in the cbl.
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05-19-04, 09:04 PM | #5 | |
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IP: EE44 F094
YO sorry i'm late yo...
didnt see this till today shit was wrote in five minutes... Oh and Fuck m section bitch My fingers gripped on, a.k. triggers... don't like p.r.'s cuz because i'm Pro-Wigger.../ my flow in unbreakable to this kids weekness... ...rican more PRO-gay marrige... just because he eats dicks.../ most kids come at me strong and I tend not to feel theres... ...fuck puttin ya'll in retitement... i'm leavin most ya'll in wheelchairs.../ don't weep when i lose, only wins i'm seekin... cuz only two things cry, babies and peurtoricans.../ i'm accomplished, still unable to tell what its like without fans... becasue didnt even call me out, and still get bitchslapped with both hands.../ What votes...
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05-20-04, 09:07 AM | #6 | |
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up for votes on this one yo
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05-20-04, 12:12 PM | #7 | |
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pro-rican.. you gotta work on getting more coherency to your verse... your setups and punches have nothing to do with each other. also, all your wordplay is really generic, and you aren't making it original. "you couldn't rap a sandwhich" was ok, nothing else was. don't talk about how great you are unless you are pulling some great punches in the rest of you verse, which you weren't.
accomp.. kinda obvious you wrote this in 5 minutes, the closer was ok, rest was mostly blah, but enough to take this one. v/ accomp hit back the battle in my sig man. peace.
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05-20-04, 12:25 PM | #8 | |
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Pro-Rican i like your verse alot.accomplishment i liked yours too but your lyrics through my train of thought off. i couldn't connect your shit together ,so i didn't get most of yah shit.
Pro-Rican's best lines: "chaotic when i spit on these ones and twos/ astronimical is the level difference between me and you/ / OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" overall performance 7/10 accomplishment's best lines: "i'm accomplished, still unable to tell what its like without fans... becasue didnt even call me out, and still get bitchslapped with both hands.../" as you can see both had nice punch lines^^^^. but Pro-Rican had consistency throughout his whole verse. better structure and lyrics. accomplishment structure was not great and he didn't spit hard all the way through his verse. consistency is the key. vote=Pro-Rican
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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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05-20-04, 05:09 PM | #9 | |
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yeah its aight penial unit... voters
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05-20-04, 09:31 PM | #10 |
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05-20-04, 10:30 PM | #11 | |
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IP: EE44 F094
uppin samwiched
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05-23-04, 03:23 PM | #12 | |
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up for votes man.
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05-23-04, 07:09 PM | #13 | |
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uppp before i blow poeople heads off man... VOTES
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05-26-04, 02:17 PM | #14 | |
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uppin for nut sux... huh... i have eyebrows
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05-26-04, 02:57 PM | #15 | |
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this was a weak as fuck battle
both verse sucked...........PRO your verse lacked the punches and was really weak........your need to work on your structure and re-wording your punches so that they hit harder.......you had a couple good lines but some of the concepts was played.....keep elevating accomplishment- what the fuck was you thinking.......your shit is like only 5 lines cause you just reaching for lines with that structure......your shit was weak and your punches didnt really stick.......work on your structure because that threw off your flow and made it hard to understand.....even if you had this battle one i would have looked down on your verse alot becaues of that structure v/pro
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