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40Caliberhitz | 5 | 100.00% | |
fine mind | 0 | 0% | |
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05-24-04, 01:39 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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40CaliberHitz "CoRpSmAn" Vs fine mind
IP: 3240 794D
8-10 lines Nuttin Much Just A Light Battle!
No Crew/Or Hate Votes No DickRyder Votes Explain All Votes GoodLuck FindMind fams he's spitten first!
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05-24-04, 01:50 PM | #2 | |
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IP: D0B1 D2B1
when you drop then i'll vote but can u two please vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125740 thnx
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05-24-04, 02:12 PM | #3 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
caliber... is a rookie whos just plain garbage/
got no lyrics dat are decent... just weird and retarded/ i'll be takeing you down... wid one verse breaking you down/ your shit has be outdated... like been waitin anxiously/ for someone to take notice... den people say which mutha fucker wrote-diss/ come back and stomp the living shit outta you... till your dieing uncontious/ lost your confidence... get doctor on da case, or perhaps a brain surgion/ learn a new lesson, my page is marked on you like a book mark/ i like to agonise you.. for just bein gayness/ twist lyrics for the slaughtering... getting the after effect of bein traumatised/
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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/ and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally// i am a killer and you cant sway me/ because man brendas got a baby// (dope) can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~ hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man// |
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05-24-04, 03:30 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
I left-the-whore-dying as he bled-galore-trying to defeat the immaculate one//
I’m hazardous dun, like blind policeman shooting ur shots were inaccurate son// Feel the crunch-from-the-‘sun’ if it’s about ‘chips’ as you munch-on-the-cum// Kid ‘whines’ so much I could have sworn we were at a ‘reggae concert’// I’ll kill u’r bouncer…only peeps hollering at you are gay-porn sponsors// Faggot I’ll scold ya…in ‘poker’ I come with ‘full house’s like Bob Sagget// Don’t forget it…my shots noticeably mark ya like shit stains on rabbits// Inspect the gadgets only to see my punches knock competition unconscious// I’m righteous…stress n guns meet ya chest, I suggest u proceed on cautious// Check the flow now...Kid 'whines' so much he’s got a subscription to ‘Royale'// I 'must be dope' the way kid's trying ta sneak my rhymes 'across the borders'//
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05-25-04, 12:48 PM | #5 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/ and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally// i am a killer and you cant sway me/ because man brendas got a baby// (dope) can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~ hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man// |
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05-25-04, 01:13 PM | #6 | |
New to RB
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IP: 467F 936A
Hits knocked you out the water son
Fine Mind your rhymes are too basic and not everything flowed right....come on man you're disgracin your name. Hitz Good stuffs Almost everyline was a punch but you had no personals...to me personals are important cuz thats how you know the flow was at least somewhat customized ALSO!!this line should be erased ..... "Feel the crunch-from-the-‘sun’ if it’s about ‘chips’ as you munch-on-the-cum" Its an aight line but kid, come on...first of all 3 lines doesn't = 1 bar and second YOUR OWN RULES say 8-10 lines and with that extra line you have 11 I would vote for Fine Mind just for you breaking ya own rule but his verse doesn't deserve a freebie....on the other hand FINE MIND if you want to push a DQ based on him breaking his own rule thats on you...How do you want your W? |
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05-27-04, 11:40 AM | #7 | |
New to RB
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IP: E5DE 0961
40 cal, u got this, flow, punches, multies, u had everythin over the kid...no contest..
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05-27-04, 11:57 AM | #8 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 4F30 825C
I’ll kill u’r bouncer…only peeps hollering at you are gay-porn sponsors//
Faggot I’ll scold ya…in ‘poker’ I come with ‘full house’s like Bob Sagget 40 best line^^^ lost your confidence... get doctor on da case, or perhaps a brain surgion/ learn a new lesson, my page is marked on you like a book mark/ i like to agonise you.. for just bein gayness/ twist lyrics for the slaughtering... getting the after effect of bein traumatised didn't really even rhyme^^ fuked up ya flow vote-40
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05-27-04, 11:59 AM | #9 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 4F30 825C
oh..by the way..vote please.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126663
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05-27-04, 12:17 PM | #10 | |
***Man Down***
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IP: B6DF 2706
40 won this hands down. lyrical your verse was allover the place. bad structure, bad punches and not enough complicated lyrics. step yah game up dun. anyway 40 nice punches and lyrics. i like you punches,especially the one at the end.-its a lil dull but i never heard it befo.return the fava on lyricalmethod vs. furious
best lines: Kid ‘whines’ so much I could have sworn we were at a ‘reggae concert’// I’ll kill u’r bouncer…only peeps hollering at you are gay-porn sponsors// vote=40
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05-28-04, 06:03 AM | #11 | |
Banned: Cheating
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ok
IP: 6AD2 8F43
40 wins,hands down.....structure,punches,everything
lyrical-structure/flow woz way off punches weak ur verses didnt even rhyme? |
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