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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
King Solo | 5 | 83.33% | |
Killah Bwoy | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-27-04, 08:58 AM | #1 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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Killah Bwoy Vs King Solo (Topical)
IP: 970D 9C87
aiight lets go
blind spit 10-30 lines check in topic:hmm...escapin from prison no d/r cv or biting good luck
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05-27-04, 09:03 AM | #2 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 334E 75C2
aight i'm checkin in
that's a gud topic i'm gonna enjoy this one |
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05-27-04, 09:03 AM | #3 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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IP: 970D 9C87
checkin In...Lets Go Playa Playa..................
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05-27-04, 09:39 AM | #4 | |||
Skadoosh!
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My home has been this jail site; I got life for killing a guy in a knife fight
Security may be tight but no one can stop me from escaping tonight My crime was self defence and I’ve served ten years of redeeming My cell-mate thinks I’m dreaming, but I’ve spent six months scheming Plan is full proof because I’ve got a bent guard ready on point Whilst he distracts the other guards, I’ll be busting out of this joint This place is a living hell but now I’m giving it my final farewell I already snagged the keys to my cell, and now all is going well I don’t know how he did it but the guard got everyone distracted Now I’m out in the yard, there’s a car outside where I’ll be extracted I wanted my escape to go off without a hitch, now its hit a glitch I’m only halfway across the pitch, lights have caught me…”What a bitch!” Now there was no fire but instincts told me to ‘Stop’ ‘Drop’ and ‘Roll’ Luckily it worked out as the light passed by on its set patrol I got to my feet and calmed myself down trying to regain control Then I set off on a sprint heading directly towards my escape goal Less than a minute I hit the gate, all that stood in my way was the barb wire I began to climb; not turning back cuz freedom was too much of a desire I reached the top and ripped away at the wire as it tore into my hand Blood constantly dripping, this wasn’t exactly what I had planned But I can’t stop now……I pulled and the barb wire finally came free I cut myself as I hopped over, now more blood is dripping from my knee In my car now with the engine started……my escape is over…done But I ask myself was it worth it, now I’ll spend my life always on the run!! |
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05-27-04, 09:59 AM | #5 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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IP: 970D 9C87
Sounds Of Cups Clashing Against The Jail Cells Filled The Room-
The Place Reeked Of Feet,Piss,Shit and other disgusting Fumes- Prison Guarded By BarbWired Fences And Rifles Hawking Over Us- 5 Am Sittin' In The Jail Cell Alone Thinking Of Men I Could Trust- Noon Time It Was Lunch I Gathered A Group Of Twenty Seven Men- Wrote Out The Plan Behind A Portrait In Sloppy Blue Pen- Handed Out A Copy Of The Escape Plan To Each- A Few Were nerves about this So I Gave A Preperation Speech- The Guards Will Not Control The Prisoners ANYMORE!!! Im Sick And Tired Of Being Trapped Behind Barred DOORS- We Can Overpower Them I Mean Most Of Us Are In SHAPE- Lets Take These Fuckers Down Together We Can Escape- The Talk Seemed To Of Worked Everyone Seemed Motivated- We Went Back To Our Cells..22 Hours Left..We patiently Waited- Each Prisoner Searched The Cell Looking For Harmful Things- Picking uP Rocks,Sticks.Wires,Metal And Even Bed Springs- 2 Hours Remaining EveryBodies Pumped And Ready For Action- I was Surprised to see Many Men I Smiled In Reaction- ..The Clocks Ticking And Its Cutting Down To The Wire- My Mind Was Pumped Up But My Body Was Still Feeling' Tired- 10...9...8...7...6..5...4....3...2....1 IT WAS TIME- Everyone Sprang Up Ready To Carry On With This Evil Crime- Took A Rope And Lasooe'd It Around The Guards Neck- He Couldn't Scream..Rope Strangling His Vocal Chords Life Was Set- I Took The Keys From His Pocket And Took The Gun Too- Unlocking all the prisoners..I THINK THE PLAN MIGHT COME THROUGH- The Prisoners Used Their Weapons And Knocked Out 5 or 6 Guards- One Of Them Reached Out Their Hand And Sounded The Alarm- Now We're Moving Faster Headin for the Gates we're almost Free- All Of A Sudden 7 Men Dropped To Their Knees..Snipers In The Trees- More Of the prisoners kept falling..Only 5 Left We're almost their- Two More Of My Men Fell And A Bullet Grased My Hair- Damn It Was Just Me Left.. Felt A Slug Pierce through my back- Fell To The Ground..Eyes Rolled To The Back Of My Head..Dead On The tracks
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05-27-04, 10:30 AM | #6 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 3240 794D
#1...topic is played...but...here we go
All points are out of 10...with 10 being the highest amt. King Solo: Flow: 7 Rhyming: 7 Vocab: 6 Wodplay: 3..none Imagery (20): 12 Story/lyrics: 7 Entertainment Value: 7 Stand out lines: Now there was no fire but instincts told me to ‘Stop’ ‘Drop’ and ‘Roll’ Luckily it worked out as the light passed by on its set patrol I got to my feet and calmed myself down trying to regain control Then I set off on a sprint heading directly towards my escape goal Total out of 80 points possible: 49 Killa B. Flow: 7 Rhyming: 7 Vocab: 5 Wodplay: 3..none really Imagery (20): 14 Story/lyrics: 7 Entertainment value: 7 Stand out lines:The Guards Will Not Control The Prisoners ANYMORE!!! Im Sick And Tired Of Being Trapped Behind Barred DOORS- We Can Overpower Them I Mean Most Of Us Are In SHAPE- Lets Take These Fuckers Down Together We Can Escape- ^^ U bolded the right paret...those were good lines Total out of 80 point possible: 50 CLose..close battle...but Killa wins this for more descriptive verse Vote: Killa Stay up fellas..respect 1 |
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05-27-04, 10:39 AM | #7 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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IP: 970D 9C87
word sick vote......................uppin.............
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05-27-04, 11:19 AM | #8 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
aiight im gonna use the same vote method as n-sight for this topical:
KiNg SoLo: Flow: 8..it went consistent all the way through Rhyming: 8...was really feelin the way this was structured and how well it rhymed Vocabulary: 7...not too complex but still good Wordplay: 5...seen some wordplay but not much Imagery (20): hmm hard one 14...it had a lot of imagery but only a couple good bars where the imagery was just sick Story/lyrics: 7...at least he made it out alive lol unlike killah Entertainment Value:7...it was nice and a good read overall: 56/80 Killah Bwoy: flow: 7...was alos really consistent rhyming:8...i think he held his verse together with hott rhymes vocabulary: 4...wasnt complex but didnt affect the verse much wordplay: 6...not alot of wordplay but decent imagery (20): 17..imagery was off the fuckin chains sik imagery story: 7...good read all the way through entertainment value: 6...it was entertaining and deep i like the ending overall : 55/80 vote : KiNg SoLo too hott pieces...prolly the best and closest topical battle i have seen in a while...dopeness from both of you but only one can win and king solo pulled this one out with the better flow and it was jus a lil more entertaining i think a remtach on a different topic would be even sicker ~!1!~
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05-27-04, 11:28 AM | #9 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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IP: 970D 9C87
word word...i respect your vote....good shit....1-1 KING SOLO good spit dawg fo real ...whos gonna take this
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05-27-04, 12:55 PM | #10 | |||||
***Man Down***
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IP: B6DF 2706
Killah Bwoy & KiNg SoLo nicc topical verse. i like topical .::N-Sight::.. i think it reall shows how good an mc really. it shows other niggas that you can write shit other than tryin to rip niggas.Killah Bwoy i like you ending. kind of brutal but it was good. KiNg SoLo you verse was good too, i also like your ending. but if i had to give a vote to either of you it would be to Killah Bwoy cuz i was feelin his endin. most niggas who try to escape either get caught or die tryin. anyway KiNg SoLo your shit was made cool but i go to go with Killah Bwoy on this b/s his focus was better. he really wen tin to the mind of an escapee.i repect both of you guys b/c i never thought niggas on here could expand their minds past battling.
vote=Killah Bwoy
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05-27-04, 01:02 PM | #11 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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^^^^?? why was my name mentioned?
oh...i forgot...i do drop OPEN MICS ugh |
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05-27-04, 05:31 PM | #12 | ||||
L.E
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A'yo...both verses was ill fo real...King Solo I thought your verse had some mda multies...told a nice story too. I dont think the topic is played, but I just started Topical battling. Your structure was consistant, and your verse ryhmed very very well. Killah Bwoy...I thought you had some nice original shit. I thought your verse told a better more detailed story...flow was consistent, and it all ryhmed...vocabulary was tite too...King Solo, your vocab was pretty basic...
So I'ma give this to Killah Bwoy. Vote- Killah Bwoy No hate...drop on this topical later...me against Re$tricted... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126356 |
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05-27-04, 07:47 PM | #13 | |||||||
Ble$$ed With Talent
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IP: 970D 9C87
aiight i gotchu ^..good vote.............................
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05-28-04, 05:38 AM | #14 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Aight tight battle here peeps i thought this was a great topic to pick and both had real good detail to it...
King Solo: had a good structure to his verse and maintained a good detail to his rhyme decent rhyming wordplay was there and all in all kept it real props to ya. Killah Bwoy: Wow i liked that verse i really enjoyed reading it the wordplay was off the chart dope man props to ya, The bold bars were the best lines and well done props again nice rhyming and kept the topic suspensful you got this hott topic battle both of ya. V/Killah Bwoy
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05-28-04, 05:48 AM | #15 | |||
Addicted
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IP: 49D1 EDA6
yea this battle was tight both had good verses n shit......kingsolo when i was readin urs i was like how is he gonna pull it off wit jus him and a crooked guard i dint think it was possible...the only thing i liked it was creative and shit good verse homey.....killa i liked ur alot...i liked the way u went through the plan wit the men who was tryin to escape that was pretty sic espiciallly when u said they was runnig to the gate but they kept dropin one by one till all of u was dead..that seemed more realistic then solos so imma give u the vote...good battle u guys should battle again it would be good
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