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05-23-04, 09:31 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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Unholy Wun vs. triple_n
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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05-23-04, 10:09 PM | #2 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Check.
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05-23-04, 10:17 PM | #3 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Checkin in^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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05-24-04, 05:10 PM | #4 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Ight:
This kid is Struggle's Day after Day for his RB record to Suceed.. But after u Read this it'll Have Blood Trickle as His Eye's Bleed.. Do i Make ur Stomach Turn More then Gettin ur Ball's Tagged.. u Spit Slow b/c u Lagged?Or did Gay Porno get ur CP Red Flagged. You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree.. Cant you See?My Flow leaves u Dead,Floatin out to Sea.. Ur a Itch that Need's to Be Scratched like Ur Pubic Lice.. Take Some Advice when a Girl Offers u Crab Cake dont take a Slice.. Countless Wins?Why does he Lie to Try and Make Friends.. Wait!?! Im 100% Sure that Lieng is one of God's Deadly Sin's.. You should be "iLL" Commin form Big Bad NewYork City.. Disgracin the Streets with ur Half Baked Battle's its a Pity.. How are u N[Cubed] When ur Shit doesnt fit the A-B-C's.. Only reason u got 23 Win's is b/c uve battles Wanna-Be Emcee's.. It's Ok Dont be sad or Cry ur Audio Record is 0-0 So ur Still Evan.. Bitch?Yes ur Mine But dont Cross the Line or ur Brain ull be Retreavin.. Ok.
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05-27-04, 01:35 AM | #5 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 4289 77F4
Haha....^^^^^thats your verse, you in way over ya head kid
Ok look kid, Rule #1 when making personals is stick to the facts To make it worse, ya punches were more played than "kanye west" tracks I mean look at ya verse, you spit fillers by the bunch Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch" For you to get at least one vote in this thread is gon be a real strife Your lyrics are "juvenile" they need good rhymes "in they life" Your verse is wack as fuck, but for your effort I applaud Its sad tho, cuz wit verses like that u gon get "sonned" more than "baby wards" Did u even see ya verse, it has exactly 0 lyrical worth Its not ya fault, I seen ya pic, you've been "fucked since birth" I was surprised to see u asian, you tryin' to be next jin? U seemed caucasian, cuz lookin at ya verse u'd think "Vaniila ice" is ya "next of kin" I can't even call ya rhymes newb, cuz they younger than u in ya pic I mean how u gon challenge a vet, when ya rhymes still on "wic"
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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05-28-04, 01:26 AM | #6 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 84AD 8ED3
blah battle
unholy, you're style of punches don't really hit too hard, you're basically making declaritive statements, rather than working in some clever concepts, don't get me wrong though, you had some cool lines triple, you landed more punches, however most of them are terribly played times 739864563479868735653756897, and please...i beg of you...refrain from bolding and using quotations. however, you did throw a punch in every couplet and landed more than unholy, you came harder, but they were still played weak battle, not feeling either verse vote = triple |
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05-30-04, 04:14 AM | #7 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
the breakdown...
unholy first This kid is Struggle's Day after Day for his RB record to Suceed.. But after u Read this it'll Have Blood Trickle as His Eye's Bleed.. 5 are you serious...that's not an opener... Do i Make ur Stomach Turn More then Gettin ur Ball's Tagged.. u Spit Slow b/c u Lagged?Or did Gay Porno get ur CP Red Flagged. 6.5 decent...stupid and played though...where's some wordplay You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree.. Cant you See?My Flow leaves u Dead,Floatin out to Sea.. 4 your kidding with this line right? Ur a Itch that Need's to Be Scratched like Ur Pubic Lice.. Take Some Advice when a Girl Offers u Crab Cake dont take a Slice.. 3 wow...i'll never get these 3 minutes back Countless Wins?Why does he Lie to Try and Make Friends.. Wait!?! Im 100% Sure that Lieng is one of God's Deadly Sin's.. 4 hmmm...kind of a personal...although terrible...wit...look it up in the dictionary You should be "iLL" Commin form Big Bad NewYork City.. Disgracin the Streets with ur Half Baked Battle's its a Pity.. 3 hmm...BRUTAL KID How are u N[Cubed] When ur Shit doesnt fit the A-B-C's.. Only reason u got 23 Win's is b/c uve battles Wanna-Be Emcee's.. 5 basic...but not terrible...so it's your best line It's Ok Dont be sad or Cry ur Audio Record is 0-0 So ur Still Evan.. Bitch?Yes ur Mine But dont Cross the Line or ur Brain ull be Retreavin.. 1 wow...that's a bad line...that's all i can say...oh oh...also you suck at life...haha jokes i'm going to kill myself if triplen's verse is that bad... Ok look kid, Rule #1 when making personals is stick to the facts To make it worse, ya punches were more played than "kanye west" tracks 7 hahah...see unholy that's a line... I mean look at ya verse, you spit fillers by the bunch Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch" 7 another decent to good line...i'm starting to wake up again For you to get at least one vote in this thread is gon be a real strife Your lyrics are "juvenile" they need good rhymes "in they life" 5 decent... Your verse is wack as fuck, but for your effort I applaud Its sad tho, cuz wit verses like that u gon get "sonned" more than "baby wards"4boo..not a big fan Did u even see ya verse, it has exactly 0 lyrical worth Its not ya fault, I seen ya pic, you've been "fucked since birth" 7 BAMM...good shit...woulda been better with a link I was surprised to see u asian, you tryin' to be next jin? U seemed caucasian, cuz lookin at ya verse u'd think "Vaniila ice" is ya "next of kin"4 boo...ice lines are wack I can't even call ya rhymes newb, cuz they younger than u in ya pic I mean how u gon challenge a vet, when ya rhymes still on "wic"6 haha...decent...easy battle to decide vote triple N
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05-30-04, 02:50 PM | #8 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for unholy_wun:
flow:workin kinda basic though nothing too great 6/10 volcab:average array here nothing too say 5/10 punches:not too many good lines mainly played ideas best i thought,"You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree.." still kinda played 6/10 overall:17/30 breakdown for triple_n: flow:nice no problems i had with it 6/10 volcab:edged out wun but still room for improvment 6/10 punches:best line,"Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch"" aside from that you addressed him well my only problem was the valina ice line, pretty played either way you took it here too 7/10 overall:19/30 vote--triple_n got this in my eyes
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05-30-04, 08:48 PM | #9 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
3-0 triple_n wins
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