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Verbal Violence | 0 | 0% | |
Dedd Sirius | 5 | 100.00% | |
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05-24-04, 10:28 AM | #1 | |
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Dedd Sirius v. Verbal Violence
IP: F3E1 2D69
rules as posted in call out...
YO MODS, check me if i set this up right, please/thank you! waitin for VV to check....
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05-26-04, 11:36 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 1BD1 5B1D
alright here my verse
yo yo check it ayo he calls him self dedd sirius// im gonna inject my flows like venom give him a virus// i called u out cuz use quiet nuttin to say so hush up let me finish be silent// your new to rb and so am i but thas all gonna change let me tell u why// im a lyrical perhana peep my flow u dont wanna get stuck than quit that aint my persana// i come harder than a rock top notch kick it in gear and u get clocked// with a 1 and a 2 call me cashes clay wit da golden shoes// i knock foos in in bunches so just for u its gonna take a dozen// maybe battlin me to u it feels like i come in hundreds// but thers one learn ya lesson before ya step up son// once i start there aint no stoppin man post ya verse sounds like mother goose beat boxin// u claim boohyah area well this aint it im the new era kid steppin keep commin i dair ya// look yall he has an aron carter avatar are ya gay or u just look at him to get hard// and thas a rap kid after this your new to rb wont last ull be finished rappin cuz i wopped dat ass// yo time for ya verse aight holla back ~1~ |
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05-27-04, 06:59 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 1BD1 5B1D
yo r u gonna post up ya verse kid? if ya do hurry up i got other battles to start aight ~1~
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05-28-04, 12:15 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 1BD1 5B1D
man u tellin me i seem sketchy post up ya verse im waitin
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05-31-04, 05:49 AM | #5 | |
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hard battle
IP: 981C FD80
damn this a tuff one....not like i could vote 4 anyone else Good battle, just word of advice dont diss yourself by sayin u a rookie, people just stop payin attention when they read that shit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127097 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127465 |
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06-04-04, 10:14 PM | #6 | |
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IP: D62D 1F85
yo, my bad i was out of town, my sorry, i'll post this up.....
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06-04-04, 11:25 PM | #7 | |
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IP: D62D 1F85
i came to waste haters with clips packed with now and laters//
bringin more buzz than meth chicks with electric masterbaters// ya namin yaself as "verbal violence" but i'm laffin at the rhyme with "herbal silence"// head thicker than "urkel's eye-lens", you the grand prize survivor on "gerbil island"// your stoopider than ketamine, staggerin through battles like a combo of roofies and 'phetamines// you've never schemed, and ya only chance with tha ladies is to bust out some wetter dreams// you approach farm animals with repetitive pelvic thrusting motions// and your an appetitive purchaser of blue pillz and messy lotions// aight, peace. uppin for votes. please vote even if its only a poll response. good luck verbal violence. |
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06-04-04, 11:48 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 2F05 D129
Oh no................when i read verabal's verse oh no....not like 1 or 2 lines didn't rhyme im srry but this Automatically goes to Dedd cuz his lines seem to rhyme 'n' shit
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06-06-04, 09:14 AM | #9 | |
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IP: D62D 1F85
yo, uppin for votes, ima vote on some other battles to keep the karma moving
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06-06-04, 09:28 AM | #10 | |
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IP: FDA6 9B56
yo dedd took this one because he actualy rhymed.... verbal your verse was ok but this aint story time playa, ya gotta trow in the rhymes. dedd took it on punches and flow as well as structure.... one sided as fuck...
VOTE= DEDD need votes below http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128280
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06-06-04, 10:49 AM | #11 | |
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IP: C1DA C961
have to go with Dedd he had a better punches and more personels in his and I could understand it more so my vote goes to Dedd
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06-06-04, 11:08 PM | #12 | |
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IP: D62D 1F85
thanks y'all for the votes and feedback, 3-0 dedd.
Is that KO?
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06-07-04, 10:40 AM | #13 | |
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IP: F3E1 2D69
uppin^^^^^^ for votes. much love to all voters in this piece!!!
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06-07-04, 10:51 AM | #14 | |
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IP: 7402 EED9
yo this was a simple but good battle i liked the use of vocab for dedd it was hto the personals were there it was a good battle but you both have to elevate verbal you need to work on strucher flow and overal punches sux man
v/ dedd
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06-07-04, 11:34 AM | #15 |
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IP: CEF5 716F
This is a sad little competition.
Verbal- I gotta say that your opening was good cuz you came straight in with personals. Everything about your 4th line was wack though, "your new to rb and so am i but thas all gonna change let me tell u why" is enough to make any emcee (or femcee) bow his head. The middle didn't rhyme like everyone else said. That one line about mother goose beat boxin though was tight as fuck. Dedd- U know u took this. The 2nd line was tight about "more buzz than meth chicks" and your flow was just overall better. Never again, however, should you use the word "stoopider". v/Dedd |
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