rules:

no d/r,crew,unexplained,or hate votes
5-10 lines
must have 200 posts to vote(in other words no herb votes)
you spit first
due within 24 hours or noshow is declared
first to 5 or 3-0 knockout


Win by KO

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check in before you spit so i know you'll show

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5-10 lines??? This ain't no nursery rhyme board.

It's time to decide who can actually rhyme dude,
You about to get fucked like your who crew's "behind" you,
Break your spine through, need more than lines to defeat me,
With a style so stretched I'm surprised you can't "reach" me,
Lines finished your styles diminished smile with a grimace,,
You need 24 hours while I've just dropped in five minutes!
I've got this battle "locked down" with a key to your ass,
5-10 lines? Fuckin retard get back to remedial class,
Dawgfatha the distressed emcee trys his best to impress, please-
This ain't a classroom-you need more than a pen and paper to test me.

Peeze.

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"Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs,
Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0)
"Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats,
Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe))

Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League

checkin in

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ayo,
I've got thought seisures,like Harry Benson*
Cept mine can get typed,better watch out and feel the tension
My punches feel like Muhamed Ali's
Rapping ''quality'' superior to Taleb Quali's
Trying to be ''brave'' like Atlanta**
But I decide if you get happiness,like a kid wit his ''santa''
So decide to back down before its too late
Cause I'll ''beat'' you worse than you do to your dick when you masterbate
Stop being lonely for chrissakes find a hoe
Before you turn insane just like Edgar Allan Poe

please

*-Harry Benson is the Michael Chricton character in the book:The Terminal Man(good book)

**-Atlanta Braves the baseball team

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Illiance
It's time to decide who can actually rhyme dude,
You about to get fucked like your who crew's "behind" you,
pretty nice. 6/10
Break your spine through, need more than lines to defeat me,
With a style so stretched I'm surprised you can't "reach" me,
Ok. metiphore so-so. 5/10
Lines finished your styles diminished smile with a grimace,,
You need 24 hours while I've just dropped in five minutes!
was OK. but it aint tru. 4/10
I've got this battle "locked down" with a key to your ass,
5-10 lines? Fuckin retard get back to remedial class,
dont get the first half. second? OK. 4/10
Dawgfatha the distressed emcee trys his best to impress, please-
This ain't a classroom-you need more than a pen and paper to test me.
nice flo. 6/10
You had nice flo wit nice multi's an some ok metiphores thru-out. But honestly you lacked punches. Just work on throwin sum in wit all your multi's.
25/50

Dawgfatha
ayo,
I've got thought seisures,like Harry Benson*
Cept mine can get typed,better watch out and feel the tension
no punch. u talk bout ur seizures 2/10
My punches feel like Muhamed Ali's
Rapping ''quality'' superior to Taleb Quali's
talk bout urself again. 1/10
Trying to be ''brave'' like Atlanta**
But I decide if you get happiness,like a kid wit his ''santa''
atlanta braves..i ge it but NO. santa? NO. 2/10
So decide to back down before its too late
Cause I'll ''beat'' you worse than you do to your dick when you masterbate
Most played line in the world. Beat-Masterbate. 1/10
Stop being lonely for chrissakes find a hoe
Before you turn insane just like Edgar Allan Poe
This isn't school. And I feel like I'm there. Readin this. 2/10
[size=1]You had the right idea in your style and ryhme scheme. But everything else lacked. You need to talk about your opponent, not yourself. Use personal's and direct punches. It will help your verse alot.[/size[
8/50

Vote/Illiance

Drop an honest vote on the Battle's in my sig. Thanks.

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aight will do, u actually gonna vote on the poll?

peace

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F.C.L- Need's No Introduction-F.C.L

"Phenomonal skill belongin' to Ill I spray thugs,
Never "no-showing" like "Melodic Methods" members in gay clubs..." - (illiance - 3 Quest - 0)
"Glisten tracks, deliver raps you make a livin' dissin' cats,
Face it - you ain't got balls, an' you only "flow" through "pissin' flaps..." (Illiance vs Kesha (No Show, Hoe))

Wins: 6 Lost: 3 -Blunts Battle League

I would If I could. your main man set this at 200 posts tho. So i can't. Sorry.

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^^if you knew anything about the ''seisures'' im talking about youd know theyre extremely violent and in the book he kills people 5 times his size and shit but w/e.

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you don't kill people with a seizure. It's an medical condition inflicted on your own body. And what book are you refering too?

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aight...


to me illiance took this due to his punches... he had way more "fake" personals, and quite a bit harder punches.. the flow was even.. goes to illiance for this line:
Dawgfatha the distressed emcee trys his best to impress, please-
This ain't a classroom-you need more than a pen and paper to test me.
^felt that bar right there..

that was a pretty good closer..

v/Illiance

No hate.

Return an HONEST vote thie battle below plz - Much appreciated
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132933

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illiance: hmmm.....I don't need to break this battle down completely cuz
it was to me one-sided for real.....no hate tho.........well you had ok punches
nothin' too ill to make me stop and read it again....flow was ok & syllable
count wasn't together well but it was decent.....vocab was no there well
its not important anwayz....creativity/originality was decent nuthin' too
special aswell........

dawgfatha_13: well this wasn't a very good drop in my opinion..... punches
weren't hardhitting as it should be of course....flow was lacking & syllable
was worser the bars length wasn't that well done ya feel me......... vocab
was ok but that category isn't important at all...........creativity/originality
was low not really there much.....

vote: illiance

do a honest vote on my shit links in the sig Etcetera vs. me link...

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