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Durmil | 5 | 55.56% | |
Gods son | 4 | 44.44% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-12-04, 10:35 AM | #1 | |||||||
A legendary OG
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Durmil v Gods son
IP: A03F 720C
ayo house rules..like you said youll match my bars..spit by Tues @ 4..i'll go first
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<Marquee Direction='Right'>«·´`·.(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*).·´`·» *·.¸¸.*....God's Son....*·.¸¸.* «·´`·.(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸).·´`·» </MArquee> <Marquee Direction='Left'>Free Agent!!! Free Agent!!!<Marquee Direction='Right'> |
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07-12-04, 11:59 AM | #2 | |||||||
A legendary OG
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IP: A03F 720C
Gods son's sicker than "syphillis"...Only thing Durmil could "Win At" is "Ignorance"..
.I Spill sweeter than liquorish...and this fuckas spits sounds like freakin gibberish I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!! Menace Pleaded-To-Hault-Da-Grief so if i was ya wife “Refusin-To-Cook-Meat” u still couldn’t ‘BEAT~Me~OVER~DA~BEEF’!!// Be proud ur bruised-as a newbie on RB cuz thats the rhythm and the beat Y'all know Durms already losin’-to-me widout his D/R ‘FANS~AROUND~TO~CHEAT’!!?????// His "Refugee" Ass Is up in canada Hopin For A *Cash~Plan*!..No "Kodac",I Snipe-Atcha *Flash~Span*.. This "Husbands Rubbish"..Findin His Mom in a trash can (Kodac.. bear in canada) Gee (one who he was battlin') whatchu think ya nice that youre undefeated..damn youre the new KillaCam I get it..you think youre good now cuz you beat a girl Rapmistress, wow youre the man.. Switchin-the-Flow...hope you Bastards-are-Listening/ I heard ya PIMP-is-a-HOE...and ya ACTION-is-Missing// Or Missing-In-Action, this cat must have a dissing-attraction...Cause steppin to me you'll be gettin flipped like "Reciprocal Fractions"// I only got "one-thing" for this TERRIBLE-BASTARD...A middle-finger thats "up-in-the-air" like Durmils MARITAL STATUS!//...Got Ya "X-posed" On "Full Blast"..Complete Opposite Of A *Mild~Horn*...Ya *Wild Scorn* From Durmil who sists in his office looking at child porn...ouch
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<Marquee Direction='Right'>«·´`·.(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*).·´`·» *·.¸¸.*....God's Son....*·.¸¸.* «·´`·.(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸).·´`·» </MArquee> <Marquee Direction='Left'>Free Agent!!! Free Agent!!!<Marquee Direction='Right'> |
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07-13-04, 02:12 AM | #3 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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~Witness The Skill~
IP: B90F 540D
^alotta ur shit is old....
The Murking Begins... Durm gonna have ya "head pop out ya body" like "jack in the box" Fuck glocks, Durm got "wires attached to you" like "electrical shocks" Snatch ya "plates", like "race cars" without "pedals" im too "fast to "break" God's Son ya style is just like "animated anal sex" cuz ya "ass is fake" Jesus!(God's Son), ur rep is whack how u expect to gimmie an L boy? Ur whole verse struggled to come(cum) "fresh" like a clit fighting "altoids" If your God's Son then u already know that ur death is destined* Battlin me "showed guts", now im playin jump rope wit ya "intestines" I could spit somethin blazin or come to ya house and punch ya face in It's amazin, your disses are about as useless as your punctuation** I'd rip on ur sexuality but u admit ur gay, got an ass like a pig sty Don't cry, but im lookin at ur location and askin your in bed wit stu y?*** Voters gonna be sayin "Durmil just murdered Legendary"...Oh Gee**** But you were just "too tiny from the start" like a pre-mature baby Stand correct, Kill ya again in three days this time u wont ressurect***** My intellect leave ya "fired", and ya too whack for a "severence cheque" Durm Stop Embarrising This Guy This battle was a waste of time, ur as frail as a gorilla on glass treelimbs G GS=no chance, last "man to take me out" was the "doc that delivered me"! *God's Son in actuallity died...hence the line (death is destined) **his punctuation was whack...all over the place,Caps, ~~... just ugly *** he's from bed-stuy?!?! *****God's son ressurected after the third day, he wont if i kill him again lol ****Legendary OG is in his profile |
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07-13-04, 04:20 AM | #4 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: 4C49 64C6
God Son
Gods son's sicker than "syphillis"...Only thing Durmil could "Win At" is "Ignorance".. .I Spill sweeter than liquorish...and this fuckas spits sounds like freakin gibberish /\ Stretched but an ok opener a lil multi and good rhyme I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!! /\ Stretched again but a nice punch Menace Pleaded-To-Hault-Da-Grief so if i was ya wife “Refusin-To-Cook-Meat” u still couldn’t ‘BEAT~Me~OVER~DA~BEEF’!!// /\ Flow off but an aight punch Be proud ur bruised-as a newbie on RB cuz thats the rhythm and the beat Y'all know Durms already losin’-to-me widout his D/R ‘FANS~AROUND~TO~CHEAT’!!?????// /\ Nice diss better this time His "Refugee" Ass Is up in canada Hopin For A *Cash~Plan*!..No "Kodac",I Snipe-Atcha *Flash~Span*.. This "Husbands Rubbish"..Findin His Mom in a trash can (Kodac.. bear in canada) /\ Stretched and flow was off Gee (one who he was battlin') whatchu think ya nice that youre undefeated..damn youre the new KillaCam I get it..you think youre good now cuz you beat a girl Rapmistress, wow youre the man.. /\ Nice diss but the () thing made it a bit hard to read Switchin-the-Flow...hope you Bastards-are-Listening/ I heard ya PIMP-is-a-HOE...and ya ACTION-is-Missing// /\ Nice good flow and structure more of this Or Missing-In-Action, this cat must have a dissing-attraction...Cause steppin to me you'll be gettin flipped like "Reciprocal Fractions"// I only got "one-thing" for this TERRIBLE-BASTARD...A middle-finger thats "up-in-the-air" like Durmils MARITAL STATUS!//...Got Ya "X-posed" On "Full Blast"..Complete Opposite Of A *Mild~Horn*...Ya *Wild Scorn* From Durmil who sists in his office looking at child porn...ouch /\ blah nice disses and punches but the STRUCTURE??? Durmil The Murking Begins... Durm gonna have ya "head pop out ya body" like "jack in the box" Fuck glocks, Durm got "wires attached to you" like "electrical shocks" /\ Good opener Snatch ya "plates", like "race cars" without "pedals" im too "fast to "break" God's Son ya style is just like "animated anal sex" cuz ya "ass is fake" /\ Lol nice diss made me laugh Jesus!(God's Son), ur rep is whack how u expect to gimmie an L boy? Ur whole verse struggled to come(cum) "fresh" like a clit fighting "altoids" /\ Lol again nice dawg im liking If your God's Son then u already know that ur death is destined* Battlin me "showed guts", now im playin jump rope wit ya "intestines" /\ Oh nice use of the name good bar I could spit somethin blazin or come to ya house and punch ya face in It's amazin, your disses are about as useless as your punctuation** /\ nice diss I'd rip on ur sexuality but u admit ur gay, got an ass like a pig sty Don't cry, but im lookin at ur location and askin your in bed wit stu y?*** /\ Gay lines are played but nice Voters gonna be sayin "Durmil just murdered Legendary"...Oh Gee**** But you were just "too tiny from the start" like a pre-mature baby /\ Ok diss not as good as previous 1's Stand correct, Kill ya again in three days this time u wont ressurect***** My intellect leave ya "fired", and ya too whack for a "severence cheque" /\ Nice diss 1st line again on the name but 2nd fell a lil bit Durm Stop Embarrising This Guy This battle was a waste of time, ur as frail as a gorilla on glass treelimbs G GS=no chance, last "man to take me out" was the "doc that delivered me"! /\ Good closer nice flow V/Durmil 1 sided GS u need to work on ur structure dawg its everywhere
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07-13-04, 04:21 AM | #5 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: 4C49 64C6
RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981
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07-13-04, 06:32 AM | #6 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4C49 64C6
Gods Son...
I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!! Or Missing-In-Action, this cat must have a dissing-attraction...Cause steppin to me you'll be gettin flipped like "Reciprocal Fractions"// ^nice lines although your flow was messed up it kept falling off. Your verse had some good lines but then it some pretty shit stuff...but overall ide say 7/10. fuk me Durm is pretty dope....... If your God's Son then u already know that ur death is destined* Battlin me "showed guts", now im playin jump rope wit ya "intestines" Voters gonna be sayin "Durmil just murdered Legendary"...Oh Gee**** But you were just "too tiny from the start" like a pre-mature baby 8/10 Vote D for havin more quotables & a more solid verse. Flow was also much better by u http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134488 |
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07-13-04, 12:19 PM | #7 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
^^^thanx for the votes ill return honest votes in ur battle's
uppin for mo.... |
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07-13-04, 07:00 PM | #8 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
uppin....
and apo...poll ya vote |
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07-14-04, 01:48 AM | #9 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
uppin again
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07-14-04, 02:49 AM | #10 | ||||
~Cursed With Illness~
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IP: 0FBE A6ED
RETURN THA FAVOR.
Me vs. SevenThird Gods Son - Nice verse. Had alot of multis. Good thing. A few good punches and nice structure. Overall good verse...........8/10 Durmil - Alotta nice punches. Tha flow wit tha verse was ill. That was ya strongest point to me. Had real nice flow. Had multies and all..........9/10 Vote: Durmil |
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07-14-04, 04:29 AM | #11 | |||||||
The Light
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IP: 46A9 07D1
lol.. wow.. Durmil ripped it man.. god son i was reading your vers, and with all the hyphens and dashes and htis and that, i was annoyed.. at first i was like..god sons won this .. but then i wasent even half way down durmils verse, and the battle was over lol..big ups to both..
God sons... your verse wasent consistant.. honestly.. it sounded hella hot in the beging part.. then in the middle, it sounded like a different writer.. then in the end the person who was writing the begging came back in..lol how ever the fuck that happened.. but id say if oyu were doign what you did at first, you might have won.. andsick as ghonerea/syphili/aids/herpes is mighty played out.. let those go .. i gotta go with durmil for having some ill metas, and nice as flow.. i was surprised with durmil.. id say that verse was hot bruh.. good job.. v/Durmill return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134904
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07-14-04, 11:41 PM | #12 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: BD49 3B1E
durmil won this, his flow and strucutre was alot better, it made it alot easier to read and then he had better punches then gods son.
gods son you were ok but you flow and structure was way off it made it hard to read, your punches were ok but durmil came harder vote/durmil return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135062 |
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07-14-04, 11:45 PM | #13 | |||||||
~AlmoSt iLLeGAL~
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IP: 7C15 C1EB
god son gotz my voice, for better wordplay, it rhymed more. But his structure wasnt bad. He also had good hard hitting punchs. But ya i tried ignoring the dashes and all that. It does kinda mess up the rhyme, but behind them God son won. But it wasnt a bad battle. Peace.
v/ god son
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07-16-04, 01:03 AM | #14 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Ok here's breakdown......
Durmil...you had a good verse you had one good line the fans line was nice the rest I wasn't feeling all that much, because all your lines were seriously stretched which took all the stregth out of your punches, your personals were ok but the structure fucked those up too, the flow was jacked because of your structure do use that no more lines were to stretched, metas were good but it wasn't enought o overcome that structure I give ya.................7/10 God son..........good drop, nice opener I like how you kicked it off it was pretyy consistent following that, your punches were good, personals coulda been better but good enuff, flow was good structure was much better than his, metas were ok nothing spectacular but you edged this out with better punches, flow an structure only so I'll give you..............8/10 Vote: God Son
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07-16-04, 01:42 AM | #15 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: B90F 540D
^^^wtf kinda herb bullshit is this?
1) U gave him structure? ARE U FUCKIN BLIND, his bar lengths were all over the place and his set-ups were shit 2) Structure doesn't win battle's....punches, personals and skill do...bitch ass herb 3) I didn't even use a fans line??? are u even reading the right battle? 4) How did i get up'd in wordplay? the christmas-jew concept is more played then micheal jackson punches..... these herb votes shouldn't even count....hate bitch ass herbs....Triple N...are u even readin the rigth battle? |
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