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[~*Lady Fiya*~] 5 100.00%
MaNiPuLaTiOn 0 0%
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Old 08-08-04, 06:38 AM   #1
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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MaNiPuLaTiOn vs [~*Lady Fiya*~]

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chks due 24hrs
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lets do this,and gud luk.........

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Old 08-08-04, 06:40 AM   #2
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chk n drop wen u ready gurl.......
if u dnt like dis or sum shit pm me.
gud luk
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Old 08-08-04, 11:43 AM   #3
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Old 08-08-04, 12:05 PM   #4
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Old 08-08-04, 12:06 PM   #5
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only time u elevatin is by changing ya name from miss to lady..
u aint hot,ur plain ugly.. ..u look like my high school dinner lady,
high school graduate..battlin me id hve thought ud done tha math...
style so washed out..it wudnt improve if u did like u said n took a bath..
if looks woz skill ud have NO claim to be da hottest femcee on dis site...
shame u dnt look like u rap..or you might have got a DATE on ya prom nite..lol
problem is you cant be tha QUEEN..coz on rv here, im the princess...
i hvnt got your hairy chest..looks and rap skills u just arnt blessed..
spit like u laced wit mace,i take dis win like u take razor to ya hairy face..
after dis battle, you be pm`in me..manip, i wish i was in your place!...

lil explanation..........
bar1-wrk it out.
bar2-wrk it out
bar3-she wasnt wit a date in her prom pics.
bar4-im sayin if she was a queen shed b my mother...(n that cnt b coz i dnt take after her in skillz or looks..lol.
bar5-basically she wants ta look n rap like me!!
 
Old 08-08-04, 04:57 PM   #6
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Old 08-08-04, 05:02 PM   #7
~Lady Fiya~
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the best effort she got-->put half her name in CAPS-LOCK!
best lines she dropped are put in forums for WRITER’S BLOCK!
please Save her ass: gave u the spot, can’t handle a dynasty?!
runnin’ to HWC,She need to control* her rhymes quality... lol**
betta lie->it isn’t ya rhymes sweet-heart it’s just a small phase..
wut a disgrace, ya place on rv is blockin’ punches w/ ya face!
she left her punches Elevatin’ in Front Lines where her taunt is!
a “game” u can’t win, only button u can press are to “save n quit”
u princess? maybe 4 White Castle even there u can’t serve Fiya!!***
“sticker” 4 ya “title”, fell off when ur "riding" rhymes got “expired”!

*Manipulation: to control
**She left pSa dynasty to join the crew HWCS(peep her sig)
***Her title says RV’s princess.........
others, last line- sticker/ title/ riding (car and dickridin')/ expired

aight MaNiPuLaTiOn come again, lmfao.. u were just served..
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Old 08-08-04, 05:15 PM   #8
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ok i can't vote but i'd vote lady fiya because

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i mean manipulation was like j-hood talkin bout the same old shit
and manipulation prolly doesent even kno what lady fiya looks like and so that makes her shit false i hate false shit
lady fiya had stright punches and every thing dont get me wrong the first two lines manipulation had were funny as hell but my vote:lady fiya
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Old 08-08-04, 05:19 PM   #9
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ok this was a nice battle, but i think Lady Fiya took this one.

Manip, you had some nice lines. But yo first line you rhymed wit the same word which is a big no-no. Also, some of yo lines were pretty stretched. So that made the flow go off a little. but overall, you did an aiight job.

Fiya, you had a nice verse. You had a tight opener and the PSA line was nice too. Good job in the punches section. Yo flow was also very nice. It kept up good throughout the whole verse. Nice job overall on yo verse.

Vote/Fiya no hate. pc
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Old 08-08-04, 05:27 PM   #10
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lady= ya get my vote on dis one............ya punches were hittin harder then manipulations punches......you had some nice personals too.....good job

manipulation= ya personals were kinda repetitive........punches really wasnt hittin that hard to me....but it was an ok verse just not as good as fiyas
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Old 08-08-04, 05:38 PM   #11
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Old 08-08-04, 05:55 PM   #12
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upp.

i mean manipulation was like j-hood talkin bout the same old shit
and manipulation prolly doesent even kno what lady fiya looks like and so that makes her shit false i hate false shit
lady fiya had stright punches and every thing dont get me wrong the first two lines manipulation had were funny as hell but my vote:lady fiya
^u makin urself look a fool...try lookin at links.herb.........
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Old 08-08-04, 06:04 PM   #13
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^ugly, MaNiP.. okay, stay in mugshots with ya research it's cool though, street legend i'll hit up that battle man, ~wun~
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Old 08-08-04, 06:38 PM   #14
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damn... lmao at your first line... good battle.. i say equal in punches... but the man line was funny.... good battle tho
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Old 08-08-04, 06:55 PM   #15
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only time u elevatin is by changing ya name from miss to lady..
u aint hot,ur plain ugly.. ..u look like my high school dinner lady,
ummm 1st line was nice but it went downhill
in the 2nd line I say your much better in topicals....6/10

high school graduate..battlin me id hve thought ud done tha math...
style so washed out..it wudnt improve if u did like u said n took a bath..
nice lines 7/10
if looks woz skill ud have NO claim to be da hottest femcee on dis site...
shame u dnt look like u rap..or you might have got a DATE on ya prom nite..
nice personal referring to her pics I believe 6.5/10
problem is you cant be tha QUEEN..coz on rv here, im the princess...
i hvnt got your hairy chest..looks and rap skills u just arnt blessed..
naw in the drop your mostly talking bout her looks 6/10
spit like u laced wit mace,i take dis win like u take razor to ya hairy face..
after dis battle, you be pm`in me..manip, i wish i was in your place!...
nope weak closer to finish off with about a 5/10

OVERALL: 30.5/50 (61%)


[~*Lady Fiya*~] Drop:

the best effort she got-->put half her name in CAPS-LOCK!
best lines she dropped are put in forums for WRITER’S BLOCK!
haha damn this lady's fiya!!! 8/10
please Save her ass: gave u the spot, can’t handle a dynasty?!
runnin’ to HWC,She need to control* her rhymes quality... lol
nice play on her ex crew and nice punch 7/10
betta lie->it isn’t ya rhymes sweet-heart it’s just a small phase..
wut a disgrace, ya place on rv is blockin’ punches w/ ya face!
kinda went downhill on this punch but still straight 6/10
she left her punches Elevatin’ in Front Lines where her taunt is!
a “game” u can’t win, only button u can press are to “save n quit”
nice nice 7.5/10
u princess? maybe 4 White Castle even there u can’t serve Fiya!!
“sticker” 4 ya “title”, fell off when ur "riding" rhymes got “expired”!
haha fiya like the colors i'm using 7/10

OVERALL: 35/50 (70%)

compare scores and you see [~*Lady Fiya*~] took it......


oh ya and could you go back to my battle with state and
explain you vote!!!! breakdown for both battlers plz
and manip you can't vote on it since our in HWCS....
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