Battle Rules:

15-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 01:30 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

chitownsoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 01:00 AM.

lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 01:01 AM.

im hot like an oven on in the kitchen in a hundred degreez wit no air condition now bitch listen/
my rhymes gon seep through to u like ya shoes/ when u steppin in wet cement wut u gon do/
im the greatest call me muhummad ali/
floatin like a butterfly stingin like a be/
lyrically lyrical flowz my shits CONTAGIOUS
like RONALD ISLY/u dont wanna face this
like 2 PAC u might wanna go n make some CHANGES/to ya verse uz ima destroy ya game n whats worst/
is ya name/lyrical flowz hittin yo ass up wit
HYSTERICAL BLOWZ/tearin ya ass up like a fags first time/
but i aint on that gay shit im doin it wit a rhyme/
even wit a chrome vest on u still wouldnt shine/
u shouldnt even of spit cuz this battle is mine/
the same way jesus turned water into whine/
im taken this rhyme turnin it into a nine/poppin off
at ya ass wit dope lyrics/on weak rappers i dine
j-kidd pass his dimes while im smokin mine/
next time u think of battlin me change ya mind/
like r.kelly u wanna TURN BACK THE HANDS OF TIME/
and decline this battle cuz its over its mine.

good shit lyrical u got me wit them personals

Voted For: chitownsoulja

good battles both nice punches and metas i liked em both i cant vote cuz chis in my crew but those were some nice ass flows both yall yall on tha ame level one

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

chi your vocab needs help as does your punches and personals which you had none of.good flow and wordplay was decent.lyrical good openergood second bar too that 7th line ....lol yous a dumb dude lol.the ender was aight but you win with way better punches and metaphores

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Gotta give props tp lyrical, he had a bit more complicated verse, at the end fo the day he would take this one

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

yo yo yo dope as shit i like love it crazy lol i was rappin it to the no no beat lol its nice yo its crazy hott im not bittin ya shit i was jus listenen to the beat "chitown" u was ight but coulda been betta mang i think he jus got you dude

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Imma give this one to lyricalflowz23....dudes structure was a lil better. I think the flow was a lil off in places, but he came with punches and good wordplay all the way thru. He even used some personals, about the startin posts for money, and dude votin for him, 4320 minutes to drop lol. He just came harder, and was more focused on the battle it seemed. Some nice metas, no good multies though, i would tell you to elevate there.

Voted For: chitownsoulja


punches-chi
meta-tie
wordplay-lyric
flow- chi
structure-tie
opener-tie
closer -chi
chi was better this timenice flow few punches not enuff metas nice wordplay aight structure for both but chi gets my vote
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