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Old 08-12-04, 03:54 AM   #1
HoPe
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$LXDiesel vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

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topic: familys First

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Old 08-12-04, 03:56 AM   #2
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Old 08-12-04, 03:58 AM   #3
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Old 08-12-04, 04:07 AM   #4
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i got two fuckin families both first and both important
ma family is in da streets ma family is on the block
when they get merked nigga ima bust back first
the homeboyz who believed in me is also ma family
they gave me a chance, then after stayed wit me
they gave me no beefin when i got ma prosperity
and thats real rear of the niggas who roll wit me
they stayed wit me to the end and thats why their ma family
they aint related but they took bullets for me
that means they are never forgotten wherever i am
and thats why they're wit me, and in F.A.M. (Ma group on the streets)
another ma family gave up all they had back home
and travelled here so i can have a better home
so wut if they live in the shit and not rich at all
they still try to make my life good for me
to let me live here they payed a big fee
i wouldnt care if they lived in diry and scrubbed toilets for livin
i know when they need me im there just when they needin

ma first topical in A WHILE
 
Old 08-12-04, 04:42 AM   #5
HoPe
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Family First

Mah fam's always first, n friends always come second...
If you mess wit mah fam, fa' sho u know i'll protect em...
Hurt'n em u won't mention, n bein wit u i won't let em...
So of all ya better stay away or ya will learn ur lesson...
I'll do nething for ya, but like always first is mah familly...
Cuz we close, that means i'd never want em to be mad at me....
Cuz of mah dad wen he left, our lives is one big tragedy...
Cuz i watch thier back, they gonna watch mah back fa me...
Lived like dis for years, while savin each other one has been killed...
N all five of us still standin, riskin our lives we be doin it wit our free will...
But of course doin dis shyt, we afraid of death but remember....
Trust is a must fa members or else we will never be together...
We need each other cuz we too got our very own enemies....
You'd be surprised in how man threat letters they be sendin me..
I remember once a letter sed don't sleep or you'll face death...
So ya better stay awake, or there will be no family left...
Didn't take it seriously while mah dad looked around curiously...
Da same night they shot mah dad dead while we were asleep...
So leave us alone, its easy to understand n more clear then a crystal...
Unless you wanna be the next to have a bullet in you from mah pistol...
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Old 08-12-04, 04:45 AM   #6
HoPe
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Family First

Mah fam's always first, n friends always come second...
If you mess wit mah fam, fa' sho u know i'll protect em...
Hurt'n em u won't mention, n bein wit u i won't let em...
So of all ya better stay away or ya will learn ur lesson...
I'll do nething for ya, but like always first is mah familly...
Cuz we close, that means i'd never want em to be mad at me....
Cuz of mah dad wen he left, our lives is one big tragedy...
Cuz i watch thier back, they gonna watch mah back fa me...
Lived like dis for years, while savin each other one has been killed...
N all five of us still standin, riskin our lives we be doin it wit our free will...
But of course doin dis shyt, we afraid of death but remember....
Trust is a must fa members or else we will never be together...
We need each other cuz we too got our very own enemies....
You'd be surprised in how man threat letters they be sendin me..
I remember once a letter sed don't sleep or you'll face death...
So ya better stay awake, or there will be no family left...
Didn't take it seriously while mah dad looked around curiously...
Da same night they shot mah dad dead while we were asleep...
So leave us alone, its easy to understand n more clear then a crystal...
Unless you wanna be the next to have a bullet in you from mah pistol...

good luck
 
Old 08-12-04, 05:06 AM   #7
HoPe
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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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Old 08-12-04, 05:19 AM   #8
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

voting on ingenuisminds cause i like sthe flow of rge story and i enjoyed reading it alot more then SLX's verse



vote an honost one in return
 
Old 08-12-04, 04:50 PM   #9
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uppin
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Old 08-12-04, 05:22 PM   #10
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vote ppl
vote ppl
vote ppl
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Old 08-14-04, 04:58 AM   #11
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Uppin this bitch
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Old 08-14-04, 05:46 AM   #12
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uppin This Bitch
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Old 08-14-04, 01:43 PM   #13
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Uppin
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Old 08-14-04, 05:28 PM   #14
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

you good both of you props to both
everyone was good
vote to ingenius for staying at the topic more and having better wordplay but props to both of you

liked all og it and ingenius won this topical battle by a hair
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Old 08-15-04, 04:27 AM   #15
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uppin
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