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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
aberrant | 5 | 83.33% | |
Word processor | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-18-04, 03:13 AM | #1 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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aberrant vs Word processor
IP: CEE9 1CB9
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 is a KO Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-20-04 at 03:13 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
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08-18-04, 09:54 AM | #2 | |
Guest
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IP: CC64 0500
aberrant has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 09:54 AM.
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08-18-04, 10:00 AM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CC64 0500
Process my words, type them up and print them off
So you can feed off my rhymes like a pig from a trough You’re a lonely computer nerd, your penis is flaccid and unused Like Iraq’s destructive weapons when they were wrongly accused Its unlucky for that Bush found no weapons there in Iraq Coz that’s your only chance of staging a decent attack Lose the front Yank, like a woman’s failed test on the smears* Ill come at you like Tyson but bite off BOTH your ears! After this battle ill be with you, no matter where you lurk Cause my actions are more messed up than a 2 year olds artwork You have only one fan, its electrical and blows air in your face I just diminished your grace and CLOSED your UK hate case!! *(Front=Breasts, failed smear test can = breast removal) hope u get it lol |
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08-18-04, 12:37 PM | #4 | |
Guest
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-04 12:37 PM.
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08-18-04, 01:05 PM | #5 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
i aight ima crush you right quick with lyrical swiftness
your boyfriend gave you aids now think you got sickness* well ima administer the verbs that bring loses with quickness my scriptures flippin' ya text up and down like switches your username means you left tha path of wuts right your flow is irrelevant like being blind in tha night this win will return to me faster than tha speed of light my flow is like all your closths way to tight ~closer~ im 10 levels above so you will never beat me like walking to tha sun in your life time you can't reach me |
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08-18-04, 02:21 PM | #6 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CC64 0500
uppin #1..........................................
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08-18-04, 03:16 PM | #7 | |
~God Of The Metaphore~
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IP: CEE9 1CB9
a yo good battle aberrant i have alot more respect for you know
but i wanted to make this a 2 verse battle so im gona open a another one call me vs. u round 2 aight |
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08-18-04, 03:25 PM | #8 | |
the medicine man
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IP: BF45 37DB
Voted For: Word processor
ya beginner and closer did him in aberrant good verse but try to throw more personals in there and more vocab word ya verse just needs a little more multi's and harder punches but you got this one return favors http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142500 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-18-04, 04:09 PM | #9 | |
New to RV
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This was feedback posted for Word processor
IP: CEE9 1CB9
dammmm
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08-18-04, 07:19 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CC64 0500
uppin #2.............................................
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08-18-04, 10:11 PM | #11 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8646 AD30
Voted For: Word processor
chose winners verse.... i aight ima crush you right quick with lyrical swiftness your boyfriend gave you aids now think you got sickness* nice punch.....made my laugh 7/10 well ima administer the verbs that bring loses with quickness my scriptures flippin' ya text up and down like switches aight punch....kinda played..but good wordplay 5/10 your username means you left tha path of wuts right your flow is irrelevant like being blind in tha night decent punch....nothing to special 5/10 this win will return to me faster than tha speed of light my flow is like all your closths way to tight good punch....direct hit 7/10 im 10 levels above so you will never beat me like walking to tha sun in your life time you can't reach me basic closer....you could tell it was a filler 5/10 v/word processor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143293 return the favor^^^ |
08-18-04, 10:27 PM | #12 |
Light Weight
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: aberrant
those punchlines were nice and your flow was sick all together it was nice Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
08-19-04, 01:00 PM | #13 |
DA FLAMETHROWER
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IP: CEF5 716F
Voted For: aberrant
You have only one fan, its electrical and blows air in your face dat won ABERRANT da battle dat was tyght real close but he won it wit dat line both had structure n flow n a lil wordplay but it came down 2 da closer n dat was tyght v/ABERRANT vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463
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08-19-04, 01:34 PM | #14 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CC64 0500
uppin #3..............................................
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08-20-04, 04:49 AM | #15 | |
Flyweight
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IP: CC64 0500
upppppppppppppppp.................................
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