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G | 2 | 50.00% | |
Sonofisis#1 | 2 | 50.00% | |
Voters: 4. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-22-04, 01:48 PM | #1 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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Sonofisis#1 vs G
IP: E198 D20B
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08-22-04, 01:52 PM | #2 | |
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IP: E198 D20B
Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 01:52 PM.
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08-22-04, 02:21 PM | #3 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
I told this bitch to take ten paces & draw, but he Ran Away
No Wonder, you ain't a gangsta, the "G" must Stand For Gay Have any of ya'll even seen a fuckin Clown Fight? Yo Punches are like left jabs to da ear, they dont 'Sound Right Infinite rhymes, like long distant call plans, I'm Unlimited U cant fit in my shoes if you were the Old Lady who Lives In It This is just me basically tellin you that you're Not The Dopest The way I "Close In" on him, he'll scream if he's Clostrophobic There is no way that this bitch can ever Stand Worthy I would slap your face, but I'd rather not get my Hands Dirty No matter what you try to do kid, I really Am Harder I'll Pull out the Shank and cut ya face like a Bad Barber You're gassed up with More Wins, But I'll Damage U Severly Yo streak will be more Short Lived than Canibus' Career G You know that i'll win this Thing At This Pace I jus hold G's head back & all his punches miss as he Swings At My Face 3rd bar - there was a fairy tale about a little old lady who lived in a shoe, and i said he couldn't fit in my shoes if he was her.. http://www.porterfieldsfineart.com/...ladyinashoe.htm |
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08-23-04, 03:23 AM | #4 | |
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IP: EFE9 52EA
G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 03:23 AM.
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08-23-04, 03:52 AM | #5 |
Peace....for now
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IP: EFE9 52EA
I defeat this bitch quick and easy...Sonofisis has lost-this,
I scuffle his brain, make him "dyslexic"..so on this battle, I put a "cross-criss".* Carve his complexion into a sphere, and thrust his eyes out with a spear, break his "face" like a "mirror", cuz "the punches are closer than they appear". I "cease his remarks" swift, like a "brief discussion", cuz like drums, he gets "beat continually", like "re-percussion". Lyrically decapitate you…bury you in a thick-plateau, and put “X’s on your name”, like I was playin tic-tac-toe!** Your "punches ta me or nothin"...this "reject"ion "lacks-thee-jab", I make him "get off the corner***"…like “givin directions in a taxi-cab”! He rhymes "nervously"...like he looks "unsure", but hes "full of more bullshit", than "a book on manure"! “Sonofisis” couldn’t drop a “hot jam” if he “heated his jelly”, You?..”#1”!?…Yeah, sure…and so is Nelly!**** Sick ass bitch, he fucks his sister’s son, he must really be close to family…sayin his nephew is #1. (Son of sis #1) I bash your body on the side of the street, and make your bones start sparking, so your remains and blood can douse the curb red, for “zones for no parking”. *Dyslexic people talk backwards. Puttin a "X" (criss-cross) or crossin this battle out quick. **The little ‘#’ sign in his name looks like a tic-tac-toe thing. ***Ex: "[Get off at this corner] of 36th and Callan.".....givin directions...get it. ****Remember that gay song by Nelly?…Nelly - Number One. |
08-23-04, 03:58 AM | #6 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
nice^
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08-23-04, 04:01 AM | #7 |
Peace....for now
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IP: EFE9 52EA
Good shit, Good Battle.
-Ahah. Thanks mayn you too. Mah bad for comin home late..but I told you I would spit. I was typin hella fast. I'm tired as hell.
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08-23-04, 08:01 AM | #8 | ||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: G
YO NICE BATTLE FROM BOTH// G NICE MANYE WORDPLAY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS NICE SONOFISIS YO PUNCHES WERE GOOD AND X-WORDPLAYS MAYNE NICE THE SHOE THANG IT WAS SIK TO ME// BUT SONO YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER DAN G'Z SO WORK LIL ON THEM PUNCHES DEN U BE IN AN GREATER LEVEL ~PEACE~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-23-04, 08:02 AM | #9 | ||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo Sono Or G Can Yall Vote 1 Of My Battles In Da Sig
~peace~
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08-23-04, 08:10 AM | #10 | |
Back In Business
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This was feedback posted for G
IP: EFDF 488F
G got this with better wordplay... Son just came too basic and had too many played lines and concepts...s also had a weak structure... lines were shorter than they shoulda been... G, the manure line was trash... never use that again....sister's son line was just as bad... but still ya had an overall beter verse
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08-23-04, 08:13 AM | #11 | |
Back In Business
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IP: EFDF 488F
yo that was supposed to be a vote for G and not feed back... i accidentally pressed the button while i was typing... make sure he gets the vote... one
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08-23-04, 01:16 PM | #12 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
fasho, uppin
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08-23-04, 03:58 PM | #13 |
Peace....for now
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IP: FFE6 6361
Up.
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08-23-04, 04:10 PM | #14 | |
the medicine man
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IP: BF45 37DB
Voted For: G
ok g takes it cuz he obviously put more thought in his punches and personals were creative, son verse was good straight to the point but it lacks substance needs more creativity too overall g takes this on his personals and punches http://community.rapverse.com/showb...35&page=2&pp=15 ay vote on this an explain ya votes please already 3 votes 4 me dq shouldnot take long its a 4 line battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-23-04, 04:24 PM | #15 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
I light wieght agree, G came kinda sick, i should of steped my game up..
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