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View Poll Results: -SoLdiEr- VS Lyriclesolja
lyriclesolja 3 37.50%
-SoLdIeR- 5 62.50%
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Old 08-20-04, 07:36 PM   #1
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lyriclesolja vs -SoLdIeR-

IP: 2553 ECFD

k, 8-16 lines,
no d/r,
no recycling,
spit 180 mins after check in (check in within 20 mins)

AND spell my name coorect in future bitch!!

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Old 08-20-04, 07:37 PM   #2
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Old 08-20-04, 07:44 PM   #3
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Old 08-20-04, 07:59 PM   #4
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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oh did i spell your name wrong you big fuckin baby,
"I need time to pre write my shit please some body save me",
christ get over ya self for 15 mins. do us all a faver,
whats ya next excuse "im drunk and cant think of any thing to use so ima get a piece of paper",
ill break the bottle ya drank from over your head and bring a new meaning to alcohol abuse,
you shoulda got a clue that ya gonna lose,
wont stop bitchin you be naggin in my ear,
so i beat you over the head wit dat bottle of beer,
so every body steer clear of the queer,
cause this cat will suck ya dick for a battle win,
and if he cant he'll go prewritten wit a pen.
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Old 08-20-04, 08:39 PM   #5
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This a “real” wanna be emcee, postin his verse for jokes on RV,
As I said I’ll beat this punk drunk, or even OD’d!
He wants to be a SOLDIER, just like me,
But it’s a shame that he lost his dictionary! (solja/soldier)
You think that all from England is the queen and tea,
But are U.K, (YOU OK) wit da USA getting beat by me??
You lines are weak, stop punchin above ya weight,
You know I’ll erase ya, cos your were always a mistake!
I shoot you in the arse cos shit is all you spit!
I don’t need a chance, I got that extra four fifth (he lost ten, I lost 2)
When I shoot, y’all know im reckless,
shootin at ya penis…..that’ll leave ya sexless!
You really shouldn’t post to me, just leave it text-less
As if im gonna lose to a “rapper”, straight outta Texas!!
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Old 08-20-04, 08:52 PM   #6
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uppin....

uppin....

uppin...

im out now!!

get some votes on this
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Old 08-20-04, 09:48 PM   #7
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I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Uppin..
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 08-20-04, 10:41 PM   #8
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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

soldier no good punches and you aint really try to diss him hard you just made us jokes and talked shit flow was ok and strture was nice 3/10
lyric good punches and diises all throughout flow was good structure was off alittle punches and disses fell off in the end still you got a 4/10
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Old 08-21-04, 04:08 AM   #9
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Old 08-21-04, 04:20 AM   #10
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uppin...

lets get some more votes on this!!!
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Old 08-21-04, 06:53 AM   #11
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Voted For: -SoLdIeR-

Vote: SoLdier

Lyrics: slodier took it on a higher level not jus comin wit da usual shit
structue: soldier easy to rhyme and wud sound hectic
wordplay: soldier had a few didnt c any in the other cats
punches: neither about equal
Overall: soldier took, rhyme was better so was lyrics

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Old 08-21-04, 09:41 AM   #12
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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Old 08-22-04, 08:00 PM   #13
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Old 08-23-04, 01:24 AM   #14
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Old 08-23-04, 01:46 AM   #15
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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Lyris won this cuz.. i liked your punclines more ya know? more creative, your opener was nice also, the following bar was pretty good also, more content in your verse.. soldier, jus work on punchlines and set ups more, also try and use personals.. lyris you get my vote..

return favore right here plz.. thanx, heres the link.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411
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