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phantom 2 28.57%
e-dubz 5 71.43%
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Old 08-25-04, 09:37 PM   #1
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phantom vs e-dubz

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crew battle: phantom (LRI) vs e-dubz (class sic)

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Old 08-25-04, 11:34 PM   #2
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Old 08-26-04, 12:02 AM   #3
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you a local-ist.......... so imma blaze my nine at yo whole crew mans
cuz combined yo couldnt hit punch-lines if yo caught k-o’s at lemon-aid stands
so lower yo own possibility of a win when taste-less lines exit bitter lips
touch my flows? nah nigga........ not even if i pissed on yo finger tips
this my home now yall as welcome as Manson was with Roman Pilanski’s wife
i got it out for yo, like black people do for MJ since hes tryin to pass fo white
but i dont know why im wasting time on you, you couldn't put up half a fight
dollar bills could have King Arthur on em, you wouldn't be worth half a (k)night
yo whole family’s probably trash, and i ain’t even tryin to be mean
but fuck a win….... cuz shit is the only streak in yo genes(jeans)
cant stay up on beat...... always outta breath like asthmatics
this nigga always gettin laid down, time to call yo a Craftmatic
any personals you write......... are your own lies misplaced
if CSI checks yo verses for talent....... they won't find a trace
dawg, whenever you spit........ and i have hunches you know
that like payed off boxers.......... you sacrifice punches for flow
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Old 08-28-04, 11:22 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by e-dubz
you a local-ist.......... so imma blaze my nine at yo whole crew mans
cuz combined yo couldnt hit punch-lines if yo caught k-o’s at lemon-aid stands - punch aint lemonaid-0/10

so lower yo own possibility of a win when taste-less lines exit bitter lips
touch my flows? nah nigga........ not even if i pissed on yo finger tips-no2/10

this my home now yall as welcome as Manson was with Roman Pilanski’s wife
i got it out for yo, like black people do for MJ since hes tryin to pass fo white-corny 1/10

but i dont know why im wasting time on you, you couldn't put up half a fight
dollar bills could have King Arthur on em, you wouldn't be worth half a (knight
ok 3/10
yo whole family’s probably trash, and i ain’t even tryin to be mean
but fuck a win….... cuz shit is the only streak in yo genes(jeans)ok 3/10

cant stay up on beat...... always outta breath like asthmatics
this nigga always gettin laid down, time to call yo a Craftmatic-good punch finally a 8/10

any personals you write......... are your own lies misplaced-ok a
if CSI checks yo verses for talent....... they won't find a traceok a 4/10 played
dawg, whenever you spit........ and i have hunches you know
that like payed off boxers.......... you sacrifice punches for flow
ok true personal 1 5/10
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Old 08-26-04, 03:31 AM   #5
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Old 08-26-04, 04:02 AM   #6
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evacuate yo buildin with explosives set to be flown fool...
im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you...
you're a noob basher/wannabe vet, with no apparent skills...
ya crew rushin to 'clean up' like you was caught in a oil spill...
i'd claim you get d/r votes but you're barely known to exist...
you're like a manual on manure, just chokked full of "bullshit"...
why name yourself that? not even your bike has 20' spokes...
ill be 'smashing' til your 'bloody', make you a good british joke...
this rapper/masturbatin virgin buys trojans to 'cum' with 'heat'...
someone told him to 'elevate' so he put womens shoes on his feet...
homos have their gay 'issues', but for you thats not the right depiction...
your 'issues' come in all the time, shit you have a 'lifetime subscription'...
come on nigga,you dont 'bring the noise' like a nonexistant riot..
plus your 'shit' dont feel right, like rosanne on the 'atkins diet'...
i know this one is played, but "your title states you're an herb"...
i just 'popped' this 'dub' and set my left over 'rubber' on da curb...
 
Old 08-28-04, 11:24 PM   #7
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evacuate yo buildin with explosives set to be flown fool...
im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you...-dope personal a 10/10 hard ass line
you're a noob basher/wannabe vet, with no apparent skills...
ya crew rushin to 'clean up' like you was caught in a oil spill...ok 3/10

i'd claim you get d/r votes but you're barely known to exist...
you're like a manual on manure, just chokked full of "bullshit"...good punch a 5/10
why name yourself that? not even your bike has 20' spokes...
ill be 'smashing' til your 'bloody', make you a good british joke...lol good punch again a 6/10
this rapper/masturbatin virgin buys trojans to 'cum' with 'heat'...
someone told him to 'elevate' so he put womens shoes on his feet...-blah no 1/10
homos have their gay 'issues', but for you thats not the right depiction...
your 'issues' come in all the time, shit you have a 'lifetime subscription'...good again 4/10
come on nigga,you dont 'bring the noise' like a nonexistant riot..
plus your 'shit' dont feel right, like rosanne on the 'atkins diet'...good also a 4/10
i know this one is played, but "your title states you're an herb"...
i just 'popped' this 'dub' and set my left over 'rubber' on da curb...
ok ender a 4/10




you see now?he had more consitent harder punches a honest vote no hate
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Old 08-26-04, 04:21 AM   #8
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yomkid oyu came hard thru the whole flow...good shit kid......just try to work on oyur structure alil.......but good flow i think you got this......nice punches and coo meta4s......and your ending was hella nice.......good shit....
8/10

line 2: im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you..................^^^^ that was coo but you killed it in the end of that line but good thinking ...kid you got real potiential...good shit......you was coming with heat till you started spitten those played rhymes but good shit.....the CUMN meta4s and shit are fgettin played...that british shit was aight.......not really any good shit..i can tell you guys both tried your best...this is gonna be a even battle....8/10
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Old 08-26-04, 12:02 PM   #9
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uppin this shit..
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Old 08-26-04, 02:58 PM   #10
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im givin props to both of ya...........good luck..


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Old 08-26-04, 02:58 PM   #11
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oh shyt....i actually clicked fucken vote instead of feed back shyt..i'll tell strobe to change dis shyt
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Old 08-26-04, 02:59 PM   #12
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nigga that shit dont count...heeeellll nah.....pm strobe and dq that vote.......
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Old 08-26-04, 03:14 PM   #13
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Damn this was a close battle a real close battle, you both had hard hitting punches, good wordplay and real nice flow. E Dubz your second bar was butter, real nice punch, Phantom you countered it with your opener it was real nice as well. Phantom you would of had this battle had the last 25% of your battle not fallen off, it was good don't get me wrong but I wasn't feel'n the whole rosanne punch as well as your finisher. E dubz takes this one cause you were consistant all the way through even though Phantom you had probably the hardest hitting punches in the battle there just wasn't enough of them. Good battle you guy's should battle again.
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Old 08-26-04, 04:18 PM   #14
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iight uppin fo votes
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Old 08-26-04, 04:18 PM   #15
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this was a damn close battle...
aight e dubz gets the vote from me he killed it with that csi line lol....gud shit...ur flow was gud and i liked ur wordplay....overall id say 8.5/10 gud shit
pahntom gud verse but i wasnt really feelin it it seemed to ordinary....but otherwise u had gud flow gud srtucture overall id say 8/10 gud battle homies stay up
 
 


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