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intensify effect 1 16.67%
CarsonJetX2 5 83.33%
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Old 09-18-04, 11:21 AM   #1
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From: Ya Eah
CarsonJetX2 vs intensify effect

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10 Lines.
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30 minutes.

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Old 09-18-04, 11:35 AM   #2
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CarsonJetX2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:35 AM.
 
Old 09-18-04, 11:50 AM   #3
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-18-04 11:50 AM.
 
Old 09-18-04, 11:54 AM   #4
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Its sad, you rap for the respect...an I merk for laughs-
I mean come on...Effects bar's look more like paragraphs
Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit....
And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's
I Spit welt's to ur spine...fold back, an ruin your posture..
Your whole"violent type"sucks. There's not one'vet'in your roster
So if you wanted closure, Intensify....you can feel it 5-0...
Cus the only way u got 7 wins'is cus you"blue'like ur glow
Another Herb tryna fuk wit Jet-scrypts...because you felt neglected
End it...call phorensic's...this kid's jus a wana-bee pyrotechnik....
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Old 09-18-04, 12:20 PM   #5
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u better get in the "car-son N-jet" cuz u'l get dispose from this relevance
N even if i tossed "Einteins remains" on u'r text u'r verse still wouldnt contain intelligence
i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision
u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS
im attacking with missle, unleasing automatic spits like blastin a pistol
fuck, N ya audios shit.... i done herd better tunes with a fucking dog-whistle *ha * (its better if we hear noting)

carson ya audios fell out, getting in ya bones... throw ya nerves out
cuz my punches leave u "ripped N cut" worse then a cardio workout
my hits come with percicion, ya punches strain from collision
u wanna "blast-for-me? (blasphemy) not befor i Change u'r religion BITCH!!!
BANG-BANG-EARLY....
 
Old 09-18-04, 12:24 PM   #6
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Voted For: CarsonJetX2

wow......fuckin solid drop here...one sided for sure

CarsonJet - ...wow....man that was so dope, wicked punches, amazing flow, perfect strucutre, solid punches...personals everything just came together dope 9/10

intensify effect - ...not bad, but not even close to as good as carons....structures wack, flow is allright, wordplay is pretty good, punches and personals aren't bad....7/10

v/carson

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Old 09-18-04, 12:24 PM   #7
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please drop an honest vote on this battle, since i have dropped one on yours...

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150254
 
Old 09-18-04, 12:26 PM   #8
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^^^ i just battle u like 20 min befor i battle carsonjet.......

that wont count........

HATE vote.....
 
Old 09-18-04, 12:30 PM   #9
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Voted For: intensify effect

good battle

punches- tie
personals- X2
multis- effect
metas- effect
word play- effect
flow- X2

Effect nice personals and metas. Work on flow though. kinda fell off some times.

X2 good verse, but you didn't have the metas, multis, or word play as good as effect.

X2:
"Ya punches are shit....It's like you took empire an Bit....
And your flow's more un-coordinate than your avatars tit's" nice personal.

Effect:
"i disregard u'r intentions, punches change sights threw u'r opticals, switching ya vision
u winnin N bitching after being merked N ablished terribley like L.A vs PISTONS" im from detroit so that line is great. good meta punch.

v/effect

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Old 09-18-04, 12:36 PM   #10
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Uppin

"won't count" giggle's.....
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Old 09-18-04, 12:39 PM   #11
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Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Aight, I Dont Like Either Of Ya'll...

But Carson Got This...
Nice Personals On His Part...
His Line Were Direct, Short An Sweet, Nice Drop From Carson...

Effect, Ya Flow Was Aight, Few Lines We're Strectched So I Lost Intrest In The Lines At Some Parts Nice Finisher, But Carson Just Got This...

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Old 09-18-04, 12:45 PM   #12
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Voted For: intensify effect

good battle both of you
punches:intensity
structure:carson
personals:carson
word play:intensity
opeaner: itensify
i had to go in deep to find a winner but thats what it rakes in good battles

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Old 09-18-04, 01:09 PM   #13
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect

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Wow...you suck...
Your punches are so simple...and ya structure is dumb ugly.
and then you said some bullshit after your line...wtf were you doing.

PS: Dont take my 'EARLY' line no mo'
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Old 09-18-04, 01:14 PM   #14
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He Bit a line off you?
If he did....link me to the proof -1
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Old 09-18-04, 01:26 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2

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sorry bro but i gotta say that carson had the win all thorugh the whole verse had it with better personals and punches
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