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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Scenario 5 71.43%
Qidd MinX 2 28.57%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 10-07-04, 01:35 PM   #1
Qidd MinX
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Qidd MinX vs Scenario

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10-16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Old 10-07-04, 01:37 PM   #2
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Scenario has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 01:37 PM.
 
Old 10-07-04, 01:38 PM   #3
Scenario
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ATTENTION VOTERS: the battle is 12 lines only, explain ya votes peeps
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Old 10-07-04, 01:40 PM   #4
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Old 10-07-04, 01:46 PM   #5
Scenario
..:Merking Mc's:..
 
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aiming direct~my punches red ya like flower designs on dinner plates
beating me~blind kids have better chances of crossing interstates

u a newb so everyone knows that there's no doubt that i'm crushing ya
strike a match to ya dead body u'll look similar to the trees with usher *

kid's talent don't exist like doctor's delivering babies for he-she's
ya lost cause my punches and metas"ll red ya eye like ya glasses were 3d **

i know ya type, u try to act hard but nigga if u really want then it's ok kid
take me, lol~i'm getting away with this murder~leaving evidence like oj did ***

look at that~it's ashame when the site system starts to predict ya record
ya rocking a white-tee but i'm reding ya sternum like ya shirt was checkered

u accepted this~ya stuck in my grasp like tapes in vcr's trying to fast forward
i got cruel intentions so i'm planning to outline ya body like nba backboards



*usher's burn video the trees were on fire
**3d glasses have one red lense
***oj left the glove at the murder scene
 
Old 10-07-04, 01:54 PM   #6
Qidd MinX
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the chance of you winning is impossile you scary hoe/
cuz to me your not living like sinning with chronical hows that for a scenario/
im not the one to mess with next youll get wrecked with the techs/text
its like your goal is playin hockey the way you gettin checked on the net/
ill put your rhymes to silence as i roll with the violence/
ill have you gone without a blink like i just stole your eyelids/
yo you aint chillin with thugs your an honor roll student in school/
how are you hard when Micro. paint is the only time u usin a tool/
oh and fuck your vest cuz i send steel in your mug/
the only time you get claps for your raps is someone is killin a bug/

finisher
i grab and slash at your verbs the way i blast and ash all you herbs/
im only here to give you an El like masucline spanish words/
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Old 10-07-04, 02:01 PM   #7
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uppin for this shit even though he recycled his verse from the battled i was cheatingly d'qd out and the rules stated no recycling but i guess we uppin
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Old 10-07-04, 02:11 PM   #8
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i didnt mean to recycle i mean he said that he was cheated and wanted to battle again i already had my verse posted and i was rushed i could have easily thought of something else with a whole hour of time im just tryin to make things fair
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Old 10-07-04, 03:38 PM   #9
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c'mon why wont people vote on battles
UPPIN 4 VOTES PLEASE
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Old 10-07-04, 04:08 PM   #10
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Qidd MinX



ok I hope this isn't considered
inaquedite feedback...but damn i can't
write an essay for a vote but I DID read both verses



structure:Senario-6.7-QM-5-6
wordplay:Senario-9.3-QM-8.7(both good)
punch's impact:Senario-6.5-QM-7.2
flow:Senario-9,9 (nice) QM-7.1
overall enjoyed verse-Senario-8.5-QM-7.0

winner senario

pc

~explained~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Old 10-07-04, 04:12 PM   #11
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oops fucked up

i meant to make it a vote for senario oviusley

do't worry it'll be changed
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Old 10-08-04, 01:54 PM   #12
Scenario
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uppin for more votes, honest votes will be return
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Old 10-08-04, 02:03 PM   #13
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Voted For: Qidd MinX

good battle here the break down,........

punches Qidd
opener scenario
closer Qidd
personals Qidd
multis scenario
wordplay Qidd
structure scenario
flow Qidd

this was a good battle....no hate but i think Qidd barely took this 1 but that was def a good battle....no hat return the favors on the links in the sig.......
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Old 10-08-04, 05:53 PM   #14
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Voted For: Scenario

flow-scenario, much more together qidds was off here and there in most lines stretched

punches/personals-scenario, lot harder punches here, qidds i saw like 2 punches that were hard hitting and made sense, but the rest were kinda eh, scenarios basicaly every punch hit hard and was understandable

basically the rest doesnt really apply to here, scenario had the more creative punches in my opinion for creativity, both did good no hate but scenario got this harder hitting punches

good luck peace
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Old 10-08-04, 10:20 PM   #15
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Voted For: Scenario

Scenario wins this, aiming direct~my punches red ya like flower designs on dinner plates
beating me~blind kids have better chances of crossing interstates^^^^^ nice intro, most of your punches Scenario
were good and had some nice wordplay, because of your good intro it was good write from the begining,

flow was good to, it was consistant and well structured,

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