Anomaly vs. lil Rip

thats your first post how did you no that he anted to battle you.......<<<<<<<<<?????????

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lil rip git up in here quick
I'm ready 2 burn u

you spit first........................................i'm wating

house rules
10-30 lines

k lil rip check dis!!

Dis da Anomaly
Rippin up da rap games anatomy
Niggaz step forward an git a verbal lobotomy
I be bombin ye like da US did Iraq
U may be able 2 hit hard but like Ja rule I Clap Bac
Goin gainst da anomaly u askin 2 get smaked
I don’t play eat u wannabz like Tik-Taks
Fuckin wit me u get laid on ur bac
Specially since u aint notin but a Bitch Nigga
I am real solider alwayz got my hand on the Trigger
In da beein a bitch area u is b big but in da rap game I be bigger

wow you betta kill thAT KID.....hes garbage.......

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hurry up n go
lez see if u got any skill nigga

k s spit ur flowz

ware dis nigga lil rip he need 2 hurry up an spitt his shit

cool

her my shit
you a fucking rookie ya i'm still a starter*
but i'll hit your ass harder than pearl horbor*
ask me i smell jelousy*
shut tha fuck up b4 i commit a felony*
you beating my, your ass need a scandle*
cause it will be like hotsauce wit no handle*
and that's not happing so stop naging me*
before i make you scream in anomaly*
you be the titanic and i the iceberg that sunk your ass*
you be the boy and my foot micheal off in your ass*
so tell me you kiss your mom in the face*
if so tell me how my dick tatse*

good battle uppin for votes

may the best man win
read the signature

damn that's cold

Only thang datz garbage iz da shit dat d.j em sce spit
He need 2 stic 2 what he do best suckin dick
cuz he like da rabbit alwayz after dis kids trixz

tru but i have respect for him still

Anomaly-- your verses were empty all your rymes were down to the basics
you could of tried to be more creative you used too much of the same pattern
start dropping more effective Punches
Ex: "Dis da Anomaly
Rippin up da rap games anatomy
Niggaz step forward an git a verbal lobotomy
I be bombin ye like da US did Iraq
U may be able 2 hit hard but like Ja rule I Clap Bac"

though it was all good...4/10

Lil Rip your rap was alot stronger your ending in fact was very clever
but you wont get my vote because this is Rap Battles not write a good poem
you didn't battle him you only had one punch right at the end and that is not enough

OK fine you also called him a rookie(Big Deal)2/10

Vote goes 4--anomaly

fuck this........anomily.....you wanna battle/.....fuc that we are abttlin...bitch nigga get turfed bitch

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