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MC Rabbit | 1 | 16.67% | |
Notorious Verses | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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10-10-04, 11:06 AM | #1 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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Notorious Verses vs MC Rabbit
IP: 0825 899A
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10-10-04, 11:08 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 11:08 AM.
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10-10-04, 11:15 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 6452 8C68
MC RaBbIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 11:15 AM.
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10-10-04, 11:18 AM | #4 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
aite mc rabbit u finally checkin, wat a good sign, LMFAO. now lets do dis battle and get it ova wit
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10-10-04, 12:10 PM | #5 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
Dawg My Lyrics Has Been Revised, Criticized Like Da Insides Of A Killa's Eyes
Stay Cold In Da Mind Like Niggaz Dat Terrorize, Remain Restrained And Victomize My Flow Sticks To Ur Dome Like Styrafoam, And Leave Virgins Free To Bone My Thoughts Are Clearly Spoken Out, While U Always Give Closin Statements Like Funeral Homes My Punches Hit U Lethally, Viciouslly Leave U Breathin Heavily Like Wen U Do Extra Activities My Hits Leave Ur Lyrics Filled In Like "Cavaties" Some Rappers Neva Learn, Think Dey Fully Developed And Fully Grown U A Perfect Example Of Dat, Except Ur Shit Is Fake Like Silicone I Aint Da Greatest Rapper On Da Site, So Y U B Flinchin G Its Cuz My Click Is Like A Camera, I Snap And It Produces Instantly Rappers And Mc's Noe To Respect Me, Unless They Wanna B Violated Me Beatin Dis Nigga In A Rap Battle Is Highly Anticipated I Break Ur Structure, Understand Its Body Parts I Rupture U A Lonely Rabbit So I Get Babs Bunny To Fuck Ya Im Now Introducin Da Conclusion, To Dis Beatin Im Producin U Cant Withstand Da Blows, Dats Y U Loosin, Cuz U Copy And Still Make Doe Like Owners Of Bootleg Music!!!!!!1 |
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10-10-04, 12:10 PM | #6 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
aite dats my verse, i noe da structure is a little off, but ill work on dat, ok mc faggot lets see ur verse already
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10-10-04, 12:13 PM | #7 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
actually my structure was on point, nuttin was wrong wit it, aite come on rabbit
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10-10-04, 12:14 PM | #8 | |
The Next Level
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IP: 6452 8C68
This herb callin everyone out, but only battling the newest MC’s in the game,
You can’t even use punches, so I could beat you, ……………………………….............. .......................... without even having to aim, You say claim that “greatness can’t be taught”, well, certainly not to you, Coz to every battle you go to, people read ya verse, ……………………………….............. ..............................and think it’s your debut, How the fuck did you get a positive record? You don’t know how to use a multi, If you were for sale, people would go to the till and say, ……………………………….............. ....................................is this item faulty?* You’re going to leave after battling me, and I’ll get a medal for behaviour, I’ll go into legends, for keeping RV standards up, ……………………………….............. .........................I’ll be named RV’s saviour,** You so dumb, you try a punch, drop it, then realise it was directed at yourself, If skill level was placed in height, I’d be top, ……………………………….............. ................and you would be on bottom shelf, Well since you seem to want to hit back at yourself, it seems you like the idea of suicide, So I’ma leave you with this, ………………………………..and you’ll wish you didn’t say shit to me, and we wouldn’t collide. Just in case you hadn’t worked some of these lines out……. *as in if he was an electrical item or something, people would think he is faulty **saying that I’m going to be named a legend for making him leave from embarrassment. |
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10-10-04, 12:19 PM | #9 | ||
The Next Level
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IP: 6452 8C68
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well at least you find yaself funny..........uppin for votes |
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10-10-04, 12:23 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
IP: CCAE A7E8
WAcKNESs UR BOTH SO WACK as FUCK With No FloW How U Exspect to rhyem that IN REAL LIFE u wack bitches U SOUND LIKE NERDS
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10-10-04, 12:32 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: C2A1 1A7D
Voted For: Notorious Verses
NV - good spit man, your flow was on, and your punches were hitten hard. Best Line - Dawg My Lyrics Has Been Revised, Criticized Like Da Insides Of A Killa's Eyes Stay Cold In Da Mind Like Niggaz Dat Terrorize, Remain Restrained And Victomize Worst Line - Some Rappers Neva Learn, Think Dey Fully Developed And Fully Grown U A Perfect Example Of Dat, Except Ur Shit Is Fake Like Silicone MC - good spit, you had some good punches but your flow was a lil off. Best Line - How the fuck did you get a positive record? You don’t know how to use a multi, If you were for sale, people would go to the till and say, ……………………………….............. ........................ ............is this item faulty?* Worst Line - Well since you seem to want to hit back at yourself, it seems you like the idea of suicide, So I’ma leave you with this, ………………………………..and you’ll wish you didn’t say shit to me, and we wouldn’t collide. OVERALL - good battle here, I have to give my vote to.. NV, I liked his flow better, and he had some good punches in there, both need to work on some personals. Good battle tho. Vote - NV RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154213
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10-10-04, 12:42 PM | #12 |
Flyweight
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IP: 1249 CCDE
Voted For: MC RaBbIt
MC Rabbit gets my vote. Notorius, you need to elevate, battles are about punchlines, not just saying that you are going to cut someone up and throw their head in bag. MC Rabbit, your punches were okay, nothing special, except for the behaviour/saviour line, try and make more witty punches and you'll be ill. V/MC Rabbit
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10-10-04, 02:33 PM | #13 | |
New to RB
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This was feedback posted for MC RaBbIt
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
My vote goes to N.S. he had multis and things. The oter guys structure was wack couldnt get the flow.
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10-11-04, 11:07 AM | #14 | |
The Next Level
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IP: 1833 F518
LMAO ^^^^ God damn, there is some herbs on RV. uppin.
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10-12-04, 12:02 PM | #15 | |
The Next Level
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IP: 0680 3F6A
uppin for votes..........................
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