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6 - 10 Lines
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Old battle close.. win given to leader

SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 11:00 PM.

str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 11:21 PM.

ok man here it is...10 lines

This kids so subtle so I’ll break him in half
Wouldn’t be ‘plain’ sick if you threw up on ‘air crafts’

You got 1 win up against me u got no chance in hell
The only ‘gun’ wars u been in is ‘pump’ing gas at shell

You rappin like ja rule you belong in the kids choir
Even if you was tony hawk you couldn’t spitfire(a skating company)

this the easiest battle ima burn you the fastest
Thinks hes some sorta of icon(eye-con) cause he jacked someones glasses

Like Hersheys chocolate man your simple and plain
Ignite a flame on ur dick jus to see you coming with flames

Have niggas ~left in pain~ my opponents ~wrecked and maimed~./
Because your funeral’s the only time folks gonna “respect ya name”/

I’m payed to ~slay and dismember,~ “Str8?” I’ll ~end her.~/
And Sub’s gonna “rip hood” like blades taken to KKK members./

Spittin to an audience as if ~we cared,~ kid’s shaking, ~he’s scared~/
Just check his inventory, Stiches? Jeez, this kid came prepared./

You’re lyrics just ~ain’t good~, my lines so strong they ~break wood~/
I wanted a battle, but you know a nikka gets hungry, so I “8 (ate) hood./




Explanations:

Line 2: His title is "respect tha name"
Line 4: KKK has white hoods
Line 6: His Rapperz inventory has stiches in it

Voted For: SubtleTee

This kids so subtle so I’ll break him in half
Wouldn’t be ‘plain’ sick if you threw up on ‘air crafts’

You got 1 win up against me u got no chance in hell
The only ‘gun’ wars u been in is ‘pump’ing gas at shell

You rappin like ja rule you belong in the kids choir
Even if you was tony hawk you couldn’t spitfire(a skating company)

this the easiest battle ima burn you the fastest
Thinks hes some sorta of icon(eye-con) cause he jacked someones glasses

Like Hersheys chocolate man your simple and plain
Ignite a flame on ur dick jus to see you coming with flames

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE "OK" VERSE HERE "OK" PUNCHES NOT REALLY HITTIN IT DAT WELL,,,,,,,,ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES,,,,,,,,NICE FLOW USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME



Have niggas ~left in pain~ my opponents ~wrecked and maimed~./
Because your funeral’s the only time folks gonna “respect ya name”/

I’m payed to ~slay and dismember,~ “Str8?” I’ll ~end her.~/
And Sub’s gonna “rip hood” like blades taken to KKK members./

Spittin to an audience as if ~we cared,~ kid’s shaking, ~he’s scared~/
Just check his inventory, Stiches? Jeez, this kid came prepared./

You’re lyrics just ~ain’t good~, my lines so strong they ~break wood~/
I wanted a battle, but you know a nikka gets hungry, so I “8 (ate) hood./


^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW

SUB-HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW MADE IT AN GOOD VERSE


STR8_HOOD-U HAD AN OK VERSE PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT DA FLOW WAS GOOD,,,,,,,BUT ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,,USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME DATS HOW SUB GOT U IN DIS BATTLE HE USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES



V-SUB CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND USIN PERSONALS

RETURN AN FAV SUB

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Voted For: str8_hood

vote goes to str8_hood, you subtle tee, stop using shit like '*-and all them things to show your punches, thats just saying that you think were all to dumb to relize were your punches arre ok so cut them out ok!!

there were no real punches here, str8_hood attempted a few, not bad but need improve ment, but str8_hood had some very nice flow so thats why he wins my vote, good job!

please return an honest vote on one of the battles below

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^ You just proved your point.

"Stop using symbols like we're too dumb to recognize punches. I didn't see any punches."

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ha ha. ok ok uppin 4 votes. nice verse subtle........

can we get some votes...............................

yo very weak battle, i think both mc's need to elevate(no hate)

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ok .upppppppin for some votes...........................

ok can we get some votes?

Voted For: str8_hood

aight subtle ya had killer multies but ya punches lacked creativity, overral ya flow was decent an this should be a close battle...

str8 ya flow was sick, ya connected bars an dropped hard hittin punches, ya got my vote kid....

no hate just tellin it how i see it
return the fave
peace

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