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4Blood2Hound0 5 100.00%
~*ArEs*~ 0 0%
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Old 11-23-04, 08:08 PM   #1
~*ArEs*~
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From: PHILLY
4Blood2Hound0 vs ~*ArEs*~

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topic:ya find out ya grl cheatin on ya describe wat ya feelin n wat ya gon do
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Old 11-23-04, 08:12 PM   #2
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~*ArEs*~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 08:12 PM.
 
Old 11-23-04, 11:14 PM   #3
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4Blood2Hound0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 11:14 PM.
 
Old 11-23-04, 11:44 PM   #4
4Blood2Hound0
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From: Maryland
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First time i've been in a topical battle.. just to let you know

Havin rough times, definitly nothin thats in this world could save me,
I was sure we surely would never end up like that girl and Shady,
Questioned your loyalty cuz Troy and me fuckin heard you ain't, see,
Cuz of that I came home on time, cuz i wasn't stayin out early lately,
Walked into the bedrom, and removed was your trusted disguise,
Never woulda guess I'da walked in and seen you fuckin a guy,
Everything you said was nothin but lies, so while I stand by the door,
I'll reminisce on all the times and wonder if i should put my hand on the 4,
I loved you... From the bottom of my heart, you cut me deep,
While I go downstairs and start to remove that trusty sheath,
I don't know how to explain my feelings now, but I will when,
Im done writin this note and I can't write no with this ink pen,
Im thinkin of the future, and damn what I been thinkin is awful,
When I should be thinkin bout the present, now wheres my gun run off to?

And yeah.. I am crazy.. lol
 
Old 11-24-04, 11:53 PM   #5
~*ArEs*~
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From: PHILLY
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[CENTER]iight man found out my grl cheatin....
now that nigga got a prollem cuz he gon get a beatin...
see i got demonds runnin threw my mind sayin kill dat nigga...
so i pull out da glock n start pullin the trigga....

see she told me she loved but thats sum bull shyt....
she jus wanted money now sum otha dude hittin da clit...
well i got shells hittin his dome from tha chrome...
blastin away his memories like sylvester stalone*....

so i walk ta my grls house n thier they r....
tryin ta fuck but it wont happin...
blastin clips threw the crib makin sure evry1 feel the clappin...[CENTER/]

* in rocky his head got all messed up from boxin
 
Old 11-25-04, 03:01 AM   #6
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This was feedback posted for 4Blood2Hound0

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yo i think dis was a close one, it culd go either way really-but i go wit blood cause of the beter punch lines he had. it wasnt really a great battle and lik i said culdhave gone either way.
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Old 11-25-04, 03:24 AM   #7
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This was feedback posted for ~*ArEs*~

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watch your content man...... checking polls.......
 
Old 11-25-04, 11:20 AM   #8
4Blood2Hound0
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uppin....... ya'll know what to do.... happy thanksgiving bitches
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Old 11-25-04, 05:01 PM   #9
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uppin for votes happy thanxgivin to yall
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Old 11-26-04, 06:43 PM   #10
50Cal.
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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

ok sries very basic vacab needs work flow and structure ok visuale not there and that hurt you bad a 4/10
4bloodhound good flow and structure vocab is decent good visuale here as well funny ass ender also i liked your story you used to suck youve really elevated good shit here a 6/10
visuales win topicals and 4blood gave a much better story and easy to see description
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Old 11-26-04, 11:27 PM   #11
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iight yall uppin for votes holla!!!!!
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Old 11-27-04, 10:40 AM   #12
DrasticMeasureZ
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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

iight man found out my grl cheatin....
now that nigga got a prollem cuz he gon get a beatin...
see i got demonds runnin threw my mind sayin kill dat nigga...
so i pull out da glock n start pullin the trigga....
^^^^^^^^^ AT DIS PART WAS KINDA WEAK U HAD EMOTIONS BUT THE WORDS WAS KINDA WEAK FAM


see she told me she loved but thats sum bull shyt....
she jus wanted money now sum otha dude hittin da clit...
well i got shells hittin his dome from tha chrome...
blastin away his memories like sylvester stalone*....
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD META'Z AND FEELIGNS AND EMOTIONS



so i walk ta my grls house n thier they r....
tryin ta fuck but it wont happin...
blastin clips threw the crib makin sure evry1 feel the clappin
^^^^^^^^^6 OK CLOSA NICE EMOTIONS TO END IT




ARES- U HAD AN GOOD EMOTIONAL DA FEELINGS BUT DA CREATIVITY AND THE IMAGINARY WASNT GOOD ELEVATE ON THEM TOPICALS HOMIE








Havin rough times, definitly nothin thats in this world could save me,
I was sure we surely would never end up like that girl and Shady,
Questioned your loyalty cuz Troy and me fuckin heard you ain't, see,
Cuz of that I came home on time, cuz i wasn't stayin out early lately,
Walked into the bedrom, and removed was your trusted disguise,
Never woulda guess I'da walked in and seen you fuckin a guy,
Everything you said was nothin but lies, so while I stand by the door,
I'll reminisce on all the times and wonder if i should put my hand on the 4,
I loved you... From the bottom of my heart, you cut me deep,
While I go downstairs and start to remove that trusty sheath,
I don't know how to explain my feelings now, but I will when,
Im done writin this note and I can't write no with this ink pen,
Im thinkin of the future, and damn what I been thinkin is awful,
When I should be thinkin bout the present, now wheres my gun run off to?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT U HAD EMOTIONS AND FEELINGS DEFINITELY GOOD CREATIVITY AND IMAGINARY

HOUND- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE I SENSE CHA FEELIGNS AND CHA EMOTIONS U GOT FLOW BUT ELEVATE ON DEM VOCAB MAYNE

OVERALL= HOUND GETS MY VOTE CAUSE OF FLOW AND GOOD STRONGLY EMOTIONS AND CREATIVITY


ARES- U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD FLWO WHICH GOT HOUND THE VOTE BUT IT WAS BECAUSE U DIDNT HAD NO CREATIVITY OR IMAGINARY MAYNE.......U GOTS TO GO DEEP

PEACE
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 11-27-04, 01:07 PM   #13
4Blood2Hound0
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uppin for votes.........................................
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Old 11-27-04, 08:46 PM   #14
4Blood2Hound0
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From: Maryland
IP: B8B5 F992

uppin for votes.. keep it headed in the same direction
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Old 11-29-04, 07:14 PM   #15
PntBlnkDistnce
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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

that was ahott drop mann u kept it flown all the way man nice rhymes and flow good structure kept on topin n all that shyt man deep kid deep post a vote on this man

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162845
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


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Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

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