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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-03-04 at 07:46 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

NeptuneHurricane has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 07:47 PM.

Rambo has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 07:48 PM.

Yo, I guess Ill go first

I Pack more Green than the Packers, my rhymes so cold you can call em lambo/*
This pussy Rambo is a hoe, he thinks his rhymes are bright stars but dont glow/
Let him know, cuz this battles all for show/
When you rap, it's like a time bomb, cuz sooner or later you'll realize:
You blow/
I spit faster than an autoMATIC/
I write laid back you, sir, are a faNATIC/
I flow with more art than the vATICan/

Finisher:
Elite Verbally? I send ADRENALINE** pumpin through ya veins to clog ya ''FOUR-ZONES'' (4 chambers of heart)
Lyrically RAPIN RAMBO, listen to the ''WHORE-MOANS'' (hormones)

explanations
*Lambo Feild=Home of the GreenBay Packers
**Adrenaline is a hormone

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Verbally known as a monster starter of rap disaster/
Killer of tha burg rambo fuckin clapped your master//
Neptune is a planet and you cant be a scurry mayne/
Cause i had a impact on florida you aint no hurrycane//
I'm gon give you a hand and help you find da door/
And if i catch you talkin slick ya new home is tha fuckin floor/
I'll leave a mark around ya eye like peanuts on Charlie Brown//
Now that i dont like you this is what plannin to do partna/
Tear ya nuts and dick off and hand em to you partna//
I'll play more games wit chu than dreamcast or playstation/
I'll step to you wit my fist on blast and ya heart pacin//
I'll swing like a nigga wit a feirce mind he know skillz/
Cause my hits are more viscious than Jermaine O'Neal//

Yo i fucked up on tha charlie brown part tha part thats supposed to go in that is "I'll leave you dead in tha toolshead no sound" someone please put that in there cause its not a rap without all my parts in

that shit was clean its hard to tell who won cause both of yall did hella good

Uppin for votes.

Actually, we haven't even got a single one.

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Uppin again. Come on ppl, we need votes for dis battle.

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Voted For: Rambo

vote= neptune

alot more complex, bettervocab

and that finisher pretty much decided it

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appreciate real music.......end the bling bliing era

Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

Aii this Is How I feel
NT
Wouldnt Had My vote if It Wasnt For That Endin bcuz i Was Feelin Rambos verse Until That Endin made Me Jus Get Crunked LOL

RMBO
I Was feelin Ya Verse But Ya endin Couldve been Alot more betta Then You Wouldve Had My vote Bcuz Ya Verse Was nice mayne Next Time you battle Hol that Same Enthusiastim from The Begging Mayne You did Great

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ooooooooooh SHIT

my bad....i accidently voted for rambo

i meant to vote for neptune, his shit was 50x better


my bad....can that shit be changed?

Lol. I dont think so. Damn Chuck, read the rules and learn the system. Contact a mod.

Hey King, Ill vote on your battles man. Just returnin the favor.

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Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

give this to u cuz of ur closerliekd it strongest bar outta the whoel battle first bar was kinda good some nice wordplay

rambo suxs stop rappin ~1~

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