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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-11-04 at 03:49 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 08:15 AM.

i aint sufferin but when i do i automatically boost my vitality,
i'll knock you out so bad, you'll forget that this is reality,
actually, im one of the illest mc's in the UK, to see me you gotta pay,
you cant say shit, so jus move outta my way,
i remix my rhymes puttin in delay, when i kill you everyday,
to make you get critical tooth decay,
my rhymes puzzle your brain with hints of lyrical perplexity,
kang, you should just quit rhymin and go for studying hysterectomy, dont lecture me
im clearly pointing out all of your lyrical flaws,
you could do metaphorical backflips and still take 2 days for you to get some applause, i settle the scores
your lyrical chords will leave me bored
im layin down more than you can afford and im gettin you floored,
my metaphors, are unreadable, unspeakable
my vocabs scientifically dope and insanely unbelieveable

KaNg kOrRuPt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 07:27 PM.

aight here goe no beef to anyone it's just a battle...

Ay kid you’re one and one that already shows that you’re weak
You’s a newb that can’t elevate your situation’s bleak
You let your lyrics speak so all you say is crap
But you’re from the UK no wonder you can’t rap(no offense to any UK rappers)
Instead of RV try I just got merked.com
Cause besides eminem white rapper’s an oxymoron(no offense to white rappers)
Jmsbnd I don’t even want to waste my time
I’ve heard your rhymes what makes you think you can compete with mine
It’s about time I slaughtered you like cattle
For a wise man it was pretty dumb to except this battle(he’s in the wise men committee)
And it’s sad to see bad emcee’s, that think they good on R.V
Battle me, and after postin get rattled cuz we straight G
My fun is over you just can’t beat me son
After about the third or fourth line I already won

aight uppin this battle vote up ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo, that woz a nice verse man, decent punchlines.
uppin for votes.........

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thanks... UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

JMS BAD STRCTURE FLOW WAS OFF NO GOOD DISSES OR PUNCHES BASICALLY A SELF GLORIFICATION VERSE WHICH MADE it worse a 3/10
kang ok structure flow ok vocab bout even with jms punches and diisess also need work but he actually tried to insult his oppenant which is basically what your suppose to do therfore winning him the battle with more effective punches and disses 5/10

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uppin this ya'll!!!

uppin 4 votes ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin errbody vote up !!!!!

.......uppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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