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Check in by: 12-09-04 at 10:37 AM

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Makeveli Trained has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 10:39 AM.

Cannabarz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 10:49 AM.

Watch as i expose this nigga as tha site's biggest whore
Givin weddin rings 2 generalz, tha only way he engages n war
Id say ima win this, but thas more played than ya bar lines
N Cannabarz tried 2 throw BIG punches.....
....but failed 2 increase his FONT SIZE
Im seriously tired of this niggas shyt, so im gettin constipated
He thinks throwin hard 'punches' iz bein So-phis-ticated(Fist)
Ill toss his weak lines n tha 'toilet'
......n show em how 2 'Can-a-bar'
Dude lives on tha net, so hes goin nowhere like walkin n tar
Im tha 1 wit tha hot bars so mayb we oughta switch names
Ya previous wins were wit noobs, so mayb u should b 'trained'
I got this bitch shook, he dont think i c em' hidin n tha fog
U winnin this battle iz 'far-fetched' like a 'quarterback's dog'
Y iz he still battlin n FL if hes supposed ta b a vet
He's scared of a challenge cuz he dont wanna lose his net rep
Better believe it when i say that i will shyt on u
I already won this battle, dont start ta think it's a fluke
U may b 20-1, but my record's better, dog im undefeated(lol)
Ur tha wackest dude here, n i dont think it needs 2 b repeated
This dude jus finished gettin regulated by 'Warren G'
Cuz u 'broke easily', i hope u came wit a 'warranty'

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Voted For: Makeveli Trained

um this waz one of the betta battlez i've seen on hear....
nice
flow=tie
meta's=Trained
punches=trained
personals=barz

so my vote goes to trained for harder hitting punches..an
getting way more creative then barz....peep my ish tho'
fellas vrs.ebonics and fredunlimited

aight thanx, uppin

Voted For: Cannabarz

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to M-TRAINED flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, CANNABARZ had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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damn.........^^^^nice sig, bad vote, j/p

uppin...

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Voted For: Cannabarz

cAnnabarz took this battle, even though it was a decent effort by both.
The beginning was won by Makaveli, but overall the rest was better on Cannabarz.

yup. 2-1 me. upping..................................

Voted For: Cannabarz

CannaBarz:
Dam This Piece Was Deff Hott, I Like The Vocab In Here Better Then Most Of RV Members Be Hitting Up, Got Straight To The Point With Your Punches And Personals..That Was Well Done, Structure Was Brazen...Well Decent, Rhyme Scheme Was Nice.....Only Thing I Wasnt Feeling Was The Closing Other Then That You Had A Well Decent Flow With Multis...Personaly I'll Give You An 9.5/10

Trained:
Your Verse Was Not Queit Far From His You RHymes Scheme Connect A Little Better And Structure Was Connected Better Only Thing Your Vocabulary Wasnt There But You Did Have Some Decent Vocab Dont Get Me Wrong, Punches Was There Nice Playing Off Him, Personal Was There Also I Like How It Sounded..Over All I'll Give You An 9/10

Close Battle I Say Big Ups To Both Yall

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