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Untraceable | 4 | 44.44% | |
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt | 5 | 55.56% | |
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01-15-05, 10:41 PM | #1 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt vs Untraceable
IP: 28AD 5545
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20-40 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Recycling Topical Battle Topic = Frustration Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 01-16-05 at 04:01 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
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01-16-05, 02:45 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 02:45 PM.
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01-16-05, 03:05 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 408D D2A2
Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 03:05 PM.
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01-16-05, 07:42 PM | #4 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
Topic=Frustrations of the past Lets just rewind time back to the time where my mind was scuffled Troubled situations brought creations of pain so i decided to huddle My muffled screams were only percieved through the sound seeping Recieving noise threw the walls, left awake weeping instead of dreaming Leaving me emotionally distrought but who woulda thought it ended soon So impactions from that baseball bat left countless blue and black bruises Abusive past caused the memories to last forever, if only life was better Never the less the memories began to stress causing my face to weather Constant times where you could here a grown man be broken down and Unspoken on how and why i cry because the night my body was pounded Scared for life on the inside because i was never encouraged or inspired All the lovers are liars for the secrets kept made our relations grow tired In dire need of something good in life but i cant ever seem to get it right So i write to release the feelings from the many frustrations of my life Aspirations of succesion i thoght would leesen the degree of my memory But gradually it began to put an impression on my life and it'd never leave So im left in forever greif and the financial situations are hard to handle Down to using candles to brighten the room, the house appears in shambles Breaking things to deal with the notions of what my past has been invading Creating a life of stress and i put my emitions to the test, its so frustrating DONT GET IT......DONT VOTE
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01-16-05, 08:27 PM | #5 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 0825 899A
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Life has it's troubles, And life has happiness and joy But life can grip your soul, And play with it like a toy Make you do the undesirable, Unspeakable actions Innocent masses.. Have no visible time for relaxing Millitant fascists, Frustration packed in immigrant caskets Of the dead souls being shipped away filled with gases So im frustrated sitting, Staring at a grimmacing corpse Father time mentioning a death wish that was forced Of course, Life has me frustrated fallin off of my course Death was my main frustration straight from the source I faced the inglorious hordes, Who consumed my soul Frustrated they made me and now resume to mold Me into the infamous person that they wish i could be Throwin useless knowedge like theyre pissing on me Frustrated - because life is not as easy as it seems Frustrated - because this isnt the world meant for me Frustrated - because my vision is tainted when i see Frustrated - because frustation is the only way to think You live my life !.. Just take a fucking walk in my shoes Just listen to the voices telling you exactly what to do I dont have my own life.. It belongs to someone else So please, Believe, If you think you can fucking help Cuz people have tried before, But the joy just faded And they dont realize... Why this boy is frustrated It's an on going circle, Fire has encompassed my heart The pain inside, I try to hide, But it rips my chest apart So you ask why am i frustrated ? That answer is easy I hate my life, Hate the strife, I just dont want to be me Everything i do is constantly overshadowed with hatred And everytime i get close to joy, I dont seem to make it Something evil's pulling me back, Away from the dream A nightmare it seems, Where i let go of self-esteem And tumble in a downward circle, Into a frightening place And go faster and faster, Towards a hightening space Where frustration doesnt exist, Life is easy, No pain Where i can not lose, But have everything to gain A happy scene, people come and go like a bus station If you want a great life, Just let go of frustration
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01-17-05, 01:33 AM | #6 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
solid drop fam........good luck
uppin
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01-17-05, 12:50 PM | #7 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
uppin...........lets get some votes on this.......you shoulda made the posts to vote like 300 not 500 but i understand why u did......cuz of wack voters
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01-17-05, 11:58 PM | #8 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
uppin.............................................
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01-18-05, 08:02 PM | #9 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
uppin.............................................
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01-19-05, 03:20 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Untraceable
DAMN THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I EVER READ UNTRACEABLE SHIT AT FIRST I THOUGHT FLOW WAS PICKING ON A NEWB THEN I READ THE VERSES FLOW GOOD VERSE NICE STRUTURE AND DECENT IMAGERY VOCAB COULDVE BEEN BETTER BUT DECENT NOT A GREAT PICTURE BUT THE POINT CAME ACCROSS.NOW UNTRACEABLE GREAT PICTURE VOCAB IS PERFECT STRUTURE ALSO SHIT IS DOPE AS FUCK I WAS REALLY FEELING THIS PIECE FOR REAL FLOW NO HATE BUT UNTRACABEL GOT THAT AND I KNOW YOUS A FAIR DUDE SO YOU CAN SEE THAT. BOTH PLEASE RETURN HONEST ONES BACK THANK YOU
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01-20-05, 06:59 PM | #11 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
uppin for more votes...........................uppin
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01-20-05, 07:29 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Untraceable
Nice Topic Battle Here Flow Intelligent: Nice drop from you here. Liked the way how u used big words...lol but anyway, you did very-well on this topic on Frustrations...a few lines could have rhymed better though...didnt really feel the emotion on this piece though but u had a good topic-drop though...no hate Untraceable: Your drop, I felt a little emotion up there..you had a good story up in here too, rhymes was good, and flow on there was even to both of you, overall u had a nice drop too Close battle to both of you, but Untrace took this one barely.................though no hate though
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01-22-05, 12:13 PM | #13 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
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01-23-05, 09:55 PM | #14 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
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01-25-05, 06:18 PM | #15 | |||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Untraceable
aii this is what im feelin My Long Ass Explaination You Hade A Nice Topical Verse Im Lovin It But Ima hAve to go wit Da MAyne over There Untraceable.....You cam wit some nice Emotions but I Knpw ive Seen you do way betta But Whateva .....far As Your vocab go it was decent But some of ya Topical Went kinda off on a Branch But I Still got to what you was sayin But Ima Have to go With untraceable On This One Becuase he cam wit Some Nice Emotionz and stuff he really felt it That topic Infact I dont think it was flow that Messed up its the topic its jus to ...well.....Plain for someone like you to be doin But Like I said I had To edge this one out and give it to Untraceable....sorry Mayne....Maybe better luck Next time[/b] PlEASE IM ASKIN AS A GENEROUS FRIEND PLEASE PLEASE RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU TO RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG I GOT THE BATTLE BCUZ ITS 3-0 NOW BUT NOW ITS JUS BEEIN SLEPT ON ITS BEEN ON 3-0 FOR BOUT 2WEEKS NOW LOL SO PLEASE RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG ..................BOTH OF YALL .........AND DONT TRY TO VOTE AGAINST ME BECAUSE I VOTED AGAINST YOU FLOW BECAUSE THA WOULDNT BE RIGHT TO THE CORRECT WINNER SO YALL PLEASE PLEASE RTF THANX |
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