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5 | 83.33% |
d-cËpt!0n |
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1 | 16.67% |
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Banned: Cheating
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d-cËpt!0n vs J DOT
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topical Battle Topic: Contract with a demon aight, lets here yo pre-written shit...even tho i wanna diss u Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 01-24-05 at 10:49 AM Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
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J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 10:24 AM.
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d-cËpt!0n has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 10:47 AM.
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A dark aura around my soul told me of an ominous presence/
Then appeared a lady that radi-ated a voluptuous essence/ Red lips, red dress, slim hips, full breasts adorned her curves/ I was overtaken by a high that warmed my nerves/ "Give me your soul as a toll and my body yours tonight"/ I vicously ripped her dress, intently battling this love fight/ Moving sensation, my motions impatient, ripping her in half/ Blood flowed slow-ly, ears deafened by the ringing of her laugh/ Then I came and felt my frame emptied of its soul, im sold My eternal hell is in a bed cell, and im force to love a burning hole/
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Banned: Cheating
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I’m faced with a dilemma; blow this demon right off tha map
Or accept tha fact he’s different, and leave him right where he at Friends or clap?……….even tho I aint been provoked I’m thinking, could this be reality, or is it all just a joke? I know I can war with him, but do he wunna war with me? War with he?....I might not make it, so should I keep tha war in tha streets? Its all crazy, I’m wishing I can get in his dome So I can hear tha things he’s thinking, if he wanted war all along I gota talk to him, maybe its all a misunderstanding But I don’t wunna be tha soft head, but at least I’ll be standing …….fuck it, I take tha risk, I got nuthin to lose so, I set down my hands and said “Whats up with you” Talking to demon Never knew u had the same thoughts of not knowing what to do War or fight…….i can’t leave it up to you We gotta make this right, we both could go hard with our fist But only ones gunna survive………should we take that risk? We really got no beef, just wrong place at tha wrong time Crossed each others line, now we forced to draw nines U could sense we don’t want war, maybe its all just stupid But not knowing what to do, makes me wunna just lose it I think he’s bluffing, he might just take tha first shot He thinks ima blast first, and leave him tied in a knot I’ll be tha bigger man……“lets both put our guns on down” “and talk this over a bit, cause we both acting like dumb clowns” “lets shake a hand, sign a contract, we both leave here safe” …..amazed, he agreed……we were in tha same place took tha pen out….wrote down we both would end this with no blood…no guts, just loyalty and friendship sign on tha dotted lines….we could live our lives now with respect for one another, since we both backed down |
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Banned: Cheating
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uppin this shit................faggots ..............
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Banned: Cheating
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uppin this shit................faggots ..............
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Light Weight
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Voted For: J DOT
u got it this man..................................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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wtf. Unexplained...Uppin this bitch............Fo sho
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Voted For: J DOT
ima give dis to jdot cuz he had betta punches and personals...dception had way betta structure though and sum good vocab use..flow was a tie but jdot had betta wordplay...multis were lackin in dis battle...but doesnt cuz jdot took wit eaze... v/jdot Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: J DOT
Hmmm....both had good verses...but I believe J Dot got this for overall a better verse...imagery was nice...story was good...voab was a'ight...flow was off in places, btu structure was still intact...Deception....short verse...you need to make it longer...and you need to work on your imagery and vocab...not much of a story due to length...you have potential...keep workin at it...no hate. |
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No hate but two votes dont count Assas-Sin and Marvelis dont have good explanations/. ETF with the punches. Last vote was legit, nice explanation.
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Banned: Cheating
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^ITS COOL...i wouldve done tha same thing....EXPLAIN THESE DAMN VOTES.....PEOPLE
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Banned: Cheating
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uppin this shit.......................
and i dont even do toical, and i kno i won!!! ha! |
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Deadly Powers Unleashed
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Voted For: J DOT
J DOT got this, it was a close battle, but JDot had better imagery, better insitefulness, and he showed more emotions, both verses flowed fine, but J Dot had this, also D's verse was too short though vote: J DOT PS please return the favor thanks!http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174170
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