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02-13-05, 08:29 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Yall Got My heart (goodbye to the jury)
IP: C7EE 5FCD
please bear wit me wit the quality, this track got a lot of meanin...
i rushed the recording and writing of this song. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/nitrogenmusic.htm Mista Authentik, first of all, you is my dog, I was a Young and wild nigga when you first put me on, but you molded me and shaped me, to this cat on a this track, when i flipped out, invited me back, and i thank you for that, you took a chance on me, all of you, and im greatful for that, you cant even begin do believe the effect that you have, these people care for me, and that's somethin new, DQ, opend my eyes, showed me a womans point of view, Show me its actually ok, to have feelins for a girl, i have family, and theres no greater feelin in the world, Acuity, the message to get to you hard to say, cause you been the since not knowin me to this day, you're a cool cat, and your type is one of a kind, in a world ruled by hatred, you got a different state of mind, So dont change that, cause in 3 years, you'll probably be the same cat and no matter what they take from you, dog you cant take that... See we more than a crew, we are a family, the jury's the only ones strong enough to even handle me you got my heart, and yall, we got a plan to be, the next great crew on the site, so lets go... Mista Authentik, DQ, you got my hear, Payday, Immac you got my heart, AC, UB, you got my heart, Judicial, Infared, Dopeman, you got my heart, aight judicial, its your time to get props now/ when my head got big u brought me down to the ground/ even though we aint always see it to eye wit each other/ you gave me guidance, so we aint just homies, yo we brothers/ i still have the blood of a juror, even this day/ I love all of yall, and to the dudes, just not in that way/ Dopeman, you another cazy nigga like me/ we couldve ran this site, if u see things the way that i see/ dont ask why i left, i know this aint the way things should be/ only nigga in the crew wild enough to tolerate my heat/ and Black Plague me and u still boys till the end/ i only got one thing to say, you better get that collab in/ so to my brothers, and my sister by marrige/ dont forget my face when u see me ridin away in the carriage *pm me two links*
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02-17-05, 01:36 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 13A4 AD49
dont take it personal, but this is the internet, you wrote this track like without the jury you wouldn't be the man you are, which is pretty pitiful if its true... quality was way off, content was so so but you sound like you still need alot of work. 1) presence needs elevation, 2) your mic manners are bad- lots of rumbles, you fade in and out- pick a distance and stay there and stop shuffling the mic around your hand. 3) delivery is lack luster... make it fun for us to listen to, as it is now its not. 1
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02-17-05, 04:03 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C7EE 5FCD
no it aint true, but im jus sayin we me and all them became real cool. and if the crew woulda broke up i probably wouldnt have spoke to them. so its just basically a way of sayin goodbye. and it wouldnt have been right if i didnt make it wit emotions. so yea than, but still thanks for the feed.
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08-27-06, 12:11 PM | #4 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: E167 69D5
Where Are You Mother Fuckah!...i Miss You So Much
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