••••Wanna Gamble?••••
IP: 95FF 1D86
Allow me to introduce myself Squad I am your conscience,
WTF we do’n here? Ya know Dice is nice with the phonics,
Us in a battle please...it’s just nonsense,
Look fool!!! We can’t even spell Eboniks,
Put us in the spotlight ‘n’ now I gotta try to save this case…
Fuk let’s just do what we did last time, (bite to save some face)…
Ya know them kids is kidding they say you got some skill,
I know losses are tough to swallow, but here…take the pill.
It's no joke don’t get me wrong, but ya heart’n’head wanted me to pass this note along
“WTF? YOU DEAF? THAT FAT BITCH IS SING’N YOUR SONG”
Not try’n to sound cold, but when have we came up with one good punch?
Call it a hunch, but I’m think’n we stay-in-school, c’mon, let’s go pack your lunch.
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02-23-05, 08:44 AM
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••••Wanna Gamble?••••
IP: 95FF 1D86
up'n.............................................. ..............................
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02-23-05, 07:58 PM
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#7
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••••Wanna Gamble?••••
IP: A0D7 7569
up'n.............................................. ..........
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02-23-05, 10:28 PM
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#8
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Guest
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IP: B52C 6258
SQUAD-UP has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 10:28 PM.
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02-24-05, 06:49 PM
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#9
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++ON TOP++
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IP: B52C 6258
SQUUUUUUUAAAADUP!!!!
chea, yo imagine me losin, gettin juked by a crook
nah,u can almost measure this gay, callhim fruit by thefoot
ya spirit crushed, it b trampled n solemn
if u bet u could win, then i guess u got a gamblin problem
can't believe the mouthin on this fool, i b doubtin on this dude
he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew
Dice, u small to me, you aint nothin large
rough sex wit his rhymebook, only time ya bars was FUCKIN HARD
a trusty lesson, when i swing wit this rusty weapon
his wins plus losses is only way dice gets Lucky 7
im not kind, and im no benign in fact
i say fuck playin wit dice, cuz his rhymes is CRAPS....EASSSY
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02-24-05, 07:14 PM
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#10
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++ON TOP++
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IP: B52C 6258
+++++++++uppin good battle dice+++++++++++
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02-24-05, 07:45 PM
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#11
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This was feedback posted for SQUAD-UP
IP: 1D02 B26F
just feedin tiLL i can vote:
STYLE:
u both got creative thoughts, different from the fresh shit ive been reading, SQUAD-UP executed his lines a bit harder than dice, slight edge here
PUNCH:
i think squad delivered some better ones, although dice's "taking the piLL" line was up there if i read the pun correctly
FLOW:
squad started off broken but came thru well in the end, dice has awesome rhythm between setup lines and punchlines, but when u put the whole thing together, somethings amiss
TECHNIQUE:
u both avoided plain old crap, which i like... ok enough input im not even voting here
S: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice•••• (slightly)
P: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice••••
F: SQUAD-UP > ••••Dice••••
T: =tiE=
OVERALL: i think if u took a little more time, u could both easily cut out some unnecessary wording, but besides that pretty tight battle here
VOTE: stiLL cant, but wouldve been for SQUAD-UP
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02-24-05, 11:55 PM
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#12
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++ON TOP++
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IP: B52C 6258
+++++++++uppin good battle dice+++++++++++
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02-25-05, 12:14 AM
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#13
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••••Wanna Gamble?••••
IP: 95FF 1D86
Up'n.............................................. ..........
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02-25-05, 09:02 AM
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#14
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••••Wanna Gamble?••••
IP: A0D7 7569
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02-25-05, 09:08 AM
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IP: 1E90 22BF
Voted For: SQUAD-UP
he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew
thats the line that did for me plus i didn t understand the other guy sayin we all the time both decent drops but squad had this one for content ..........v squad .....return some feedback in songs forum for "sick of this " by tonyself and seven third holla
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