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Effect | 0 | 0% | |
Parallel | 5 | 100.00% | |
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03-18-05, 06:16 PM | #1 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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Effect vs Parallel
IP: 5043 32F4
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03-18-05, 06:36 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 5043 32F4
Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 06:36 PM.
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03-19-05, 05:19 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9395 3890
Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-19-05 05:19 AM.
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03-19-05, 06:50 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0CB8 A04E
Public Enemy A young 12 year old, with the taste for Alcohol Police wherever he’d go, on him like Enthral He would bag for money all the time like a Bum Yet it was weird cause fun was all he Wanted He acted out for the money, he wasn’t Getting Police had to step in, to stop him from Spitting He got out of control, even for police to Handle I was told he would calm down with a Candle His parents would get upset, even on his Behalf They knew something was to happen on his Behalf ... As he traveled, he came to notice a harder Road He felt drawn in, as he couldn’t find out the Code He barnstormed, lots, yet he wasn’t smart Enough As he went on to each city he felt like a big Laugh Every time he saw kids they’d giggle & point at Him No one could understand him, such a troubled Sin ... Back in town his mom & dad felt so worried for Him They’d wondered where he’d been, through out the Days Always hoping he never got into even more Trouble His life was coming up short, soon to pop like a Bubble Gladly he fell upon a man, which cared for his Condition Helped him out and in time he got better in Transition The End... |
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