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Old 05-10-05, 04:40 PM   #1
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KORV Disappointments... What The FUCK were you thinking?!

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The tourney is running smoothly, good job to Flow and Socrates.

But here's where KORV Disappointments go every week.

Strictly my opinion.

This is not a Beef Thread.

I will go line by line BUT that takes too long so i change my mind.

Disappointment of the Month = Y'all Favorite Candidate CALI

It was him vs. Genecide.

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Originally Posted by C.A.L.I (Arrowhead Period Boy)
When our 'Mindz Kollide' your verse equals retarded patients
All flow no elevation ya barz like water in basements
Punches like drunken fighters thrown but way off of they aim
Ya shit sucks got the same chance going up as a crashed plane
You ass lame but hold on a minute im link tossing
How you dickride stay on 'Flow' like broken sink facuets
Think he 'dope' cuz his dad did coke?...but he sniffed them lines
So you aint shit only considered gifted round Christmas time
Watching for stolen rhymes ya crew was just u and a biter
He 'KEN/can' not see a dope punch unless we talking bout street fighter
Get your 'Ghostwriters' tell um when they drop to give it they best
Cuz when it comes to being a herb you defiantly 'BIgger Then The Rest’



In bold are the words in your verse thou shalt not ever use again..
Reasons why (read below)


Retarded= you
Aim= where you ask people to vote
Crashed Plane= what will happen if you tap one toe on the entrance to the plane.
Broken= what haven’t your fat ass broken already. (your mic, your computer)
Sink= your biggest fear when you enter water
Dope punch= something you just CAN’T do, if you were from Nutty Professor saying YES I CAN… (one more time) YES I CAN! Well, you can’t.
Herb= you and it always will be that way
Bigger than the rest= We know you fat, don’t self-glorify you goddamn idiot.
You LOSE.

Why the fuck you talking bout street fighter's Ken in your rhymes? Good Jesus.

How does water get in basements in the first place, you idiot?! Elevation.

You thought you were going to win so you posted your horrible verse first.

And quit using Christmas time in your lines you played the same lines more than twice and both times were in the KORV tournies, you always talking bout gifts.

Try saving up money instead of buying cheeseburgers.

At least try to wait for the 40-cent specials on Wednesdays.

I’m really trying to ‘watch’ your weight for you. Thank me.

You wouldn’t know when to stop.

You got KO'd the second 'round'... what an oxymoron.

We know you got more rounds to get rid of, porky.

Ok well your verse was so bad that this may have turned into a Beef thread.

-~CALI-Flower you lost fag boy now get over it and stop crying in the threads~-
(Answer my call-out if there is any further problems.)

If you respond, then you
(a) suck which is automatic.
(b) notice how bad you suck after i critiqued this.
(c) answered my call-out you fruity fag.
(d) want your fingers to do more exercising by holding shift keys so you can yell better textually.
(e) notice your dickriders haven't spoken yet.

Chose your pick.

Thank me for doing your critique you fat bitch.

Next week, I shall present the worse battle in KORV. Good Luck to all contestants, don't slack off. The next thread could be you!

To be continued...
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Old 05-10-05, 04:42 PM   #2
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omfg, shut up, do you love this guy?
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Old 05-10-05, 04:44 PM   #3
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herb.

k, waiting for the next rider. glad you saw your verse sucked too, it was a tad bit better than Cali-flower. Both you should have battled each other.

Don't fuck with the one you don't know.

I'll merk you easy.

So stfu.
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Old 05-10-05, 04:44 PM   #4
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The tourney is running smoothly, good job to Flow and Socrates.

But here's where KORV Disappointments go every week.

Strictly my opinion.

This is not a Beef Thread.

I will go line by line BUT that takes too long so i change my mind.

Disappointment of the Month = Y'all Favorite Candidate CALI

It was him vs. Genecide.




In bold are the words in your verse thou shalt not ever use again..
Reasons why (read below)


Retarded= you
Aim= where you ask people to vote
Crashed Plane= what will happen if you tap one toe on the entrance to the plane.
Broken= what haven’t your fat ass broken already. (your mic, your computer)
Sink= your biggest fear when you enter water
Dope punch= something you just CAN’T do, if you were from Nutty Professor saying YES I CAN… (one more time) YES I CAN! Well, you can’t.
Herb= you and it always will be that way
Bigger than the rest= We know you fat, don’t self-glorify you goddamn idiot.
You LOSE.

Why the fuck you talking bout street fighter's Ken in your rhymes? Good Jesus.

How does water get in basements in the first place, you idiot?! Elevation.

You thought you were going to win so you posted your horrible verse first.

And quit using Christmas time in your lines you played the same lines more than twice and both times were in the KORV tournies, you always talking bout gifts.

Try saving up money instead of buying cheeseburgers.

At least try to wait for the 40-cent specials on Wednesdays.

I’m really trying to ‘watch’ your weight for you. Thank me.

You wouldn’t know when to stop.

You got KO'd the second 'round'... what an oxymoron.

We know you got more rounds to get rid of, porky.

Ok well your verse was so bad that this may have turned into a Beef thread.

-~CALI-Flower you lost fag boy now get over it and stop crying in the threads~-
(Answer my call-out if there is any further problems.)

If you respond, then you
(a) suck which is automatic.
(b) notice how bad you suck after i critiqued this.
(c) answered my call-out you fruity fag.
(d) want your fingers to do more exercising by holding shift keys so you can yell better textually.
(e) notice your dickriders haven't spoken yet.

Chose your pick.

Thank me for doing your critique you fat bitch.

Next week, I shall present the worse battle in KORV. Good Luck to all contestants, don't slack off. The next thread could be you!

To be continued...

lol, damn.
I actually read all that.
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Old 05-10-05, 04:46 PM   #5
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I know, I proofread it as well.

Good read.
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Old 05-10-05, 04:50 PM   #6
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lol, riiiiiiiiiight, I know my verse wasn't good, but I didnt need a good one to k.o. troop, hence why I keyed it, now, why dont you say who you are then, otherwise i'll just merk you under your alias, cuz I dont ride cali, however, your the one that made 3 posts about him already, just make one thats it, but now this is too much, hop off the guys nut sack herb
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Old 05-10-05, 04:54 PM   #7
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aight since you still talking why you following the threads i make?

i'll battle you pink-slip match.
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Old 05-10-05, 04:58 PM   #8
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so chose your pick.

i posted my critique here because i want it here instead of the beef thread in KORV..

well, it's there too.. so you can access it either way.
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Old 05-10-05, 04:59 PM   #9
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they call me LV and I'm also "Da Tongue Rapist"...stick out your tongue Jacko

well first you'd have to get C.A.L.I.'s cock out ya mouth and his peanut balls off ya chin dumbho (yes, say it as one word) so please...stop the madness and if you really wanna be a threat, challenge someone to REAL rapping...you know, that shit you do to a beat, with a mic and record
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Old 05-10-05, 05:03 PM   #10
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Da tongue rapist has spoken...

Jacko get off his pee pee.
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Old 05-10-05, 05:28 PM   #11
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lmao, yeah kid got owned............
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Old 05-10-05, 05:33 PM   #12
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herb.

k, waiting for the next rider. glad you saw your verse sucked too, it was a tad bit better than Cali-flower. Both you should have battled each other.

Don't fuck with the one you don't know.

I'll merk you easy.

So stfu.

im sick of you trying to talk down to rv n still postin on it..
im setting up a battle... whats your preference.?
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10 lines?..........or do you need 30 to my 10?....
honestly, answer me this.....
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if your so damn good, why arent you in front lines
or battlin the so-called rv elite????
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 05-10-05, 05:38 PM   #14
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Did i talk down on RV?

No i didn't.

What are you talking bout?

I talk down on the assholes in here who claim their the shit.

Also known as CALI-FLOWER because he got smart with me in another thread.

Be gone. My beef is with Cali you can be next.

IF I didn't like RV I wouldn't be on it.

And i sure as hell wouldn't care about people who give it a bad reputation.

But I do, so that answers your question.
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Old 05-10-05, 05:39 PM   #15
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double post... Edit...........
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