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6-8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-03-05 at 06:03 PM

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~christyles~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 05:34 PM.

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 05:36 PM.

You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr

i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack

my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet

I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone

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documented murder

^^ holla at me if u wanna join....

DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME *

last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0

whos next!!

alrite here i go

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/
so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/
"fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/
on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/
my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/
now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/
got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/



good luck.....felt like i stretched a couple of those lines but watever, the middle too are fillers and i had to key this quick, about 7 min cause i g2g....like right now haha peace

uppinnnn for votes.....................................

Voted For: confidential

IP:


You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr

^^ da fukk yo LoL good try at da multies 4/10

i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack

^^ wakk 0/10

my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet

^^ aight punch 3/10

I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone

^^ LoL dat shit was wakk 2 1/10

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/

^^ wow shit aint even rhyme 0/10

i aint goin on dis shit was wakk confidential won hiz linez rhymed and he came harder n hiz verse

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kid u cant be fuckin serious.........bullets and bets doesnt rhyme......does lets and bets rhyme? correct me if im wrong but bulLETS does have lets in it doesnt it? and lets rhymes with gets....u r seriously fucking wack.....and the kid had one bar that didnt rhyme his 2nd.....gats and crack...and supposedly my first didnt even tho it did........that was one fuckin wack vote.....i mean seriously i can take it if the kid beat me, but not for a fucken retarded reason as that my opener doesnt rhyme even tho it does..........UNBELIEVABLY WACK

yo dont fight with the voters just take it as them helping out and learn from it and get back to the lab and write something even better word...

thanks for the vote upp'in for a couple more

helping me out? how is he helping me out? he gave us no advice watsoever but rather bashed our verses and is a fucknig retard for thinking that bets and bullets doesnt rhyme......

and a further not if u dont get the firs tline then dont vote........our example here being newkid

upp'in for more votes and christyle chill already no need to get all worked up ova a little battle....


upp'in for more votes

Voted For: ~christyles~

hey this was some good shit nice punches and ya structure was bad i had a hard time following it but it was decent

con that was straight but you cpuld have came harder my vote chrystal

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weak votes are lame..............................