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MarvJay1009 | 5 | 100.00% | |
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05-22-05, 02:24 PM | #1 |
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MarvJay1009 vs Bonecollector
IP: 0AE0 3B1A
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05-22-05, 02:30 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:30 PM.
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05-22-05, 09:01 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 09:01 PM.
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05-22-05, 09:25 PM | #4 |
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
I'll Drop A Bomb.. We All Know 1009 Is A Long Way Gone.. Bone Will Murder This Guy-Dirty.....
I'll BE Drunk On Baccardy.. But Sover Enough To Know That Jay/YAY Is Only Popular On Surpise-Partys!!.. I Got Knifes And Guns.. Marv Be Ready-To-Feel-Them.. You Locked In My Bars.. And You Aint Heading-Towards-Freedom.. You Dont Have To Be Smart To Know That *Nightmare is only dangerous* When Freedy-Is-In-Them!!.. (User Tittle) Dawg Foreal.. No-Hate.. Bones Will Crush Your Thoughs, Leaving You Completely Empty On Ya Souls-Fate.. I Aint A Math Teacher.. But I Know That On A Downscale *I AM After 10-09*.. Like 0-8!!.. (Think About It)* I'm Fast With Punches Like Tyson On A Corvette.. Massing With Bones?.. Holmes... That You'LL Regret.. You'll- Fall In This Thead.. That Hes *Initials Are M.J*.. Dont Mean This Guy Got Balls On The Net!!.. (OMG KO) Get off the fucking net you damn nerd...get your self a life..Cus the only ill you'd Get Is If You Caught H.I.V. ...................Wait i forget you cant get a girl , Cus the Only way Marv feel's complete is by coming to R.V** you can tell he bites,just Look How Fat His Stomach Looks,Cus after reading my verse Marvs gonna be well shook Im Throughin a fire punchlines that changes into a hook,So Watch Me Drop ''Marv'el,Like Fallin Comic Books... --------------------------------------------------------------- * Hes name ends with 1009.. what follows that?.. 08 (10-09-08) **MaRvjay1009
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05-23-05, 11:11 AM | #5 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk!
he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.* been on rv 2 years still no1 notice dis clown,when im holdin da pound. talk slick ima do like "dogs in back yard's" & put "BONE in da ground". ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst. do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE? no..ya like da "garbage train"..ya "tracks" are all "trash". when i break BONEs i dont mean da "weather" but u gon "four-cast". your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin. like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin". dude stop..u'll neva be b.i.g or even 2 pac..watch you flop. da only time u'll be "ON da radio" is "sittin on ya boom box". *i battled him on rap knowledge.com and he spit mimesis verse rom dis site and got banned..bone's name on there was game
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05-23-05, 01:19 PM | #6 |
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
^Wrong Bones...nice fack personal/punch, there also another bonecollector like the one on HHG..and Rk..im Capone there..Pz.
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05-23-05, 01:38 PM | #7 | |
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 20EE 3FFA
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Aight Check It... BoneCollector: I'll Drop A Bomb.. We All Know 1009 Is A Long Way Gone.. Bone Will Murder This Guy-Dirty..... I'll BE Drunk On Baccardy.. But Sover Enough To Know That Jay/YAY Is Only Popular On Surpise-Partys!!.. Tried To Play His Name but Didn't Work..4/10 I Got Knifes And Guns.. Marv Be Ready-To-Feel-Them.. You Locked In My Bars.. And You Aint Heading-Towards-Freedom.. You Dont Have To Be Smart To Know That *Nightmare is only dangerous* When Freedy-Is-In-Them!!.. (User Tittle) Wow..Not A Good Bar...3/10 Dawg Foreal.. No-Hate.. Bones Will Crush Your Thoughs, Leaving You Completely Empty On Ya Souls-Fate.. I Aint A Math Teacher.. But I Know That On A Downscale *I AM After 10-09*.. Like 0-8!!.. (Think About It)* Was Ok....6/10 I'm Fast With Punches Like Tyson On A Corvette.. Massing With Bones?.. Holmes... That You'LL Regret.. You'll- Fall In This Thead.. That Hes *Initials Are M.J*.. Dont Mean This Guy Got Balls On The Net!!.. (OMG KO) Man Its A Good Metaphor but Used LIke Crazy 5/10 Get off the fucking net you damn nerd...get your self a life..Cus the only ill you'd Get Is If You Caught H.I.V. ...................Wait i forget you cant get a girl , Cus the Only way Marv feel's complete is by coming to R.V** Whoa..Wack...Come On Man..3/10 you can tell he bites,just Look How Fat His Stomach Looks,Cus after reading my verse Marvs gonna be well shook Im Throughin a fire punchlines that changes into a hook,So Watch Me Drop ''Marv'el,Like Fallin Comic Books... Hmm..ok 5/10 Overall: 26/60 MarvJay1009: dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk! he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.* Blah..Ok Personal..5/10 been on rv 2 years still no1 notice dis clown,when im holdin da pound. talk slick ima do like "dogs in back yard's" & put "BONE in da ground". Nice Punch Man..8/10 ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst. do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE? Um..This Just Leads Into Next Bar..3/10 no..ya like da "garbage train"..ya "tracks" are all "trash". when i break BONEs i dont mean da "weather" but u gon "four-cast". Decent Metaphors..Ok Punch..5/10 your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin. like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin". Nice..7/10 dude stop..u'll neva be b.i.g or even 2 pac..watch you flop. da only time u'll be "ON da radio" is "sittin on ya boom box". Blah..Ok..5/10 Overall: 33/60 My Vote: MarvJay1009 Bonecollector Your Lines Are Really Stretched and Your Concepts Are There, but Your Creativitie and Wording Is What Causes Your Verse To Fall. Just Elevate On That.. ~R~ |
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05-23-05, 05:22 PM | #8 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
IP: D3A8 E65C
polllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssssssssssss
tyte ass battle yall
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LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2) Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
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05-23-05, 05:50 PM | #9 |
Home Of Philly
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
IP: 7906 D4D5
lol mah nigga marv iz n da buildin bakk 2 his old self holla at him
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05-23-05, 06:44 PM | #10 |
QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
IP: 00A2 4ED0
checkin the pollz..........................................
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05-23-05, 07:49 PM | #11 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 5941 B316
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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05-23-05, 10:20 PM | #12 |
New to RV
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This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
IP: FBB6 FAC5
Both Did Real Nice..
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05-23-05, 10:41 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 0A0B B6D0
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
dis kid's fruity his own sister lends him a skirt,i remember dis jerk! he got banned from RaP KNOWLEDGE for bitin mimesis verse.* ima make dis hoe hurt,punchlines aint u they just made ya flow worst. do any1 remember dis kid when he was iNDEPH,B.L.A or PROVERSE? These two lines killed him.. wow. I have to be honest even though hes my boy.. Sweft Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-23-05, 11:11 PM | #14 | |
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 6804 D41F
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
marv took this one in my opinon he had better punchelines structre was a lil off at times but still worked flow was good personals were on point and hit hard wordplay was real good best line----your gassed!...gettin fame battlin noobs whut da fuck u doin. like u got "cpu problems" cuzz with a 'gun' in ya fist u got "trouble-shootin". 7.5/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-24-05, 01:04 AM | #15 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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