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Chief | 5 | 100.00% | |
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05-28-05, 11:38 PM | #1 |
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Chief vs josh654789
IP: 28AD 5545
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-31-05 at 11:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
05-28-05, 11:39 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
josh654789 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 11:39 PM.
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05-29-05, 12:01 AM | #3 |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
this nigga chief tryin ta battle. what the fuck is a chief?
iight chief imma cook you like a chief, aint even gotta pop ya, ta put ya body ta rest, i aint even gotta kill ya by shootin ya in the chest, so fuck a vest, you tryin ta school me, you know i passed the test, have you drinkin so much you passed out, we both know you butt, kuz you assed out, i be posted on the block like a street sign, you tryin ta hustle, so imma take mines, have you runnin so i pop your spine, you fucked now, kuz you used your last life line, imma roast you like jada did fifty, dont think i wont come after ya jus kuz im tipsy, yea so wut if im drunk,you tryin ta stunt, ended up wit your best boys body in the trunk. put a price on your head, dont need ta kill you, somebody else gonna end up dead, ($)1,000 , your kid duct taped and fucked her in the mouth, ($)2 G's, your wife never seen again but nothin to brag about, 3 thousand, your best friend found naked and decapitated, ($)4 G, your broke ass buried alive kuz ur ass hate it, ($)5 thousand, you aint even worth it, imma kill ya nigga myself, kuz im the closest ta stardom then any of ya niggas felt |
05-29-05, 12:03 AM | #4 |
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo dawg my boy ate you i don't wanna hear and thing coming outta your mouth thats bull shit be serious so the boy can eat you and spit you back out
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05-30-05, 11:37 AM | #5 | |
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IP: B3BB 5DEF
Chief has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 11:37 AM.
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05-31-05, 07:48 AM | #6 |
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: Chief
It’s like you’re disabled, oh that’s why you can’t rap or sing You couldn’t take the trash out even if you jumped in the bin Lol funny + ok hit Ayo Josh, golly gosh, look opening bars and you’ve already lost Gonna kill?man if I were a “sport” I still couldn’t get “squashed” Needed re-wording good concept though Check this Six to unlimited rows of combined rhymes and words you ain’t stronger, no longer own part of rap like Paul Rosenberg Weak + too indirect I’m eating you now, all the crowd can hear is a bunch of crunches I call you the broke “lemon stand man”, you can’t throw “punches” Lol Igght You just the old prehistoric creature who eats any kind of “meat” That’s why I offered this battle to the creep and it accepted “defeat” defeat lines = filler now You wacker than getting whacked in the jaw to brake your frame Buddy you have an “ugly face” so you’ll never be “a head” of the game Safe You cheating eating a “phone” and spewing it back up to spit “lines” Come on dawg you ain’t original that’s why you’re josh654,789 Str8 personal NEXT iight chief imma cook you like a chief, aint even gotta pop ya, ta put ya body ta rest, i aint even gotta kill ya by shootin ya in the chest, so fuck a vest, you tryin ta school me, you know i passed the test, have you drinkin so much you passed out, we both know you butt, kuz you assed out, i be posted on the block like a street sign, you tryin ta hustle, so imma take mines, have you runnin so i pop your spine, you fucked now, kuz you used your last life line, imma roast you like jada did fifty, dont think i wont come after ya jus kuz im tipsy, yea so wut if im drunk,you tryin ta stunt, ended up wit your best boys body in the trunk. put a price on your head, dont need ta kill you, somebody else gonna end up dead, ($)1,000 , your kid duct taped and fucked her in the mouth, ($)2 G's, your wife never seen again but nothin to brag about, 3 thousand, your best friend found naked and decapitated, ($)4 G, your broke ass buried alive kuz ur ass hate it, ($)5 thousand, you aint even worth it, imma kill ya nigga myself, kuz im the closest ta stardom then any of ya niggas felt Ok basicaly i tried to break this down but the structure was fucked up almost u went off bragging + Filler maybe a bit of a song of filler i dont know def not a battle verse thought Voted for chief Chief please would you return an unbiased favour on me vs accomplish |
05-31-05, 07:52 AM | #7 | |
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IP: 667F 22FB
Voted For: Chief
Yo Diz Iz 2 EZ........ It’s like you’re disabled, oh that’s why you can’t rap or sing You couldn’t take the trash out even if you jumped in the bin Ayo Josh, golly gosh, look opening bars and you’ve already lost Gonna kill?man if I were a “sport” I still couldn’t get “squashed” Check this Six to unlimited rows of combined rhymes and words you ain’t stronger, no longer own part of rap like Paul Rosenberg I’m eating you now, all the crowd can hear is a bunch of crunches I call you the broke “lemon stand man”, you can’t throw “punches” You just the old prehistoric creature who eats any kind of “meat” That’s why I offered this battle to the creep and it accepted “defeat” You wacker than getting whacked in the jaw to brake your frame Buddy you have an “ugly face” so you’ll never be “a head” of the game You cheating eating a “phone” and spewing it back up to spit “lines” Come on dawg you ain’t original that’s why you’re josh654,789 Dat Verse Vs.. iight chief imma cook you like a chief, aint even gotta pop ya, ta put ya body ta rest, i aint even gotta kill ya by shootin ya in the chest, so fuck a vest, you tryin ta school me, you know i passed the test, have you drinkin so much you passed out, we both know you butt, kuz you assed out, i be posted on the block like a street sign, you tryin ta hustle, so imma take mines, have you runnin so i pop your spine, you fucked now, kuz you used your last life line, imma roast you like jada did fifty, dont think i wont come after ya jus kuz im tipsy, yea so wut if im drunk,you tryin ta stunt, ended up wit your best boys body in the trunk. put a price on your head, dont need ta kill you, somebody else gonna end up dead, ($)1,000 , your kid duct taped and fucked her in the mouth, ($)2 G's, your wife never seen again but nothin to brag about, 3 thousand, your best friend found naked and decapitated, ($)4 G, your broke ass buried alive kuz ur ass hate it, ($)5 thousand, you aint even worth it, imma kill ya nigga myself, kuz im the closest ta stardom then any of ya niggas felt Creative Witty Punz Frum Chief, Diz Josh Guy Self Glorified 2 Much & Dint Focus Enuff Punches & Personals 2 Trouble Chief, Chiefs Verse Wuz Much Mo' Complex In The Disses & Wordplay, Itz A Landslide, There Aint No Way Chief Can Lose Diz 1, Good Job Chief Focus On Yo Oppenent Wid Ya Disses & Verse Josh & u'll Be Iight Dawg Vote=Chief+Much Better Verse On Da Whole Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature
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05-31-05, 02:53 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 86EF 582B
Voted For: Chief
Ok, chief won this with his first 2 bars. Josh: Weak punches, no real personals, and a lot of self glorification. You need to elevate fast man. No wordplay, just crappy multis and a bad flow. I liked nothing in this verse. Chief: Decent verse, a few good wordplays, decent punches and personals. Your closer was kinda funny to me, but you need to work on ya wording. Your verses could be a lot better if your wording was switched around. v-Chief
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05-31-05, 05:25 PM | #9 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
Voted For: Chief
no competition, you blew the kid out the thread. nice shit. his shit was elementary school. i mean i dont even need to explain this battle really. you had some good punches, the flow was aight., the lines were a bit stretched but its all good. you had some puller. and ya fill wasnt all that bad. nice kill. good luck in RV. vote: sheif
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05-31-05, 10:03 PM | #10 |
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This was feedback posted for josh654789
IP: 0825 899A
i unno mayne i liked um both. but i think that josh kills him at the end. the whole price on his head. im liking the idea of that.
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06-01-05, 08:59 AM | #11 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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This was feedback posted for Chief
IP: 042E 9E4C
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06-02-05, 02:02 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 5C4D 935C
Voted For: Chief
I gonna go with Chief on this one, decent battle, good punches by both of yall. Josh i liked the openin verse that was a hot drop, alrready set the scene for what u bout, so fuck a vest, you tryin ta school me, you know i passed the test, have you drinkin so much you passed out, we both know you butt, kuz you assed out, ^^^^ Liked that, but if you concentrated 2 more lines or him I think u cudda won it, well played Chief you came strong, I didnt really feel the opening but the rest pure sickness at top level. You just the old prehistoric creature who eats any kind of “meat” That’s why I offered this battle to the creep and it accepted “defeat” You wacker than getting whacked in the jaw to brake your frame Buddy you have an “ugly face” so you’ll never be “a head” of the game You cheating eating a “phone” and spewing it back up to spit “lines” Come on dawg you ain’t original that’s why you’re josh654,789 This was the best bit out of this battle, gr8 stuff man, RTF on my battle with BIG DAWG AND/OR WITH MURDZ
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