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07-23-05, 04:45 PM | #1 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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Diary of Hip-Hop
IP: 4673 04CC
u can never kill me.
I am the motion of the mighty river, I have taken, I am the giver, made a sir of a nigger, I am rhythm and rhyme, I keep u dancin', took some thugz lives away and put others in mansions, I have no race but the one to the top, I answer to no preacher, politician, or cop, I am the vision of your fore fathers and the dream of your youth, I'm on your block, on your t.v., and in a booth, I spread hate, love, truth, and lie, I bring down a people, but sometimes I help to open their eyez, I've been broke, I've also had a waiter on call, I am life and have lived it, whether "Biggie" or "Small", I'm garbage to some, and to some I'm music, I'm genius, and the ability to use it, I'm beef on the streets, both a riff and a crack, but when I'm truly understood you'll see I'm bigger than that. -Chip
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07-23-05, 04:46 PM | #2 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 4673 04CC
Comments and criticism welcome
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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07-23-05, 04:49 PM | #3 | ||||||
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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nice topic, flow and structure were off here and there but thats easily fixed, and the lines in bold are my favourite! peace!
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07-23-05, 05:08 PM | #4 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 657A EA41
go and feedback on someone else's piece and pm me your link.....new rules fam...also every "up" requires a link...
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