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08-29-05, 11:09 AM | #1 |
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fraud vs Vaskez
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting No bullshit Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-29-05 at 11:39 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
08-29-05, 11:12 AM | #2 | |
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fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 11:12 AM.
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08-29-05, 11:15 AM | #3 | |
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Vaskez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 11:15 AM.
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08-29-05, 11:33 AM | #4 |
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The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it blah... |
08-29-05, 11:35 AM | #5 |
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8 lines
Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon IF YA DON'T GET THE WORDPLAY, DON'T VOTE I don't know the quality of voting around here, so: fraudulent = fraud you lent (as in you lent out your lyrics but didn't earn/get interest from anyone) you should get it intent = in tent i.e. in a tent as opposed to in da house the rest should be obvious, ask if ya don't get
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
08-29-05, 05:32 PM | #6 |
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IP: 9C57 2EC3
Yo let's get some votes. Leave a link I'll vote on your battle if you vote honestly and fairly
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
08-29-05, 06:06 PM | #7 |
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Voted For: Vaskez
The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter 2....not a punch...self glorifing Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline 4....played out concept...... u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em 3....horrible punch vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it 3.....omg....u serious? Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack 5...ok wordplay I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it 7.....good punch and a good set-up along with it My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" 6....good wordplay in punch..but set-up was gay Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon 5...ok well..this was really one-sided.Fraud.That 1st bar with the bread and butter...not a punch..that's self-glorifing.That trampoline line was a played concept.Plus it had filler with that pointless original part.And the rash/trowin rocks lines...weak. Vote-Vaskez Rtf below in 3 days or this vote will be removed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206520 |
08-30-05, 06:40 AM | #8 |
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Peace, hope y'all getting the forté line (it's forté not fort ) up
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
08-31-05, 10:06 AM | #9 |
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upp'in upp'in upp'in upp'inupp'in upp'in upp'in upp'inupp'in upp'in upp'in upp'in
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08-31-05, 04:48 PM | #10 |
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voting is wack here......
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
08-31-05, 06:32 PM | #11 | |
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Voted For: Vaskez
Vaskez, nice verse...good wordplay and punchlines were aiight. fraud, u need alot of work on ur flow dude...i cant catch it at all. v/vaskez RtF...if possible...battles are in my sig~~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Urban Expression ayo...we need ppl come and check it out Can You Do Us A Favour And Vote (2)Ikaros vs Aitz(0) I Will RTF |
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09-01-05, 07:37 AM | #12 |
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links have been voted on. uppin
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
09-01-05, 11:36 AM | #13 | |
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Voted For: Vaskez
The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter Wordplay was alright here actually, not a good punch though Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline Stretched and I didn't like it u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em Not bad, bit of a played concept though vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it Not bad, best line of your verse Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack Yeah I liked this, nice wordplay, you should take the ...'s out though, cos they make it seem stretched I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it Not bad, decent homonym My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" Pretty nice, original concept and worded well, same about the ...'s though Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon Decent again, good closer Vaskez got this pretty easily, was better in every category and had nice concepts and punches. v/ Vaskez Fraud, could you drop a vote in my battle please: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206973 |
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09-01-05, 06:49 PM | #14 |
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: 9C57 2EC3
up biatches!.....
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
09-02-05, 09:06 AM | #15 |
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up man votes keep getting DQ'd - vote properly !!!
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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