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Technique | 1 | 16.67% | |
blisss | 5 | 83.33% | |
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11-16-05, 06:34 PM | #1 | |
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blisss vs Technique
IP: AEE8 69E1
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11-16-05, 06:36 PM | #2 | |
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IP: BBBE 108B
Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-05 06:36 PM.
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11-16-05, 06:52 PM | #3 | |
dope
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IP: BBBE 108B
time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss
because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss I chop up your flows and I'm gonna murder you you try to rap but nobody has even heard of you your to a light weight with no skills and I'ma make u retired shit i'll even be ur new ghost writer and allow u 2 have me hired did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume bitch im'a do what ur dad did to you and thats beat ur head wid a broom wow look at your score your a rookie and a pussy you'll probably bite ur lines but my punchlines leave holes in ya tooshie |
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11-16-05, 06:53 PM | #4 | |
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IP: AEE8 69E1
blisss has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-05 06:53 PM.
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11-16-05, 06:54 PM | #5 | |
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IP: AEE8 69E1
you're weak dude, what are you thinking, you must be confused
cause no one wants a technique...of how to fucking lose frontin like you're hard, but your whackness is the only thing thats scary you can call yourself sly, but i guess skill is the canary your rhymes czar whack, you're shit can't compare to mine you're so quick to fall, and it seems to russia little more everytime you like southpark, well i can see you as cartman, its true cause you're probly a fat bitch, but also RV can't fucking stan you now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx eat shit, bitch
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11-16-05, 07:00 PM | #6 | |
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IP: AEE8 69E1
you just got owned mutha fuckah!
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11-16-05, 07:06 PM | #7 | |
dope
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IP: BBBE 108B
lol we'll see what everyone else has to say dick head.
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11-16-05, 07:23 PM | #8 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 9F3B 0487
Voted For: blisss
Technique-Ok..your bassically making some dumb ass punches.Your concepts MAY have potential,but your wording was horrible.Look at your first bar..your bassically just saying shit becuz it rhymes.Your focusing on getting those internals in there as opposed to wording your punches to hit harder.And that lady's perfume line...that sounds like something a 2th grader would say in the caferteria while talking shit with his buddies. WEAK VERSE Blisss-Way better verse than technique's.As soon as I read your verse bar,I knew the battle was done due to technique dropping garbage,YourWeakest bar was your 2nd one,with the canary one..and that wasn't even that bad. So.. Vote-Blisss RTF in my battle with Nick Flethcher |
11-16-05, 07:47 PM | #9 |
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This was feedback posted for Technique
IP: AEE8 69E1
checking the polls for some reason................
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11-16-05, 08:06 PM | #10 | |
dope
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IP: BBBE 108B
wack vote natural but im used to you riding on people's dicks
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11-17-05, 09:31 AM | #11 |
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IP: AEE8 69E1
uppin for blisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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11-17-05, 01:06 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 76BC 47C7
Voted For: blisss
blisss you're weak dude, what are you thinking, you must be confused cause no one wants a technique...of how to fucking lose Coo... frontin like you're hard, but your whackness is the only thing thats scary you can call yourself sly, but i guess skill is the canary Nice.. your rhymes czar whack, you're shit can't compare to mine you're so quick to fall, and it seems to russia little more everytime I like it.. you like southpark, well i can see you as cartman, its true cause you're probly a fat bitch, but also RV can't fucking stan you Never seen South Park wordplay before.. now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx Nice...most people probs won't get that though.. Technique time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss That was so fuckin' shitty its unbelievable I chop up your flows and I'm gonna murder you you try to rap but nobody has even heard of you So played from 1983 your to a light weight with no skills and I'ma make u retired shit i'll even be ur new ghost writer and allow u 2 have me hired don't self glory, + shitty punch did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume bitch im'a do what ur dad did to you and thats beat ur head wid a broom My eyes are starting to bleed from wackness wow look at your score your a rookie and a pussy you'll probably bite ur lines but my punchlines leave holes in ya tooshie dalkcalkdfa soosr...sorry couldn't see the keyboard, too much blood Vote: blisss It was one sided, I didn't enjoy Techniques drop at all.. |
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11-17-05, 01:07 PM | #13 | |
in your system
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IP: AEE8 69E1
Voted For: blisss
polls bitches........................................... ....................
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11-22-05, 08:09 PM | #14 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 9BA0 A53F
Voted For: Technique
Overall: Both verses were weak..seems like u 2 didnt take this 2 serious....Tec...u did better against me!! wad upp...."did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume" whats up with that...? overall Tec....ur opener was better..and flowed better 2...i gotta say..ur punches were stronger as well... Bliss I liked ur closing 2 lines...stronger then Tec's ----------- Best Lines Tec: time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss Bliss: now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx -------------------- RTV, Honestly One.
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11-23-05, 07:45 AM | #15 | |
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Voted For: blisss
T verse was very basic, didnt have no complexity, flowed alright at times but did lose it at others. I feel that u need to work on your punches a lot more and work on personals look up Bliss check his bio check some of the stuff he has posted on the site. Try getting in his head and ripping him. time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss ^This isn't a punch **filler**^ I chop up your flows and I'm gonna murder you you try to rap but nobody has even heard of you ^I liked this bar but again its not a punch^ your to a light weight with no skills and I'ma make u retired shit i'll even be ur new ghost writer and allow u 2 have me hired ^Kind of got the concept but it didnt come across right u need to think about what your writing son, it didnt flow right as well this bar^ did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume bitch im'a do what ur dad did to you and thats beat ur head wid a broom ^This isn't a punch, try using personals, it will give your verse a lot more effect. wow look at your score your a rookie and a pussy you'll probably bite ur lines but my punchlines leave holes in ya tooshie ^Nice and witty the best bar u droped.. not a bad verse but I expect alot more from u as u have been on this site for almost two years now. Bliss ~ to be fair and no hate on to but I read your first bar and u won on that alone... the bar flowed well, the punch hit hard and u used a personal. the basics of text battling. you're weak dude, what are you thinking, you must be confused cause no one wants a technique...of how to fucking lose ^Ha ha nice punch and personal !! ^^ won the battle already^ frontin like you're hard, but your whackness is the only thing thats scary you can call yourself sly, but i guess skill is the canary ^^Nice and wity I got the concept but u needed a little more work on the dilivery^^ your rhymes czar whack, you're shit can't compare to mine you're so quick to fall, and it seems to russia little more everytime ^^ ha ha this was a nice bar flowed well and witty^^ you like southpark, well i can see you as cartman, its true cause you're probly a fat bitch, but also RV can't fucking stan you ^^ again flowed well not really a punch in my eyes try workin on personals as well. now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx ^^ I think I got this haha it's an alright bar nice closed flowed alright but your verse won this battle with ease.. Vote ~ Bliss |
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