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12-12-05, 05:41 PM | #1 | ||||
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7. Natural Killa vs. 8. Vaskez
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12-12-05, 06:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: 1B1A 2E89
check son
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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12-13-05, 02:55 PM | #3 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 7358 2969
checking in....
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12-13-05, 03:16 PM | #4 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: FF07 58ED
Punching dope is simple to most people, I can too
N it's easy to Killa...kid in PLL that's as wack as you drop early man
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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12-13-05, 03:25 PM | #5 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 7358 2969
Ya kin's nothing but failures,so let's hope your the last crop
cuz your family is full of more scrubs....than a craft shop |
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12-13-05, 04:04 PM | #6 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 9702 F6BA
Hmm, close battle here, tough call
Vaskez, I felt yours was just too simple. The concept was good, but I felt you could have done more with it. NK, the scrubs wordplay was decent, but the flaw was that you said his family rather than him which makes the punch a bit more indirect. Either way, I felt after thinking about it, NK's just hit harder and was meaner. Vote - NK |
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12-13-05, 07:02 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: F019 583F
Played concept vs Meh nameplay..
Uhhh... Vote: Meh nameplay (Vaskez) |
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12-14-05, 08:37 PM | #8 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: 5F2C AA8F
You guys made this one tough man, damn. Uh, Vask punch was simple, but it was also fresh. never seen it before, and the set-up for it was dope. NK had a decent concept, decent wordplay, iunno though I wasn't feeling the wording. And vask had that more appealing RB style to me. But Vask used one of those i'll beat you type lines, i'll kill him so bad, i'll whore em so good that, wtv, you know what I mean. But also the you got more.... then a .... type line is also crappy. Omfg, this one is tough to call. Well also, NK is battling Vask, not his familly, so it's inderect but still a good punch imo. Iunno, I have to go with Vask on this, wording, direct. That's what won it. REAL CLOSE though, and good battle here.
NK, for the next thread you make, make a new thing "Battle of the week" that'll be cool. Like have the top.10, but put battle of the week on also. Base it on dopeness of bars and closeness in vote count. Or do it hwv you want, it's your mag. lol, pc my homies -----_________----- v/vask
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12-14-05, 08:46 PM | #9 | ||||||
hotshh!
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IP: 888C 2BD4
Punching dope is simple to most people, I can too
N it's easy to Killa...kid in PLL that's as wack as you is a decent punch here but the nameplay is basic even worse is that the rhyme scheme is so simple which u usually accomodate for with a dope wordplay but here u used a statement as an opener and a killa play as your punch Ya kin's nothing but failures,so let's hope your the last crop cuz your family is full of more scrubs....than a craft shop your punch is pretty good as well, using a family concept into a comparison punch the rhyming was more than one syllable which is good, no real personal but then again this is Punch line league so it dont matter ^^^ *this is the most explained vote Im dropping this week* v/ NK punch had more to it, good battle still |
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12-14-05, 10:38 PM | #10 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: 5819 BBA9
aight thanks for the honest votes
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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12-15-05, 12:29 PM | #11 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: ABA7 619B
Vaskez - did not like your punch but it was ok, nothing that I thought was very good about it or made it effective as a punch....
NK - I liked your punch, maybe you could have worded it a bit better, but I liked the wordplay and it sounded a lot witter than Vaskez'... Vote - NK for a better punch |
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12-15-05, 06:34 PM | #12 | |||||
Praise The King, Peasants
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IP: 1C00 CCA1
v/ NK.. very nice wordplay.... vaskez.. liked urs too but a bit too simple
nice battle
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12-15-05, 07:47 PM | #13 | |||||||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: 5350 A834
v/nk, werd
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12-15-05, 08:16 PM | #14 | |||||||
the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
This was a weak one both had ight lines.....vas wat happened u can drop better than that...Nk....u came wit a harder hittin one...V/Nk
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12-16-05, 05:40 PM | #15 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 6DC9 282A
my v/ nk
Punchez explain themselves..............
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