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12 lines?



Im from RB

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12s good may drop more so drop first if u want it to be 12...

where u from by the way (homesite)

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2776224

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12...g/l



Listen…
I’m known for audios, topicals, text…heads say “his poems tight”
While you’re only known for a 1-3 record on your home site
I’m not bragging, believe that….I just know this emcees crap
And that I’ll always be WAY above C…Like E flat
Now I’ll up the pain more…and explain to this lame whore
How my mind shines…
While dropping wet head is the only time his brain storms
I’m a pro in owning so…you can’t go toe-to-toe kin
Cuz your rep on RV consists of free posts and a no-show win
My pen bleeds wit…you cant fuck with this G’s scripts
I’m saying…you think alliteration is a short Chinese bitch
Keep on hoping…but you’re not one of the dope breed
So your names ironic…cuz you’ll never see a ‘trophe



WOOF

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Only had time for 10.

Quick Key.


Seriously man…
You an established head? More like a fuckin net geek
But if you want a 1 on 1, just look at your record next week
Fucker… can’t handle beef, don’t act like we’re friends ho
Ill easily dismantle DS, like I just smashed my Nintendo…
Never gettin anywhere dude, on the real you’re wack buck
I excel cuz im dope… you excel cuz you’re a fat fuck
Take some advice, quit text cuz ure the wrong sort
And in terms of wackness? You musta signed up for the long course…
Poor fuck, claim to be tough but show no stab at proof
But if your versatile… it’s no surprise your house don’t have a roof

G/L

Pz.

Listen…
I’m known for audios, topicals, text…heads say “his poems tight”
While you’re only known for a 1-3 record on your home site
----EH... TOO SIMPLE

I’m not bragging, believe that….I just know this emcees crap
And that I’ll always be WAY above C…Like E flat
-----------HAHA DOPE

Now I’ll up the pain more…and explain to this lame whore
How my mind shines…
While dropping wet head is the only time his brain storms
--------------------NAW...

I’m a pro in owning so…you can’t go toe-to-toe kin
Cuz your rep on RV consists of free posts and a no-show win
--------------EH

My pen bleeds wit…you cant fuck with this G’s scripts
I’m saying…you think alliteration is a short Chinese bitch
-------------------HAHAHAH ..THATS A STRETCH BUT OK

Keep on hoping…but you’re not one of the dope breed
So your names ironic…cuz you’ll never see a ‘trophe
-------------------EH.. COULDA BE WORDED WAY BETTER



DA SEIN

Seriously man…
You an established head? More like a fuckin net geek
But if you want a 1 on 1, just look at your record next week
---------------EH

Fucker… can’t handle beef, don’t act like we’re friends ho
Ill easily dismantle DS, like I just smashed my Nintendo…
-------------------DECENT

Never gettin anywhere dude, on the real you’re wack buck
I excel cuz im dope… you excel cuz you’re a fat fuck
------------THIS LINE IS WACK BUCK

Take some advice, quit text cuz ure the wrong sort
And in terms of wackness? You musta signed up for the long course…
----------------------OK

Poor fuck, claim to be tough but show no stab at proof
But if your versatile… it’s no surprise your house don’t have a roof
------------------OK CLOSER


YEAH.. BITH HAD SOME WACK SHIT A COOL COUPLE LINES. dA SEINS GOOD LINES WERE WAY BETTER THO..

VOTE = DA SEIN

I’m not bragging, believe that….I just know this emcees crap
And that I’ll always be WAY above C…Like E flat
My pen bleeds wit…you cant fuck with this G’s scripts
I’m saying…you think alliteration is a short Chinese bitch

vs

Fucker… can’t handle beef, don’t act like we’re friends ho
Ill easily dismantle DS, like I just smashed my Nintendo…


vote-Da sein, he just had better punches overall, i like that E flat line, that shit made me laugh and Castastrophe had that ninentdo line and that was it.

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Never gettin anywhere dude, on the real you’re wack buck
I excel cuz im dope… you excel cuz you’re a fat fuck

vs

I’m not bragging, believe that….I just know this emcees crap
And that I’ll always be WAY above C…Like E flat
Now I’ll up the pain more…and explain to this lame whore
How my mind shines…
While dropping wet head is the only time his brain storms

v the sein was just more consistent this week , both had their share of misses though

da sein barely won this, i didnt like this battle to much. both came blah x4. goodluck to both of you next week.

v: da

I’m not bragging, believe that….I just know this emcees crap
And that I’ll always be WAY above C…Like E flat

vs

Fucker… can’t handle beef, don’t act like we’re friends ho
Ill easily dismantle DS, like I just smashed my Nintendo…

v/sein...only by a little

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Short battle, but it's close. Da Sein verse had more pesonal shots, Catastrophe's two best punches were generic ones. I always prefer personals over generic punches, so I'm leaning towards da sein on this one. That played DS nameplay kinda hurt C's verse in my opinion.

vote - da sein

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first of all...

for someone who has six psots and 'new to RV' this obviously isnt is home site lolz. but what made it more obvvious is that he said he was from RB in the post above seins verse :S

but anyways

basically imo seins personals were weak, and im not counting the fact that he didnt realise cat said he was from rb. but yeah they were too simple for me. his other pucnhes were good but they werent amazing. youve dropped better, i thought u'd elevated but im not so sure anymore, i dunno. the e minor line was the best i think.

cats verse i enjopyed alot more. but i have to say alot of it was played. XL is mad played. more generic stuff but obviously u didnt realise, i do that sometimes and someone will come in like OMFG THATS PLAYED SHIZZLE HOW COULD U DROP THAT. so yeah its generic but you probably didnt know. the DS was cool ive never seen that on sein, ive seeen it/used it on other peoples names but yeah it was ok for this battle. i did like the 1 on 1 thing i havnt seen that b4

so i came in, read the battle and thought i was gonnna give it to cat. but then i realised how generic everything was. the votring in this battle doesnt really tell the tale.
but i have to agree with everyone else and vote for sein cos he was more original. cat tried acouple of play of words, pulled the versatile one off i tihnk but yeah XL is played man lol

vote/ sein

close battle

dont hav much time to vote..

sein just had alittle more in this one, more polished.. etc,

v sein

I’m a pro in owning so…you can’t go toe-to-toe kin
Cuz your rep on RV consists of free posts and a no-show win

Keep on hoping…but you’re not one of the dope breed
So your names ironic…cuz you’ll never see a ‘trophe

felt your verse that alliteration line was alittle stretched..nice verse tho..cool

vs

castrophe


Take some advice, quit text cuz ure the wrong sort
And in terms of wackness? You musta signed up for the long course…


verse was ok...shit wasn't bad just not any hard hitting shit even the line i quoted was ok...got potential..da sein had better verse

vote-da sein